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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
aisa toh nahin ho raha instead of maan proposing her she will propose him
now that i would love to see no really i would
god he still hasnt done anything about it
whta do we do woth this guy man
well lets hope he does something and soon
and that too before she finds someone else
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
i think geet s going to propose him..
maan toh kuch nahi kar sakthi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
part 6
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Awesome update
loved it
maan still hasn't proposed
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
loved the update
maan doing girly thing...to ab kya geet usse propose karne wali hai??!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Part 7

Maan asked the diver to turn to juhu beach.

As the taxi reached the beach maan called geet again.

"where exactly are u?" maan asked.

"maan ask the taxi driver to driver according to my instructions" geet said.

"instructions?" maan asked.

"haan" geet said.

Geet gave directions to maan and maan asked the driver to go as he said. After another few minutes the taxi reached a lonely place. Its dark outside and more over no one are near. Maan asked the diver to stay thinking what if geet need's help. But geet told maan to let the driver go and he did as she said and soon the driver left leaving maan standing there all alone.

"geet where r u?" maan asked.

"maan come to beach" geet said.

Maan walked straight into the beach and again geet said "turn ur left and walk"

"geet whats happening? Where r u? what happen to u?" maan asked.

"uff maan u question a lot u know?" geet smiled soflty.

"what geet?" maan asked. He is so worried thinking what happen to geet and here she is smiling softly.

"maan take ur left and walk straight" geet said.

"hmmm" maan said and turned to his left and walked few minutes and then he saw.

http://favim.com/orig/201108/28/beach-dinner-romantic-two-Favim.com-132348.jpg

words stuck in his throat and he just stood there staring when he heard a voice behind.

"maan"

Maan turned back and saw her….his love looking ever so beautiful in white saree with minimal makeup.

http://www.indya.com/publishImages/indyagallery/actors_turn_pranksters/070211064344_drashti_dhami.jpg

"geet?" maan spoke mesmerized in her.

She came near to him and kept her hand on his cheek.

"kyun maan? Kya socha tune? Ki mujhe pata nai chalega?" geet asked.

Maan looked at her confused.

"u think I wont know if u don't say" geet asked.

"geet what are u saying" maan asked.

"as if u dunno" geet said leaving maan all confused again.

"look even know u r not proceeding" geet said irritated and stepped back.

"geet" is all what maan could say.

"maan….yaar…. r u such dumb or u act so?" geet asked again irritated.

"geet I dint understand" maan said.

"no u wont understand…why will u?" geet said and looked up cribbing to her babaji "kyun babaji kyun? Why is he so dumb. Why me babaji why me…..huh I extened hand for friendship. I called him everywhere to roam…spend time….party disco or restaurant…its always me who took the first step….and even now….babaji yeh kya hai…..even today I arranged this romantic dinner and called him and even then he is not understanding what….i doubt did he ever like me!!!...when there is a couple the boy should do surprises and girl should be surprised but here everything is going reverse"

"geet" maan said surprised hearing her.

"shut up maan….ok u don't say anything….i will take the first step even today…" geet said and before maan could say something geet went on her knees surprising maan all over again.

"ok geet u can do it….juat say it….u cant hope anything from him now" geet spoke to herself before she looked into maan's eyes.

"maan…..maan….well……I wanted to say…..i….. I mean i…..i just….wanted…..to …..say….i ….i …lo.."

Maan suddenly held her hand and made her stand. Geet looked at him surprised and maan is staring at her lovingly. She smiled and he smiled back.

"I think u r saying my dialogues geet….not fair….not at all fair…" maan smiled.

Geet looked at him expectantly while maan bent on his knees. She smiled.

"geet.." maan started to say but stopped and looked at her uncertainly.

"kya hua maan?" geet asked.

"err….i don't have any ring" maan smiled stupidly.

Geet laughed at him and opened her clutch and took out a small box. Maan looked at it confused.

"sadly I know u maan…..if I wait for u to come to me and propose I will remain unmarried so I had to take this first step again and I even bought a ring for me even alng with the ring I wanted to give u today after my proposal…..so take it" geet extended the ring to maan and maan looked at her with a 'I m sorry' face but geet smiled away and asked him to continue.

