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INTEHAA



SHE BELIEVED IN LOVE BUT DOES NOT TRUSTS HER LOVER
HE NEVER THOUGHT OF FALLING IN LOVE
BT WORSHIPS HIS LOVER

SHE WANTED TO DO WHAT SHE WISHES
HE WANTED TO FULFILL HER WISHES
SHE NEVER MET HIM BEFORE YET WAS FORCED TO BE WITH HIM
HE DREAMT OF HER ALWAYS BT NEVER THAUGHT THAT SHE WILL BE WITH HIM

BUT WHO SAID THAT WE GET WHAT EVER WE WANT????
NOW HE IS HER LIFE'S INEVITABLE PART AND SHE IS ONE WHOM HE EVER WANT
LETS SEE HOW THEY COMPLETED THEIR JOURNEY WITH ME


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MAAN SINGH KHURANA

MD OF KC,,,STUDENT MARCH FINAL,, 22 YRS,,,
LOVES HIS FAMILY ,,,RUDE AND ARROGANT TO WORLD YET HIS DADI KNW THE REAL SOFT MAAN,,,,IN LOVE WTH GEET THOUGH NEVER TOLD HER,,,

GEET HANDA


STUDENT IN SANE COLG WTH MAAN,,,RICH SPOILT BRAIT,,,,,HER WISHES R FULFILLED EVEN B4 SHE ASK,,,FORCED TO MARRY MAAN,,,HATES MAN EXCEPT HER FRNDS WHO R HER LIFE,,,DOSTO K LIYE HAMESHA PRESENT,,,FULFILS ALL HER DADAJI'S WISHES

DEV SING KHURANA


MAAN'S YOURGER BROTHER N CLASSMATE N BESTIE OF GEET.,,,WISHES TO SEE HER AS HIS BHABHI A FLIRT BY NATURE THOUGH KNW HIS LIMITS

ANNIE SINGH KHURANA


BABY SISTER OF MAAN N TWIN OF DEV,,,GEETS FRND

MEERA SINGHANIA


GEETS FRND SINCE CHILDHOOD,,,,LIVES WTH HER ..PARENTS DIED WEN SHE WAS 10 IN AN ACCIDENT

GEETS OTHER FRIENDS

YASH MALHOTRA(loves meera secretly)


PINKY GUPTA

ARMAAN MALLIK


MAYANK SHARMA



RIDDIMA GUPTA


NUPUR BHUSHAN


MAANS FRIEND

ADITYA RAI-ONLY FRND KNW HIM IN AND OUT



SASHA - IN LOVE WTH MAAN AND KNW HIS LOVE FOR GEET...JEALOUS OF GEET,,,WORKS IN MAAN OFFICE TOO



RAJ N NIKI KHURANA-MAANS PARENTS



SAVITRI KHURANA-MAANS DADI



RAJVEEER N PRIYA HANDA--GEETS PARENTS




BRIJKISHOR HANDA-GEETS DADAJI ND HER IDOL



Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start
loved the character sketch n part 1
do continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahaaa lovely start RB👍🏼 loved the lines which Maan thinks while seeing Geet😳 are too gud...
Congo for new FF n all the best...🤗
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awesome start
nice cs...n part 1...
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lovely start... good luck for the new ff😊
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Interesting.bt geet k frnz ki list kuch zyada hi hai,it means unke scene,lov story bhi hogi,which means maaneet scene kam honge;n dat wil nt b gud.
So plz think abt it.


btw wats name of ff?
Maan geet ko apna bnane ki koshish krega so it can b ''tujhe apna bnane ki kasam khayi hai''
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thanx all i never knew that m such a gud writer,,,,plz be wth me n my story😊
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Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Interesting.bt geet k frnz ki list kuch zyada hi hai,it means unke scene,lov story bhi hogi,which means maaneet scene kam honge;n dat wil nt b gud.
So plz think abt it.


btw wats name of ff?
Maan geet ko apna bnane ki koshish krega so it can b ''tujhe apna bnane ki kasam khayi hai''


DR I HAD ALREADY DECIDED ITS NAME WE WERE JUST FINALYSING IT AND RHI BAAT UNKE FRIEND LIST KI DEY WONT BE NCLUDED MUCH IN THS STORY AS M NT PLANNING TO MAKE U ALL BORED SO DONT WORRY N SRRY FOR NT CHOOSING UR NAME
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PART -1

