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KISMAT

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Girl's its not a romantic OS but its about a girl's emotions' I hope being a girl you all will understand my point of view and will shower your comments and like on me'. Please if you liked it drop me a comment' it would be more than anything for me' please'

Geet beta are you ready' the boy's family will reach here in an hour' asked rano, geet's mother caressing her cheeks' geet just nodded her head exasperated' geet please try to understand beta it's the eighth boy who is coming to see you... said rano worried' mom is it my fault that they all reject me' said geet as tears spilled from her eyes wetting her smooth skin'

Rano didn't know what to say now' she knew its not her daughter's fault but the destiny's' her daughter is a gem any parent would wish for' she is an intelligent girl who always topped in her studies' know each and every household work' is as beautiful as a rose and has all the manners which a girl of present century lack' just her only fault is she is born in a poor family'

Geet wore the only expensive sari she had in her small cupboard' she didn't needed any extra makeup' her natural glow is her x-factor which can even make a saint to bend on her knees' but she just dreamt to make her parents proud which she did since the day she was born still failed to fulfill the biggest wish of theirs' they just wished to see her settled but she knew that's not in her cards now'

The boy's family arrived after an hour and mohinder, geet's father received them with bowed head' the boy's parents smirked looking at his bowed head and instead of greeting him respectfully they just moved inside in a rudely way' though mohinder was hurt but its nothing new for him' who ever came here to see his daughter would just behave like this only'

Mohinder took them inside and asked them to sit on the only sofa set they have in their entire two room house' the living room was small like the other room in which the whole family sleep together' the guests looked at the small wooden sofa and made face' you want us to sit on this hard thing' don't you know how to respect the people in whose house your daughter may go' said the mother of boy in disgust'

Mohinder just bend his head in shame' we just have only this sofa in the house' if you have problem I will spread a bed sheet on it if you want' said mohinder hesitantly' the father just nodded his head and then turned to eye the house' you all live in this place' how you all just fit here he said in disgust while rano spread the best sheets they have in house for them to sit'

She served them home made food and water' they refused saying they cant even touch such a food' their straight comment brought tears in rano's eyes but she hided them for the sake of their daughter' I think you just show us your daughter and that would be the best you could do for us' said boy now getting restless to wait to see the girl or say scan the girl whom he had come to see'

Rano brought geet and settled her on the only chair they have while mhinder and rano stayed standing behind her' so you are their daughter' what's your name said pammi, the mother of the boy' geet she replied in her sweet voice but it didn't had any effect on pammi' cant you speak loudly she taunted' geet said a little loudly' geet mohinder handa'

So what all do you know' said rajesh, boy's father I can do all the household work' I am graduate and had topped my semester' she replied him with her eyes bent on floor' we don't need such an educated girl' hme naukri karani h kya' do hell with your degrees I just want you to do all the work in the house and fulfill all my son's demand' said the mother interrupting in between'

Geet felt so much insulted' the degrees for which she worked day and night are just neglected in front of her eyes' but she knew she cant reply anything' dad I want her to go and wash her face so that I can check whether she is fair in complexion as she had came or had used tones of makeup to hide her real face and we can even see then that she can walk properly or not' said Rahul, the boy who came to see her'

Geet the very moment knew what the hell life is going to turn into if he agreed to marry her but the most important for her was his acceptance for marriage as geet wanted her parents happiness the most which lies in her marriage' she looked at her parents who just closed her eyes feeling miserable at the insult of their daughter and she moved to wash her face'

After she came back' they asked few other shameless questions like will she satisfy their son or not' is she ready to bear their grandson and give thema waris within a year' she was even asked to abort the child if it's a girl child' geet just answered each question without any question' at last the boy said' umm dad chehra to thik thak h and even she can walk too' she has good body too so what do you think we should say yes' said Rahul shamelessly to his parents who just nodded smiling while mohinder felt why he didn't died before hearing such things about her daughter'

geet remained silent as she knew her heart had turned into a stone hearing these words everytime' earlier she used to feel hurt but now it is all blank'She is just a body for them' a girl who will do all their household work like a servant whole day and would be insulted every second without a fault' a girl who would satisfy their son at night even she doesn't want to' a girl who will bear their son's child but of it's a boy she would be forced to kill her'

