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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
aww lovely n cute update


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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
mindblowing update.
so geet took the 1st step but whatever it is I just loved maan's confession.
eagerly waiting to know what is geet gonna tell now. do continue soon.
Edited by Jeba.Rahman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Good to see Maan in a different role. Nice sweet romantic story. Geet is taking the first step . Maan's confession is good. Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 7
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry frnd...actually having sem exams...so...ok then finally here is the last update...enjoy it

Part 8

"maan even I have to confess something to u" geet said.

"haan bolo geet" maan said.

"do u know when I saw u first time?" geet asked.

Maan looked at her confused.

geet chuckled "ok don't worry….not before u saw me ofcourse"

maan smiled a bit and she continued "I saw u first time in a disco in delhi after a good 5 months of meera's marriage day…..u r with u frnds……not are not enjoying the day at all and u were often watching ur mobile…"

"oh that day….yes I remember its one of my frnd's b'day party……….. I refused to go to disco…… u know now …..but they pushed me and I finally had to accept but u know I was not at all interested." Maan said.

"u know what I thought of u that day maan?" geet chuckled remembering that time.

"what?" maan asked curiously.

"I thought ur gf ditched u as u continuously looking at ur cell….i thought ur waiting for her to call or u wanted to call but u cant" geet chuckled yet again.

Maan chuckled too "u know what geet….these are the same words adi said me that day"

"ya I know" geet smiled. " actually I started at u all the time I was in disco and after few minutes I saw u ur friend walked to u. I dunno y but I wanted to hear so I reached near u on the desk at the bar and…… and…." Geet hesitated.

"u eavesdropped" maan grinned and geet nodded slightly embarrassed.

" then?" maan asked wanting to hear it from her.

"then ur friend came to u and said u r behaving like a devdas who was left alone by parvati and sadly u don't even hav one gf till now" geet chuckled.

"its not funny okay…I had my count…..i had many gf's before" maan frowned as if a child.

Geet chuckled again "u know what! u r so cute when u like this" geet pulled his cheeks.

"CUTE!!!!!!" maan looked at her bewildered.

"yes….cutepie" geet giggled.

"no way" maan said and pushed her hands.

"do u want me to continue or not?" geet asked him faking anger.

"fine" maan sighed.

"so I ….. I don't know why I felt good listening to that piece of info but my mood just turned super good that day…. And I just did a small dance…..but never kept my eyes away from…..i dunno y but I was seriously attracted to u…." geet said

"what did u observed the first in me?" maan said.

Geet looked down….maan couldn't see whether she is smiling or serious or thinking

"geet" he said and she looked up with a smile this time " u say first"

"its my question" maan said.

Geet just nodded negatively and maan sighed. He know she wont leave.

" ur eyes….they r deep….so deep….i thought I am drowning in them" maan smiled looking at her eyes.

"so u" maan said and geet blushed instantly.

"I don't think I will say that…..ever" geet blushed more looking down.

Maan looked at her perplexed and said " don't tell me u fell for my body"

Geet looked up instantly and said " that is one of the reasons ofcourse" and blushed.

Maan blushed too "then whats main one"

"I m not saying reasons…..am i? I m just saying what made me look at u the whole night at disco" geet blushed more.

"say it geet plz" maan said.

"it'll be embarrassing for both u know" geet said.

"it wont be….why will it be….we r going to get married and u know couple don't keep secrets" he passed at smiled to her.

She blushed yet again and said hesitantly " ur….."

"my!!!"

"ur…ur lips" geet turned completely crimson red and maan chuckled seeing at her.

"elaborate geet….plz" maan said.

"don't do this to me maan" geet said.

"I thought I m the coward here" maan said.

"u know u r not….only that u need some push" geet said purposefully completely knowing what he is indicatine to…the date.

"well then say it my little brave girl" maan chuckled.

"hmm….ohh…i…i…mean….well……actually ur lips….u know they…I mean they r….M shapped and good curvey…..perfectly shaped by god and…….and ….when…u…laugh….its…..its completely…..completly…" geet trailed off but maan dint let her stop.

"completely?" he asked back.

"irresistible" geet blushed more making maan chuckle.

"I said its embarrassing" geet said.

"no its not….u know I feel so awesome to hear it from u" maan smiled genuinely as geet looked at him smiling.

"then?" he took back the convo to the paused part.

"well then I never saw u again but always wanted to see u….its like I just cant take u from my brain……perhaps heart…but its too early to say something like that then…isn't it?" geet said.

Maan nodded.

"then suddenly after so many long months of my quarrel with my brain I decided to make me busy and erase u from my memory and that is when u appeared from nowhere infront of my apartment carrying a bag……I was more than shocked to see u there…..at first I thought I m imagining u and I literally scolded my brain rather think heart. I closed my ears and went back to my room from the balcony and I kept my coffee back on the table and I controlled my senses after few minuted I walked back to balcony to verify and there were none at the entrance and so I continued with my work watering the plants…….after nearly an hour I made my way to the bus stand and again there I saw u behind me….i glanced at u from corner of my eyes and I saw u staring at me….well again I thought I was mad but when an old man bumped into u and the file in ur had fell down I confirmed u r really there…… u looked down collecting the papers and I saw u….actually stared at u and then as u got up I don't want to be caught so I looked away and started to walk."

" oh so that's y u r still there even I look 5 long minutes to pick up the papers….u know I thought u left" maan smiled.

Geet smiled back " then I saw u almost every day…..as I went out to joking u were there then at bus stop even the same bus…..i was literally jumping for the conincidences…..but it only dawned on me after a good 3 months the u were actually…."following me"" maan smiled.

"then?"

"then I secretly watched u whenever u r not watching me and literally danced in my flat celebrating that u were really watching me…..i waited so long that u will come and speak to me but u always staid away and finally after a long 1 year u came and speak to me……then the later u know" geet smiled.

Maan looked at her lovingly and geet stared into his eyes.

"geet can I ask u one more thing?" maan asked.

"u don't need to ask permission" geet said.

"the kiss… that happened that night when u were drunk…." Maan hesitated.

"it dint happen maan….i wanted it to happen….i m in my senses" geet said looking into his eyes.

Maan smiled. He looked into her eyes then her lips and back.

" u know maan I always tried to dream how it will be when ur perfect M shaped lips will be on mine….." geet blushed.

"u experienced it last time dint u?" maan teased.

"it was a blur then" geet complained cutely.

Maan smiled at her and instantly took her lips into his and there goes another long kiss……..


THE END

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
aww...that was so loving...
loved her narration..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
whoaa confessions of geet.. nice.. no cant be the end yet yaar.. cont soon.. plzz atleast epi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
wow so she too fell for him in one glance only
at it was so cute when she said the thing she liked most about him were his lips wow embarassing much
she knew that he was following her and was hoping he would say something but he took long time to do the same right
bless that was so adorable naa
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Its superb.
I want an epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
part 8
last part
lovely part dear...
so nice...

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