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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

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Posted: 12 years ago

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omg... it was fantastic... i cant express in words..
kiddo... what are you doing, how u r able to write so beautifully...
you explained maan's pain and loneliness so beautifully. I felt all the things are happening around me...
how can his parents not care for him...
now i understood, he is adopted not their own son... but happy that atleast they care for him..
awww how maan expected his dad to come and take him home after his 10th... but he didnt come and sent car but called him just to inform they are in london with dev...
poor maan and he is all alone again...
and poem is superb... his pari, his geet knows him from childhood...
wowww... thats great... now i understood why geet wants to marry maan even though he told he dont want to marry( in prologue)...
i am excited for the party...
hope they wont hurt maan now...

continue soon kiddo...
love u... 🤗

Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Superb update👏

Beautifully written...⭐️

Nicely portrayed maan's feeling...👏

So sad for maan😭😭

Liked the poem⭐️

Precap sound interesting

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next 😊

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

lovely prologue yar

eagerly waiting for updates

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

omg lovely update yar mindblowing muahhh

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

You know i've always been in love wid maan but never felt dis emotional 4 him.I'M so immensely in love wid your version of maan & wid ur lovely writing too.Fabulous update.

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

AWWW my maanu
his parents forget his b-day😡😡
kaise parents hai
i dont like them 😡😡😡
yaar this part made me cry
my maanu is so alone n craving 4 his parents lv bt wt he got nothing..
maanu is not theeir bological son
they adopted him
omg😲😲😲😲
im cursing them how could they
bt now im hating them more if they cant give him lv y they adopt him 😡😡😡😡
party
im sure not 4 maanus' success its 4 dev's return 😡🤢
😡 ________________
manu ki pari
who is that girl
hmmm let me guess. geetu 😉😉😉😆😆😆 hope hope hope 😛😛😛

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Love it...😛

Who is his Pari...???

Waiting for Maaneet's meeting...

Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

It was beautiful...fantastic...wonderful...

u describe Maan's feelings and his inner turmoil very beautifully...

so Maan is their adopted child...

I assume this party his dad is throwing just to celebrate Dev's home coming...I am really worried for Maan if this is so...

Geet's entry...waiting for it...

thanx for pm...

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divya22

@divya22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

woo awesme part...
so this is his past... he is adopted bt after hving own child he was a burden on them... bichara maan...
m sure uski pari geet he hogi...
nxt mai geet ki entry..wooo...

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SingMe2Sleep

@SingMe2Sleep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

lovely dear...
awesome update..
loved it so much...

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