I am back now with another OS which I have written much earlier. Again I am changing the names and yes this time I have rewritten here and there again. I hope you will enjoy the OS as much as i enjoyed writing it!
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"You have lost your mind for sure! What's wrong with you Geet? How in the world do you believe in such things?"Pinky screamed at Geet while walking up and down their bedroom. "But Pinky, he was so romantic and caring and all. I didn't expect him to look like that."Geet started to sob.
Suddenly Geet's phone started to ring. Geet answered the call without taking note of the number. "Hello jaan. how are you? I am so glad that you accepted me the way I look with all the scars on my face. We shall meet again tomorrow, 4pm at the coffee caf alright? Muacks, love you. Bye honey!" and the guy hang the phone up even before Geet could open her mouth to answer back.
Geet started hitting her forehead with her hands and started to cry. Pinky quickly ran to Geet's side. "Geet, Geet. All okay? What did that guy tell you? Geet, let me give you this advice, it is okay dear that he doesn't meet up to your expectations for looks. The most important thing that you have to look out for is the character. And yes his depth of love for you. I am not saying whatever you did is right. Whatever mess you are in right now is entirely your fault. But what you have to do now is to sort out your idea and make a decision. Its either you want it or don't. Whatever decision you take, I will be by your side supporting you." Pinky told.
Geet wiped her tears and looked into her sister's eyes and gave her a tight hug. Geet knew that no one was in the position to sort the mess she was in right. Geet broke the hug and smiled slightly to her sister and whispered "Thank you Pinky. Let's get to bed now. Good night." Saying that Geet lay on her bed looking up to the celling. Without her realization tears started scrolling down as she started recalling all her conversations with the man whom she had claimed as her Mr Right.
It all started on one fine night when she could not get any sleep and she decided to explore an online chat room, Zumba. She began chatting with several people but none of them were the type she wanted to chat with. All of them wanted to speak of sexual issues and she certainly didn't like it. Just when she was about to log out, thinking that she was wasting her time, a user with the name dude 123 started to chat with her.
Dude123 was someone different in the chatroom. He didn't want to talk about sexual issues and instead was like Geet herself, just bored and wanted to chat with someone. That night was the night that changed Geet's life. Geet and dude123 got along very well and they grew fond of one another that they started chatting on a daily basis for the next 3 months. Once three months were over, Geet realized that slowly she was falling for this guy. From the conversations they had, Geet learnt that dude123 was a good looking guy. He also seemed like he was caring and respectful. All these points were the reasons for Geet to fall for him. On the fourth month, dude123 suddenly proposed to Geet and he stated his interest in her and though they have not met, he said that he felt that Geet was the one for him.
Geet was on cloud nine. She didn't expect that dude123 would also feel the same way as her. Geet immediately confessed her feelings to him. And they decided to exchange their phone number. Every night without fail, they will talk over the phone. Geet liked it and she felt special with the way dude123 treated her. And one day when both of them felt they were ready, they decided to meet up and get to know one another even better and to also at last know their real names.
Geet went to the venue as they had decided and she saw dude123. He was standing right in front of her. He was dressed in a white polo tee and jeans. He did look good but the moment Geet saw his face. Geet almost puked out. Dude123 face had several stitches on his left side of his forehead. "Hi prettylady245, I am your dude123. Thank you so much for coming down. Please come let's sit at the bench there and talk." Geet was in total shock. The person she have imagined all her life looked way better that this guy standing in front of her. Geet felt lost, she didn't know what to do. She just followed him and sat at the bench. The next 30 mins that they spent together was like a daze to Geet. She could not focus on what he was saying. Her heart was fully immersed in the disappointment. The only thing that she could ever remember was his name was Dev. She didn't even have the guts to speak up.
With that bench scene running through Geet's mind, Geet sat up on her bed. She hugged her knees and started to think carefully. Some part of her wanted Dev still because he was such a sweet gentleman but another part of her didn't want him as he wasn't good looking at all. Geet tried to reason out with herself and after an hour or so of battling with herself within, she came to a conclusion. She concluded that she did want Dev because she could never find some as sweet as him in ages to come. With a new light, Geet went to sleep.
The next day, Geet waited for Dev at the venue he had told her. She had been waiting for 20 minutes and she saw no sight of Dev. She panicked and she was about to take her phone out when she felt some one tap her shoulder. She turned around and she stared straight into the person's eyes.
Geet was mesmerized by the guy who stood in front of her. He was dressed up in his formal attire and he was looking dashing and hot. Geet only came back to her senses when she heard him speak up. "Hi Miss Geet. I am the actual Dude123 from online chat zumba." He smiled and raised his hands forward for a hand shake. Geet shook his hands and stood there surprised. "No way this guy is mine. He is way too good for me.. He is sooo hot!" Geet thought to herself.
"I can see that you are rather surprised but let me introduce myself. I am Maan. How about you?" Maan said as he sat opposite Geet. "I am Geet. But how can you be dude123? I just met him yesterday. His name is Dev. What is happening here? Have I been cheated or played around with?" Geet stated with anger. Only Geet knew how scared she was within. She was scared that she was in some danger.
"Geet relax. Yesterday the guy Dev you met is my friend. I sent him to check and see if you loved me for who I am or for who I look. You passed the test. I can see that your love for me is majorly based for who I am. And I am happy about that Geet. And I am sorry for all the trouble I have put you through. I am real dude123 and I love you my baby Geetu!" Maan said. Geet finally felt relieved. She knew Maan was not lying. Only he calls her Geetu. No one else did know of that nick name. Geet smiled and she blushed. Maan took his hand and placed it on top of Geet's hand and gave it a light squeeze.
And slowly Maan took out a box from his pocket. Maan got up from his seat and went down on his knees in front of Geet and opened his box. "Will you do the honors of being my wife? Will you marry me jaan?" Maan pleaded. Geet didn't know this was coming. She was shocked and happy all at the same time that she shed tears of joy and nodded her head yes.
Maan was extremely happy and put the ring on her finger and he gave a peck on her cheek. Geet was out of her mind and she just did what she felt like doing at that moment. She got up and threw herself at Maan for a hug. She hugged him very tightly and said, "I love you too baby. And I know you are and always be my Mr Right. But I got to confess, I was in a dilemma last night because your friend did look horrible. Sorry. I realized that character is more important than looks and that's explains why I am here today. I hope you will forgive for even having such a dilemma." And with that she kissed him on his forehead. Maan was smirked looking at Geet's reaction. He took her face in his hands and said, "Baby you are also my Miss Right and I love you very much. Your dilemma does not matter now. All that matters is that you are sure about us! And I know we will pull through all obstacles in life together and our love will never die." With that he placed a kiss on her lips sensuously.
Thank you for taking some time out and reading till the end. Please please do leave your valuable comments and likes. They encourage me and inspire me to write more. (: And I am thinking of writing a SS soon! Still coming up with the storyline in my head. Once I have sort out my idea, I will definitely write it and I hope I will be able to get all of your support then as well. God bless!
Link:
OS: Falling In Love (Geet & Maan Version) :
OS: Happy Friendship Day! (Geet & Maan Version):
OS: Depth Of Love (Geet & Maan Version):
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