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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 26



Dadi was numb. She was stood there as she had no life.. how it could be.. how it was possible .. ohh babaji. She cried .. he heart was crying thinking about her only child.. "mai maan ko kya kahungi..aise samjhaaungi '' .. she saw mohindar.. a father who was tearing his whole dream for her only daughter.. what he would do now.. how !!" but I can not spoil my maan life.. I can't.. mujhe usse samjhana hi hoga''


"mohindarji..ye shadi nahi ho sakti" she said with much difficulty as her heart was not allowing her to make this decision but mind was ruling over.. she said finally


mohindar looked her but did not say a word.. " I new this would happen but never knew, this much pain & ache it would feel.. his eyes was numb.. he nodded his head in acceptance.. he knew she was not wrong... she was right..yes she took right decision for her son..how would she can marry her child with a girl who could lose her recognition anytime..anytime who can forget her everything.. but what fault my geet did.. why it happen to her.. why !! '' his weak heart could not take more.. he clutched his heart and turned, hiding from dadi.. " no..i can not show her my weakness.. I have to be strong for my geet.. my my only child.. for that innocent child who never did any sin yet would punish for her whole life.. ohh God.. please give me strength to hold that child.. please God..


"Mohindarji.. please hume galat mat samjhiye.. hum aapse ..'' she wanted to heal him with her words but failed..her own voice failed her..


"nahi savitriji.. aap uch mat kahiye.. isme aapka kya dosh.. I know no mother would want to marry a girls like her.. I can understand.. mujhe aapse koi shikaaayat nahi hai '' he convinced himself more then her.. but dadi had another question " hum maan geet ko kase samjhayenge '' .. he turned to her. Both knew biggest storm was yet to come..


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Maan was lost in her when she came from behind and looked him lost. She smiled and poked his shoulder but no response.. " ye maan ko kya ho gaya??'' she thought. She again patted him but he was far lost.. she came to close of his ear and scremed " maaannn'' he shuddered ' she laughed and hugged him from behind and kept her chin on his shoulder " aap kya soch rahe thy maan? ''


her hug was tickling his sense. He smiled. he held her hand on his stomach and brought her front . He cupped her face and said " about you geet''


"mere baare me ?? '' innocently asked

"hmm''

"kya soch rahe thy ?? ''

"sorry ..ye nahi bata sakta "" he said smiling..

"nahi bataoge ?? '' she dropped her arm around his neck


"h hmm" he pulled her waist closer and nodded no


"mujhe pata hai '' she smiled


kya??''


"yahi ..ki aap kya soch rahe thy '' she made winning baby face


"achha!! .. aur wo kase ?? '' he let her win


" mai toh aape har unkahi baato (unsaid words) ko samjh leti hu '' she said authentically


"achha !! he came closer and kissed her forehead softly.. " iska matlab batao '' he asked teasing


she smiled.. " it says you care for me ''


he smiled and kissed her nose " iska matlab ??''


"it says .. I am your cutie pie '' she said happily


he laughed at her innocence.. yeah right.. then he kissed her cheek then other which turned pink " ab ?? ''

" it says I am beautiful and pure" she bend her head..

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he liked his effect on her.. he raised her face holding her chin. She was still shutting her eyes. He came closer and brushed her lips , slowly. He was loosing his control.. a strange sensation was running inside him.. " iska matlab geet " he whispered


she shivered with his touch and closed her eyes... his warm breath was maing her melt.. " iska matlab you want me to be in your life forever'' she somehow whispered


he felt his happiness had no bound.. she accepted his touch on her.. he could not control more and kissed her deep.. relishing cherishing his running moment which was stopped at the same time.. after few moment he parted.. he opened his eyes and looked her flushed face loveingly. He removed her strands from her forehead and came to her ear.. whispered " iska matlab geet ??" and kissed there


"she smiled in her closed eyes feeling his teasing yet loving gaze on her .. " iska matlab you love me..you need me '. you care me.. you made me cute and beautiful and you will love me for ever n ever n ever .. '' she hugged him saying " I love you maan .. I love you so much.. love more then me.. love you more then my babaji.. please never leave me.. please'' he could not carry her affection and covered her request with his lips...




Precap : Dadi talks To Maan


(Heyy deariesss i know you all want to know whole past soon but believe me i am hiding this because i need to hide.. therefore i have given little clue this dis part ... but please if you really have faith on me .. bear me.. i will not take much time to unfold everything .. pakka promise 😃)


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovuuu lovely update...oye i feel sad for maaneet ...dadi ne asse q decesion li😭...they made for each other ...jo kuch ho they can manage...akher assa kya hogaya lovuuu me confused n scared😕...per m sooo excited ki sb ye bhuttt interest mor pe h.😃
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat made dadi d0 take this decisi0n yaar
wat wiI happen n0w
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww yar very beautifully written update,loved it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update buddy👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
maaneet romance was cute👏👏👏👏
but y r thy refusing the alliance 😭😭😭😭😭😕😕😕😕😕
plz maaneet ko sath kar do ab jaldi se thy cn overcome nyting together
do update soon waiting eagerly fr ur next update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
maneet scene why dadi took decision of no marriage do next soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
but dadi said no to the marriage
whatz about geet forgetting her existence and all
understand dadiz decision but cnt help but feel sad for maaneet
they r made for each other
but hv faith in maan
he wont ever let geet go away from him
update soon
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww that was amazing...so much love yet heart renching to think abt the future of both...i hope whtever may come as problem but our maneet will fight it together and win...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26
OMG theres more tot he past?
why did Daadima decide like that?
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

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