she knew its not a new thing' each poor girl has to face this provided she doesn't have a good destiny to get a nice family' they finally agreed for marriage' mohinder I am ready for this alliance of my son' mohinder just gave them a small smile which faded with their next demand' so lets talk about the main matter' how much are you ready to spend on her marriage' 15 lakhs- 20 lakhs or even more'

mohinder knew this will come soon' every time this one question broke her daughter's alliance' he folded his head and said' aap hme sharminda na kre hmari itni aukat kha ki we spend so much' we have a saving of maximum 2 lakhs for her marriage' please try to understand us' what they stood up in shock' you want us to agree in 2 lakhs' my son is a clerk in government office and just two lakhs for him' no its not possible' said rajesh standing off the sofa'

but please try to understand our position too' we are lower class people' it took me years to collect so much' I cant spend more than that' I will try to do my best for this marriage' said mohinder literally begging him'

but they didn't listened to him' they asked Rahul to stand up and they were going near door' mohinder held their legs' please I will do whatever you say but don't refuse us' geet eyes were flooding seeing her father in such a condition' she asked her mother to stop him from doing that but she just stopped geet refusing to do so'

rajesh stopped and said' ok we will agree but you had to do one thing for us' mohinder immediately agreed' ok you transfer this house on our name and we will accept your daughter' mohinder felt floor slipped beneath his feet' but where will we go then' we had this only shelter for our old age' that's your problem not ours' if you had to beg you do and fill yourself but you had transfer this house on my son's name'

it was too much for geet to take' she could handle anything but not insult of her parents who are her lives' she moved to them and held her father tightly consoling him' she then turned to rajesh and his son and said' are you here to take me as your son's wife or to sale your son at our house' she barked on their face' you little girl just mind your tongue' roared Rahul'

hey you don't try to speak now' if you had any respect or any manners you should have spoken when they were openly putting your price up' but their you were like cat got your tongue and now what did you wanna prove by speaking' you proved me that very instant what type a spineless creature you are' and now I refuse to marry such a boneless person'

geet's parent tried to stop her but now she had lost the last bit of control she had' she just ignored them and spoke what her heart wanted to' now she was sure she wont take a single men like them' she is fed up being a showpiece and then being rejected over and over again'

and mr rajesh I refuse to hear your shit more' its not in my parent's upbringing to insult someone but I am also thought to support justice an di refuse to take your words more' so if you don't want me to show your reality to you then please go out of here in the next second' they all were astonished to see a meek girl turning into a tigress and ran off the very second to save themselves from turning her prey'

geet why did you do that' said mohinder with tears in his eyes' so what do you expect me to do bauji' just let them insult you and see everything infront of my eyes like a doll' no dad I wont' I wont take all this now' I am just fed up of seeing all this every time' mohinder had seen her such hyper first time and knew she had been hurt more than she can take'

beta please try to understand it's a destiny of each girl' you had to get married and I have to pay them dowry beta' dad are you so fed up of me that you want me out of this house' if it is so then I will leave this house the very second' I hope that will make your wishes fulfill' geet you know I love you beta but it's society's custom' a girl suits in her own house that is her husband's house'

dad you call me beta right then why you not treat me as your son' if I would have been a boy would you have taken their shit' no na then why are you treating me as your burden instead of your support' why dad why' geet fell on her knees feeling defeated' mohinder too went on his knees hugging his daughter' beta you are my son I am proud of you' he said crying'

but try to understand us today we are alive to take care of you but what after few years when we would be old and dead' who will take care of you' geet immediately closed his mouth' bauji never say such thing' I am your son na then why don't you have faith on me' apne mujhe ungli pakad ke chalna sikhaya kal mai apki lathi bi ban skti hu' why a girl don't has a right to support her parents In old age' why dad why' kya ek ladki ki jindagi shadi tak hi simit rehti h' kya use jene ka haq ni' ek ladke ko agar haq h jindagi bhar apne maa bauji ko sambhalne ka to ek ladki whi haq kyu ni rakh sakti'

