MG SS :- CUTE LOVE STORY Part 14- Page 20 Imp Note -page21 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
I just read in one go

and believe me this is supab story line

keep it up girl u r awesome writer

they way take them in mansion

anvi cs is awesome

geet is good girl

just love ur whole story

continue soon and pm me also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
THANKS ALOT FOR LIKES AND COMMENTS AND SORRY I UPDATED AFTER LONG TIME.

Due to exam I was unable to update .Now I will update regularly.

FORGIVE ME for updating late

Here the next part,


PART 13

After Sameer left ,
Maan completed his important work ,he remebered about talk with Sameer,
Just then Geet come , as she was going out maan asked,
Maan:Where are you going?
Geet:I have some work,its not necessary that I should tell you everything.But I will be late as avni aman want to go out so u take them.I will be unable to come.
Maan :So strange, due to my behaviour she is talking like that .


Geet constantly was searching for job in every shop as possible tries she done,it was evening time but she didnt got

In KM ,
Maan:Avni,Aman get ready we are going out for dinner
Aman:Wow
Avni:Masi also coming na?
Maan: She will not she told .Go get ready.
Both left
maan thought"Its so time why she is not still back."
Avni:we ready
Maan Let's go.
They come to hotel for dinner
Three of them enjoying dinner
Just then by mistake soup spilled on his shirt.
He was going towards washroom ,He saw geet talking to someone,he tried to go behind her but she left.
Maan came back and asked abt her to person
Person:She was asking for job.
Maan:What...?
Person:Yes. Excuse me.
Maan cleaned shirt .Then he came back three of them finished dinner and came back home.
Maan: Nakul kaka where is Geet?
Nakul:She is not back yet.
Maan:Where is she?
Avni:When Masi will come?
Maan:You two go sleep,its late ,she will back soon?
Maan was lost in thought abt geet "Her smile, her eyes, her voice and all upon that was worried abt her?"

Precap:Where is Geet?



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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
geet is hell angry with maan..omg..maan hv to find way to mnfy geet..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
superb part
n sooo sorry for so late reply...
i ws too much busy
sorrry
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Nice story
loved it
read it in one go
Avni is really cute
maan having some feelings for geet
geet looking for other job
aman also becoming nice
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
@7sanjiri: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
Edited by girlz-rule - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
PART 14

Maan: Where is Geet? I have to search her.She is new in city.
Just then Geet come,
Maan :Where was you gone?
Geet:For personal work.
Maan:I know your personal work.You were searching for job.
Geet: How do you know?
Maan: Well Maan khurana knows everything?why u are searching for job?You have job.
Geet:I dont want to work with you?
Maan:Well not only you but also every person who is employee is bonded with KC for period of six months.So better dont waste your energy at least six months.
Geet:What?
Maan:Yes, I think you didnt read paper carefully.Go take dinner and sleep Avni must be waiting for you.
Maan said so and left.
Geet got busy in her thoughts"Everytime something happens which is behind by imagination, do he hear telepathy abt me that what am going to do?Please Babaji save me from this Dusht Danav .Oh god geet you never think abt anything this much ,He made you thoughtful."
Geet finished her dinner and retired to sleep.
Next morning
After having breakfast kids left for school
Maan:You are coming with me?
Geet:I can come by my own.
Maan:You are my responsibility
Geet:What?
Maan:If you will get late kids ask me.They care for you.
For sake of kids please come.
Geet:You said please then i will come but due to only Aman and avni.
They were abt to leave
Just then Sameer came,
Maan:Hey u here.
sameer: For giving enga. ceremony invitation.Must come. Hey u didnt introduced me to beautiful lady
Maan:Geet,Niharika bhabhis sister,you will meet kids also they are gone to school
Sameer: All of you must come am getting late have to go. bye
Maan : Bye.
Precap: No precap


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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome update
loved it
Geet finding new job
Maan requesting geet to come with him
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
NOTE
I know its really long time I havent updated.My last update was about 3 months ago.As my final year's final exam is nearI have a lot load of study.I will update in Month May .
SORRY FROM BOTTOM OF MY HEART that all of you have to wait long
I hope All of you understand.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
all the bestwill wait for you



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