AT KHURANA MANSION

SUNLIGHT ENTERED FROM THE SLIGHTLY PARTED CURTAIN IN ONE OF D ROOM OF MANSION WHERE A YOUNG NOT TO FORGET HOT MAN WAS SLEEPING.HE STIRRED AS ALARM CLOCK BUZZED AT 5;30;HIS NORMAL WORKOUT TIMING,,
HE WOKE UP FRESHENED UP WENT TO HIS PERSONAL GYM ATTACHED TO HIS KING SIZE ROOM...AFTER ONE HOUR OF SWEAT DRIPPING TAI-CHI HE SHOWERED WORE SUM CASUAL WHITE SHIRT ND HIS DENIM JEANS AND WENT TO DINING TABLE WHERE HIS FAMILY WAS ALREADY PRESENT'''
GUY; MORNING EVERY1
DADI;MORNING MAAN,,SO ALREADY TO GO FR UR COLG TODAY IS LAST DAY OF YEAR SEMESTER NA SO WHAT R UR PLANS NW
MAAN:DADI AM UST PLANNING TO JOIN DAD FULL TIME MY ARCHITEDCTURE IS COMPLETE
DAD:GREAT IDEA SON,,,SO WEN R U GONNA TAKE UR MD POST
MAAN;NOT NW DAD JUST LET ME FINISH D PROJECT I M WORKING AT PRESENT DEN WE WLL DECIDE ABT IT
DAD:AS U SAY SON
MAAN;MOM where r annie nd dev nt came fr breakfast
mom: Maan dey went early morning said sum early clases r der
maan;hmm,m too going getting late,,
He rushed out in his car to his colg


Handa Mansion

mom:uth ja beta its already 8 half hr to ur colg,,,jldi uth warna late ho jaegi..
girl:umm mumma sone do aaj nhi jana colg ne jeena haram kar dia h
mom; geet puttar uth ja 1 to raat bhar party karti h n subah colg k liye bhane bnati h
geet;uff mom waking up just 2 min plzzz
mom ;no 2 mins just get up nw or i wll call dadu
geet(finaly getting up) : mom not fair u always do ths har baat me dadu ko baach me lati ho
rakha kya h colg me whi oldies teachre n dose stupid books jo sirf buk worms k liye h not for me,,

mom ;nakhre band kar n ab ja fresh ho waiseb tu roz late pahuchti h khi aisa na ho tjhe 1 din resticate car de,,,
geet; geet handa ko resticate kare its nt in der power we rt der trusties unki itni aukaat kha
saying that she went to washroom wore sum short skirt reaching till her thighs n a skinny top exposing her navel and left to colg wth meera


AT COLLEGE

MAYANK
:god ye kya ho gya h aj kal sbko al ready 15 min late n till no one present..thank god u nd annie came aj morning class to chodo i doubt others fr evening class too
annie;are aate honge sab our main worry is princess handa wo uthi ho to ayeg na
dev:actualy i wonder hw her mom strugles to wake her up
armaan;hey guys so baki kha h
annie baki ya sirf riddhima
wth a smirk
armaan;shut up annie
lttle irritated
nupur;m also here ne so kya chal rha h
in full maurena speed
mayank;hmari class ander chal rhi h jo hm sabko bunk karni padi coz of u
in a scarstic style
nupur;uf tum to sadu k sadu rhog itne acche weather me koi padta h kya

suddenly a car passed in full speed n here comes our geet handa wth her frnds

armaan;finalyu r here babes i thaught aj to tu ayegi hi ni
ridhima;chalo lets go to class first otherwise aj prof sharan nhi chodega
nd rest all went to class

AT LUNCH TIME
geet was enjoying wth her friends nt aware that a pair of eyes were so intently seeing her ki jaise aj un ankho me uske chehre ki wo masumiyat utarna chahta ho jo sirf uski dikhti h
is banawat me uski us ask ko dkh rha ho jo sirf uske atma ko rahat dene k liye aya ho
shayad aj use akhri baar dkhne ke dar se usko apni yaadon me kaid kar rha ho uska wo muskurana aur kisi ko dkh kar u khilkhilana


adi;maan kha khoya hua h aj tu subah se chup chap h common mam aj last day thoda idhar b dhyan dede
maan;uuhhh
nhi kch nhi chal chalte h classes khatm ho gyi lets go to office nw,,,

adi; ok maan sir chaliye
little pissed offf
maan;ab muh mat bna aj imp presentation h n u hav to giv it
adi:ok ok
n dey left fr kc

PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT

SO GUYS HOW WAS MY FIRST UPDATE HOPE I M NOT GONNA GET JUTTIS AND GALLIS PLZ GIVE ME UR RESPONSE WHETHER SHOULS I CONTINUE IT OR NOT😊
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