geet stood on her legs determined' dad aap chahe kuch bhi kahe this time I wont listen to you' I will prove myself to you' I will prove myself to this world' I will prove them agar ek ladki ek parivaar ko bandhti h to wo b ahar khud ki pehchan bi bna skti h' agar wo apni chanchalta se ek anagan mehkati h to wo bahar puri duniya apne isharo pe nacha bi skti h' I will prove you bauji'

with determination she wiped her tears and of her parents too' she promised herself this would be the last time her parents cried' she decided to move forward in her life never to look back'

after 6 years'

maam we are sorry for this mistake we wont repeat that ever again' few criminals begged in front of IPS officer Geet khurana' its not the first time you all asked for dowry' barked geet at rajesh who was arrested by some girl's family where they threatened them to give 8 lakhs or they will throw their daughter outside their house and give her divorce' we are sorry we promise we will take her back to oour house with all respect and love pleaded Rahul holding her legs'

but she didn't paid any attention to them because this time she is hard and cold geet' she asked her officers to file a case against them and take the most serious action against them' all nodded and took them away'

geet moved to her house where her loving 5 months daughter Sneha and her love and husband Maan Singh Khurana was waiting for her with a pout on his face' she knew a drama is on the way by her husband and just shook her head at him' he wont change ever and that's what she liked about him' though he is a business tycoon and can revolve the world with his click still he is a baby by heart which only she knew'

she moved to their room taking sneha while he followed her hugging her from back' after she freshened up he pulled her in a hug' why you left me so early in the morning' you know tumhe bina dekhe mere din acha ni jata' he pouted like a baby'

maan it was an urgent case shona' that's why I had to go' she replied with a sweet smile' and your shona ka kya you don't care for him' he faked anger and she kissed his cheek making him calm down In a second' she laughed seeing his expression' geet you always do this' hmesha you calm me down then you laugh like that'

geet just hugged him tightly thanking god a million tones for making her meet maan' she met him two years back in Shimla where he came for a project and she went for meeting her parents whom she settled in Shimla in a house which is lively and comfortable for them' they were so happy on her success and asked her to meet them'

it was a love at first sight for maan and he proposed her then and there and got a tight punch on his eye as a reply' but he didn't stopped himself' he followed her everywhere she went and after two weeks of efforts he made her agree for friendship' they had 4 months period of non-official dating where they came to know each other and then geet told him about the rejections she faced'

he promised to love her all his life which geet knew by now and just agreed for marriage' now they are married for more than a year and have little sneha, their happiness who bounded them in a more stronger bond' it was maan's wish to have a girl, a little geet which she loved the most' they regularly go once in a year to meet her parents who feels blessed to have maan as their son in law though he is more than a son for them'

please please tell me hows it' fingers crossed' its my first OS and I hope all you liked it'


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very well written neha! it is true even in this time we get to see certain things, how much humiliating for a girl to face a few of that Geet has undergone here! now a days parents also have changed a bit giving their daughter more importance and dont think twice if they had to reject such people! great ending it is, she got the well deserved life and every girl should be as strong as this Geet and try to become very independent in life then we get all the value we deserve!
Good one Neha!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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simply the best...
love it alot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome dear...
U write it very well...
Superb os...
Every gal here is against dowry culture... If people asks fr dowry at first place u can nvr b happy wid them in lyf...
Bt many gals trapped in this... And their parents too do all possible things fr their daughter
just amazing os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very good story
and close to real life that we female face before marriage
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such an inspirational piece..simply wonderfull

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Awesome OS der and a very true story der
thats what all the poor girl faces...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os!
Has touched upon a real serious issue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mindblowing os neha.
I loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing dear... or aisa sach me hota bhi hai. I know a gal jise 5 times reject kia gaya just bcoz vo sawali hai. Nd I always request her ki aap kyo aise khud ko insult krte ho!! Nd this is a story which I m proudly gonna show her.. nd regarding the song dats my favourite along wid rupaiya nd ghar yaad aata hai mujhe.. thanks for dis amazing os.. I salute you for dis..
Har ldki ki life me aisa time aata hai jb use as a showpiece samne rkha jata hai nd its defintely her KISMAT ki us k sath kya hota hai...
A big thanks to you neha for this os.. love you for this..

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