Maaneet FF Envious Romance THREAD 4 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
take care dear & get well soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
GET WELL SOON FIRST
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Posted: 13 years ago
take proper rest
and get well soon!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
hope you are doing well
see ya soon then
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Posted: 13 years ago







Past


''...I just want to be with my geet...wo nehi...to uski yaad hi sahi...he said controling his tears...firmly.



''Toh ye sam bitch aap dono ke beech mein kya kar rahi hai bhai...??''annie looked at him confused.




Maan signed and said,''lets pack...''




''Mein toh geet bhabi ke bare mein kuch bhi nehi janti...i mean who was she...how beautiful she was...''annie said breaking the hug and putting the clothes and other stuffs in the bag...to make to atmosphere more lighter.




'Not ''Was''...it's ''Is''...Maan said firmly.


Annie looked back at him...and confusedly asked...'Excuse me?'




maan looked at her eyes and said...''geet is not my past...she is my present and my future...go and get the release papers ready...''


Annie looked at him scared her brother really IS obsessed with her...she did all the work and went to KM with maan...before dr. uncle could see his obsessiveness.




Maan silently went to his room and ordered the servents to shift his things in a guest room where geet used to stay these 5 days.




After having a bath he talked with the police commisionar about the accident...and the left overs...he informed maan that geet's bag was found strangely on the street...so it was'nt damaged...




Maan told him to send it to KM and keep the media away from this...


After finishing the call he started to think about how to break up with sam now...cause he has to do it... NOW...!




Maan came to the bed and started to caress the side where geet used to sleep...he laid down on the other side and kept looking at the empty place and driffted to sleep slowly...


Annie was seeing all this from the corner of the door...she was seeing a new person there...a changed human being...she was so confused...




She slowly came down and went to the kitchen to have some milk...before going to bed...she saw nakul there and his facial expression showed that he knew everything...so she requested him to tell everything...after a lot of bugging he agreed.


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Present




It has been three days since 'illegal' Mrs. Maan Singh Khurrana is found missing...in these 42 hours...the jungle was being searched for the 7th time and the 'secret' search warent was place on every exit of the town.




The commisioner was continuously facing the devil's volcanic rage and it has reduced some years of his life.



Everyone was working as if a dog is chasing them...




His luxerious Caravan was placed here from delhi but maan never left the small tent...




How could he...




only in this tent he could feel relaxed to remember their intimate moments...



Other wise it would made him a hungry and raged Lion who's pray was snatched away from him...!


rough stubble...blood red eyes and uncombed ruffled hair and his facial expressions...made him really looked like a possesed DEVIL...hiding all his handsomeness...and charishma...




Seeing him...only one thing comes in mind...




...Gotta find her..!




All his security groups were working like mad...




But still no news of his LOVE...!




He was giving a person death treats who came in the tent to give him hourly updates...



Suddenly his phone buzzed and an sms popped out...seeing this his face again started glowing...but this time for being happy and relived...




And dissmissing the person he ran to the luxerious caravan...to take a bath...




And to make himself again presentable and handsome for his Darling WIFE...




...who seems to be in Delhi...




That day in the morning...




...With throbbing pain on the back of her head made geet flinch in pain in her sleep...and it had helped her to gain her conciousness...



But some heated discission from not far was helping her a little bit to come in reality too...




A lady and a man...was having a fight...




That's all she could gather...




She slowly tried to listen what she was saying to keep awake...but her brain was providing her with partial sentences to understand the situations going on there...




...tum ne kya kia ye dev...



...maan singh khurrana...



...dev tum abbhi issi waqt usse waha se...



...u can not abandon u'r parents for this orphan...




HOW DARE U...!!!


...I will never let u live togather with this second hand girl...!



...MSK ne kya haal kia tha...phirse...??




And then again darkness took over her.




Evening.


Her eyes snapped opened...as if her brain finally understood the meaning of those broken sentences...Dev has taken her here...and her mother singhania ma'm was not supporting it...!


She got up slowly and went to the washroom to freashen up...


