A humble request to all the Writers of Geet Forum - Page 18

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Oh no! What are you people saying? You are curbing my freedom of writing here. I was thinking of writing a story like this.

My track will be like, the girl will womanhandle the man, hurting him emotionally, making him feel downtrodden, venting out all feelings. Making his hands and heart blue just because he wears lungi and cannot speak English.

The girl then comes to terms with the fact that she actually likes this lungi guy and then forcefully marries him at gunpoint.

But she is not satisfied. She will make him sleep by the poolside with no pillow.

Will not give him water to bathe. Mentally abuse him dry.

And after this she realizes her mistake and then to make up for everything she gets kidnapped.

He saves her life by risking his. And hence she decides to forgive him.

But i cannot write this story now, can I?

Disclaimer : This is just intended for fun. I am not actually writing this story. Duh! The lungi guy is handsome. Everybody's heart will break.

From,

Pitch Black

Painful! Extremely painful story line .

I'm thankful to people like you who try to raise awareness.👏

A girl hating a man because he wears a lungi and can-not speak English!

Briiiant! Class difference ,Discrimination , Double standards of society.So many bloody issues! And the gun part is way too deep. It shows the raise of Illegal activities!!

And that girl finally Forgives him? 😲

That would be a very interesting as well as painful thing to read ,How this girl overcomes all the evils and tries to forgive the Lungi guy for not being able to speak English. It would be wonderful to read about her Dharam Sankat..Poor girl ,how difficult it would be ,for her to forgive him . 'DARK' emotions these are! I won't be able to take them😭

Wait did you tell that the Lungi guy is Handsome? ☺️

Forget it! Wash away all the praises that I showered on you! What the hell are you talking!

Regressive ! A man is not supposed to cry or not supposed to be a coward. A man is a man!

He should keep all his dark secrets , dark past with him always and should vent out all the frustration on his angel ! No matter how much he hurts her but he should protect her from other evils and gundas ! Never ever think of writing such things where Man submits himself. The lungi guy should be a passionate lover (Who hurts the girl) . That's it! You are not 'DARK'!

Bazinga.

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DeePEST Shade of Gray!

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Painful! Extremely painful story line .

I'm thankful to people like you who try to raise awareness.👏

A girl hating a man because he wears a lungi and can-not speak English!

Briiiant! Class difference ,Discrimination , Double standards of society.So many bloody issues! And the gun part is way too deep. It shows the raise of Illegal activities!!

And that girl finally Forgives him? 😲

That would be a very interesting as well as painful thing to read ,How this girl overcomes all the evils and tries to forgive the Lungi guy for not being able to speak English. It would be wonderful to read about her Dharam Sankat..Poor girl ,how difficult it would be ,for her to forgive him . 'DARK' emotions these are! I won't be able to take them😭

Wait did you tell that the Lungi guy is Handsome? ☺️

Forget it! Wash away all the praises that I showered on you! What the hell are you talking!

Regressive ! A man is not supposed to cry or not supposed to be a coward. A man is a man!

He should keep all his dark secrets , dark past with him always and should vent out all the frustration on his angel ! No matter how much he hurts her but he should protect her from other evils and gundas ! Never ever think of writing such things where Man submits himself. The lungi guy should be a passionate lover (Who hurts the girl) . That's it! You are not 'DARK'!

Bazinga.

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DeePEST Shade of Gray!

Originally posted by: mel420

OMG how can you give something this disgusting the name of pure love no it isn't

I am so shocked that girls can think like that

where the hell are we heading id we have started defending the biggest crime

YOU KNOW WHAT I WANNA KNOW FROM ALL THE WRITERS HERE HOW MANY KNOW R**** VICTIMS. DO YOU PEOPLE EVEN NOW WHAT YOU GUYS ARE TALKING ABOUT

I HAVE SEEN THREE VICTIMS OF IT AND TRUST ME THERE IS NO BIGGER SIN THEN THIS

Originally posted by: mel420

OMG how can you give something this disgusting the name of pure love no it isn't

I am so shocked that girls can think like that

where the hell are we heading id we have started defending the biggest crime

YOU KNOW WHAT I WANNA KNOW FROM ALL THE WRITERS HERE HOW MANY KNOW R**** VICTIMS. DO YOU PEOPLE EVEN NOW WHAT YOU GUYS ARE TALKING ABOUT

I HAVE SEEN THREE VICTIMS OF IT AND TRUST ME THERE IS NO BIGGER SIN THEN THIS

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Heya. 😊

I haven't read all the comments but I do have something to say.

I don't read many FF's here but I want to say that it's disturbing to see Rape and other forms of Sexual abuse being Glorified.

If one wants to address such Social Issues and raise awareness. That's Fine. No one would have problem with it, but the problem arises where such issues like Sexual abuse and rape are not handled properly.

It's disturbing to see a girl falling in love with her own rapist or a person who abuses her physically and mentally. Such scenes where the male protagonist (Acc to the story! ) manhandles the girl and forcefully does things to her are seen as passionate and intense which sadly is not the case. They are not at all passionate and intense, rather they are regressive.

Just because the hero(Again acc to the story! )is Maan it doesn't mean that such acts can be justified.

Originally posted by: PariNain

they are taunting mel. all of them are against ra** and violence. just read the previous comments

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Painful! Extremely painful story line .

I'm thankful to people like you who try to raise awareness.👏

A girl hating a man because he wears a lungi and can-not speak English!

Briiiant! Class difference ,Discrimination , Double standards of society.So many bloody issues! And the gun part is way too deep. It shows the raise of Illegal activities!!

And that girl finally Forgives him? 😲

That would be a very interesting as well as painful thing to read ,How this girl overcomes all the evils and tries to forgive the Lungi guy for not being able to speak English. It would be wonderful to read about her Dharam Sankat..Poor girl ,how difficult it would be ,for her to forgive him . 'DARK' emotions these are! I won't be able to take them😭

Wait did you tell that the Lungi guy is Handsome? ☺️

Forget it! Wash away all the praises that I showered on you! What the hell are you talking!

Regressive ! A man is not supposed to cry or not supposed to be a coward. A man is a man!

He should keep all his dark secrets , dark past with him always and should vent out all the frustration on his angel ! No matter how much he hurts her but he should protect her from other evils and gundas ! Never ever think of writing such things where Man submits himself. The lungi guy should be a passionate lover (Who hurts the girl) . That's it! You are not 'DARK'!

Bazinga.

From

DeePEST Shade of Gray!