"okay….so….here it is…." Maan stared into her eyes.

"u know what geet…u look so beautiful" maan said lost in geet and geet looked at him confused.

"do u know when I saw u the first time?" maan asked her.

geet nodded negatively.

"u think in Mumbai?" maan asked.

"hmm" geet said confused.

"no not in Mumbai…..i saw u first time 3 years ago….in my cousin's marriage in delhi" maan said.

"what!!!!" geet asked shocked.

"yes…..do u remember dev? He is my cousin. Ur from meera's side….i think u r her friend…..they bought meera on to the mandap and u r beside her saying something in her ear and giggling……that is the first time I saw u….u wore red color saree with minimal makeup and looking so so so beautiful…..i just stared at u the whole time even forgetting the marriage and I tried to talk to u but whenever I tried to come towards u some or the other aunties took u away and I missed u that day when u left the next day after shaadi" maan smiled remembering the times.

Geet looked at him loving.

"then I asked meera about u and they teased me a lot….but atlast meera told me ur name and details and said u stay at Mumbai. So I started to search ways to come to Mumbai but I fond none…..two years passed by meera gave me may of ur pics and I kept them with me secretly. Those two years changed my attraction towards u as love….then one day dev came to me with this job offer in mumbai and I instantly acceoted….i was so happy then….yash works in mumbai so I contacted him to search for a flat near ur flat but he just took the flat directly beside ur flat……do u know why the last person who lived in that flat left the flat??? (maan giggled) yash literally threatened him to leave the flat.(geet shocked) then we both came into the flat and I again saw u after 2 long years…..u r wearing ur shorts and tank top and watering ur plants….that was the firs scene I saw in the morning….almost everyday…..i followed u everywhere….i changed my timings according to ur timming. Where ever u go…I just followed u silently..

I loved ur eyes and the sparkle in then….ur smile….ur brightness….ur bubliness….ur non stop talks…the way u play with children…..ur anger….ur galiyan….everything in u I loved…….i thought to come and speak to u many times but the way u slapped the boy when he proposed u….i m scared….what if u slap me too (geet chuckled) but then one day I finally made the step….i….i…geet don't be mad at me (geet looked at him confused) wo….that pic….that one I showed to on the beach….i clicked it intentionally…( geet smiled 'I know') what u know….but (geet said " continue maan") hmm….then thereafter u know everything"

"so?" geet asked.

"so!!" maan said confused.

"maaan" geet said angrily.

"ok ok sorry" maan smiled.

"geet I love u…..i love u so much…..from my heart…..and I swear u I will be with u through think and thin….i will never ever leave u…..if I ever left u…think I m no more"

Geet kept a hand on his lips but maan removed the hand and spoke

"let me say it geet…..i love u and I mean it…….geet….will u be mine? Will u make me urs? Forever? Geet will u marry me?" maan extened the ring to her and geet nodded her head in yes smiling.

Maan got up and both hugged.

After a long time maan pulled geet away and held geet's hand and pushed the ring on to her finger.

"where is my ring geet?" maan asked smiling.

Geet smiled at him and took put his ring and pushed it on to his finger.

Both hugged again.

"maan even I have to confess something to u" geet said.

"haan bolo geet" maan said.

"do u know when I saw u first time?" geet asked.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
that was awesome and cute .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
lovely part..
waiting 4 geet's secret to b out..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
i knew it instead of maan doing the proposal she almost proposed him
god that was funny so we were right in thinking she invited him for this purpose only
so he didnt see her in mumbai but delhi in his cousins marriage
and has been looking for her since then huh
wonder when geet first saw him
man that was awesome had she not done this he would never have proposed her at all
well at least not for a while
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
part 6 n 7...loved it...
maan would have proposed after some 3 years if geet has not initiated..
loved their unique proposal...loved it a lot...beautiful..
OMG!!!..where did geet saw him 1st time??!!!!!please update soon

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