After that she came down the small stairs of the very small douplx house...she slowly looked around the house...this could have been her home...her picture could have placed in the family wall as the brand new daughter in law of the Singhania's...


But fortunately or unfortunately that didn't happen.


Cause a term used for her...was caught by her half sleeping brain...


''...Second hand girl...''


She stopped her pacing and determindly moved towards the main gate...


''Ruko...'' Mrs. Singhania stopped her and came closed to her.


She gave her a 100 note, a written address of a bus station...and a bus ticket...


''Dev has gone to a market for u'r clothes...he wants to marry u...tonight...and i can never let this happen...Ye lo aur chali jaao aapni aur mere bete ka bad luck leke...''saying this she turned and opened the door for her...


(then y didn't u let me get adopted all these time...y didn't u let me have a family??) she signed


''Cause u were to be our D-I-L...and we didn't want any faltu relatives from u'r side...that's why...Abb khush...??...then GO...!!!!''


geet didn't cry...cause life has showed her much much more humiliation till now...she slowly dropped the note intentionally and went away with the bus ticket and the bus stand address...


Mrs.Singhania saw her going away and quickly sms-ed someone nervously...and then closed the door...


She walked on the street barefooted...at midnight...don't no how long...but she kept walking and walking...


She saw a large banner of the address which Dev's mom gave her...she looked around...no body here...just many busses r there and simply nothing else...


Geet looked around here and there...looking for the bus number.


Suddenly she heared someone running towards this way...she panickly looked back and saw dev running toward her...he didn't even had the chance to wear the shoes...just in his socks...he ran to get geet...


He pantingly came close to her and said...''Maa ne pagalo ke tarha mujhe rok rahi thi...but phirbhi i didn't listen...sorry for the hurt geet...had no option...cause agar koi sound ho jata toh mera toh band hi...baj jata...I came to take to home geet...please gussa maat karo geet maa to aisi hi hai...tum toh janti ho na...''


He tried to hold her hand but she jerked it off...with disgust and rage...her being still an orphan...still a family less person...a broken toy...it's all their fault...and now she won't go back to them...at any cost...


By the look of geet's face and the way she denied his touch...he understood her inner pain...and he knew geet won't stop now...


''Jao...but at least tell me where r u going...???''


But geet turned to the buses...


''...whatever u do...wherever u go...always remember that i am waiting for u
geet...my feelings for u...will never
change...even if u forbid me to do that...''





geet frowned hard...being uncomfortable
and angry on Dev...


She started to go from there... But again he held her hand firmly and
pulled her into a massive hug...


in the
lonely bus stand...at midnight...


She squirmed to break the hug and about
to push him with all her might...


but all her
muscles and thinking...stiffed to see...


Her misery sitting on the jeep...


Looking at them...


And his eyes were hinting her that this
will be the end of Dev Singhania...


her movements turned into a massive halt and eyes focused only and only on her predator...


Her jumped down from the jeep and made a mad dash to them...as if they are doomed now...!!!!


maan jumped on dev and broke his strong hug in a snap...which was too much hard for geet...


And within a second Dev was lying fainted with MSK's 3 punches...where Maan's one punch was enough to black out a person for half an hour...


Geet's eyes were still glued to maan's...maan was looking at dev with filthy look...but then he slowly turned his blood red Devil hawk eyes to meet her terrified doe shaped eyes...


As Geet's legs were frozen on spot...she tried to voice something out...


''...M...m...ma...maan...''


But before she could finish...


THUDDD...


A tight slap was placed on her cheek...making her drop violently on the ground...


Geet couldn't even move due to shock...


Maan grabbed her by her hair and made her stand in one pull...


And Slapped her Again...




Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊after a long wait we n MAnn r at peace...
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Posted: 13 years ago
feeling sad for geet
how much she has to suffer
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh l was right about d teaser that it is talking about d present not past
Maan shouldn't have slapped her na...this would make Geet fear him more
Nice part
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
liked it but not the last bit
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Posted: 13 years ago
as u say.. maan slap geet was hurting but pls

give next update soon to compensate this..feel very sad for geet..she can't voice her mind..😭😭

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