MG SS :- CUTE LOVE STORY Part 14- Page 20 Imp Note -page21

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Character sketch

Maan singh Khurana: younger son of pratap khurana who is very polite, good by heart lives with his father

Pratap singh Khurana:
Maan's father very serious person.

They live in Khurana mansion

Geet Handa : Middle class girl , works in Gift emporium shop, having nephew and niece in her family who are children of her died elder sister

Avni Khurana : 8 year old sweet girl , niece of geet

Aman Khurana :13 year old boy, nephew of geet

Niharika Handa -Khurana: was elder sister of geet and wife of kabir singh khurana

Kabir singh Khurana: was elder son of Pratap singh Khurana

Niharika and kabir were died in car accident

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INDEX[B
R]Prologue below Page 1

Part 1-Page 2
Part 2 - Page 3
Part 3 -page 4
Part4 -Page5
part 5 -page 5
Note- Page 6
Part 6-Page 6
Part7-Page8
Part 8- Page 9
Part 9- Page 10
Part10-Page 12

Part11-Page 14
Part12-Page17
Part 13- Page 19
Part 14- Page 20
note-pg 21

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Prologue

In Khurana Mansion

Maan- Why papa? I know brother is not with us . I also miss him so much, why you cursing Avni and Aman for it?

Pratap: Because if kabir didnt had married with that middle class girl then may be kabir have been today with us, those two children are of niharika

Maan: They are your grandchildren also. I know am talking little rude, but am sorry i will not hear you ,i am going to take them back in mansion, they are last memory and symbol of my dear brother

Pratap: Maan...

Maan didnt heard him walked away

In Handa House

Geet just came back from work little Avni seen her and hugged her, she is so close to Geet bcz she was very small about 2 year old when her parents died

Avni : where is my Chocklate?

Geet: take it, where is aman?

Avni : He told me he is going to friends home.

This is prologue , hope u will like it

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so he is going to take kids back

Nice start
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PART 1

Aman came back to home
Geet: Its too late, why?
Aman: I was playing so am late.
Geet:Did you complete your homework?
Aman: I will do it later
Geet:You are getting rude day by day these are bad manners. Its not a way of talking to elders.
He dont hear geet, goes to his room

Avni: Leave him he is just like that . Masi I am feeling hungry.Please make dinner soon
Geet:yes i am going for making it.
Geet thought to herself have tear in eyes"I am not angry on you Aman ,I know why your nature is like that you miss your parents so much . I also miss. May be I cant be like them for you, but I will try.May be its our fate to live without them."

In Khurana Mansion,
Maan thought about past, when his brother married to niharika was very happy.But father thrown them out of house,but they were happy.He never broke contact with him but due to fear of father they never met face to face, they just talked on phone, both brothers shared each and everything with each other.
His eyes well up with tear due to memories.

He thought" now i will not hear father , i will bring Aman and Avni back,Now I will not fear of him, may be it will be rude or anything, I want them back .They are my family.You will have to accept it father. I will make you to accept them''
Precap:Maan at Geet's house.
I know its short update but please bear with me its my first attempt of writing.

nyc prt...
Aman is so rude,cn undrstnd his feelings
Maaneet will meet in nxt prt
Really cnt w8 fr nxt prt
Cont soon

PART 3

Next morning

In Khurana Mansion

Maan: I am going papa, to bring them back
Pratap:You are not going Maan.
Maan:If you are not giving me permission then I will also leave this home,now choice is yours.
Pratap: Ok but dont expect that I will give them any love or affection
Maan:Ok
Then Maan leaved for Handa house to Hoshiyarpur from Delhi
In Geet's house,
After sending Aman and Avni
to school , Geet left for her work in gift shop.
She handle every work very carefully helping customers and other work so nicely

At afternoon

Owner of Shop: Geet you have to leave job .
Geet:But i havent done any mistake then Why?
Owner:I know you are very good at work, but I am selling this shop , I need money so am sorry you have to.
Geet: Ok
Geet left from there and directly went Gurudwara
she cried"why?why this happened with me? what will I tell to Aman and Avni?

She left for house then,
In Home
Avni: Masi you came so early today?
Geet : Yes was feeling headache so, Did you taken lunch or not and Aman had or not?
Avni: Yes we had.You know Aman is doing homework.
Geet to herself : What should I do?What to tell I lied today but tomorrow?
As she was lost in her own thought door bell rang
Geet opened door:You , Why you came here.
Maan: To take Avni and Aman with me.They are my family
Geet: After six year you remembered your family.Wher were you in six year.Oh I forgot you were polite son of your father
Hearing noise children came in drawing room
Avni: Masi,Who is he?
Geet : He is...
Maan cut her
Maan: I am your uncle
Avni: Really Masi ,is he our chachu?
Aman: Yes,Avni he is
said so and left from there.

Precap:Geet and Maan quarrel

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