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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice ss dear please add me in your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
awwwn maan felt bad.. i hate sasha.. hope geet and maan teach sasha a lesson.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
nice parts loved it
pm me after updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read ur ff
it is really awesome
pm me ur updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 10

As meeting gone well,they got project,everyone left meeting room.
Maan was still feeling bad for his behaviour .
Sasha:MK do you want anything ?
Maan:Bring black coffee(Then he remembered how he scolded geet for coffee.)
Sasha leave I dont want coffee.Send Mr.Sharma's file in my cabin.I have to study them.
Sasha:Ok.MK.
She thought to herself"Now see Geet what I will do.Count down begins now soon you will say good bye to KC"
It was time to go home all employees were leaving but maan was still there so Geet was also waiting for him to complete his work.
Geet:Oh god.is he man or monster?What he thinks of himself i have to go now avni must be waiting for me.
Sasha:You can go Geet.I know mk scolded you.I just forgot to tell you abt sugar.I am really feeling very bad for you
Geet:Its ok mam. But are you sure can i go?
Sasha:Yes I am.
Pinki:Lets go Geet.Its too late.
Both of them left.
Maan called Geet.
But Sasha came there.
Maan:Where is geet?
Sasha:It so late mk so i told her to go
Maan:Ok,you also leave its really late.
Sasha:Good night MK
Maan just nodded and left.
In mansion
As geet talked to avni she felt good then they had dinner
and left for room.
Maan was in car thinking "why she left office without informing me?I hope she must be reach in mansion safely."
As maan was lost car stop he didnt realised he reached to mansion.
Driver said "sir we reached"
Maaan came out and went in.
Maan:where are geet and children?
Nakul:They had dinner and are in their room.
In room
Avni:So many days you didnt sing for me, please sing otherwise I will not sleep.
Geet :Ok I will.As she started singing (maan who was abt to go his room unwantedly attracted and went toword their room and was watching them.)
Avni kept her head in her lap.
Geet started singing
"hawaa dheere aanaa
neend bhare pankh liye
jhoolaa jhulaa jaanaa
nanhi kali sone chali
hawaa dheere aanaa
neend bhare pankh liye
jhoolaa jhulaa jaanaa"
Geet was caressing her head and continued.
"nanhi kali sone chali
chaand kiran si gudiyaa
naajon ki hai pali
chaand kiran si gudiyaa
naajon ki hai pali
aaj agar chaandaniyaa
aanaa meri gali"
Maan was staring at them lovingly
"gun gun gun geet koi
haule haule gaanaa
neend bhare pankh liye
jhoolaa jhulaa jaanaa
resham ki dor agar pairon
ko uljhaaye
resham ki dor agar pairon
ko uljhaaye"
After sometime maan was so lost in them
"ghunghru ka daanaa koi
shor machaa jaye
daane mere jaage to phir
nindiyaa tu bahlaanaa
neend bhare pankh liye
jhoolaa jhulaa jaanaa
nanhi kali sone chali
hawaa dheere aanaa"
As geet ended she saw avni sleeping peacefully she adjusted her head on pillow.
As she looked up she saw maan.
Maan felt embrassed.
Geet:Avni is sleeping if you want to talk then talk tomorrow.Good night.
Precap:Maan saying sorry to geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update shasha ka kuch jaldi karo and maan attracting toward geet



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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
very nice update..geet bonding with children is soo good...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice story dear... continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fab updt!!
maan is so lost in geet n d kids!!
n silly sasha.. she thot she ll have maan in anger against geet bt instead he was worried abt her safety!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 11

Maan:Actually I am here to talk to you Geet.Whatever happened in offic I am...
Geet cut him
Geet:I am sorry I will try not to do any mistake.
Maan:Please you dont say sorry.I am here to say that I talked very rude I am really very sorry geet.Please forgive.
Geet thought herself"It is dream or reality."
Geet :Its ok.
Maan:Can we be friends?
She again got shock but composing herself said yes.
Maan:Thanks Geet.
Geet nodded and left.
Maan to himself"Are you mad maan what you done?what happening to you?whenever she comes before you behave strangely?"friendship, sorry" i didnt asked like this before anyone."
Then he left to his room.But was not able to sleep constantly thinking about Geet.
Maan:Oh god I think I am mad.
At last he slept while thinking.
Geet's room
Geet in her mind "Very strange msk said sorry and asked for friendship and I said yes. I am mad , no no am not mad as I live in this house so at least friendship is fair and he also gave me job.Avni and Aman are also happy bcz of him.You done right geet by accepting friendship"
Then she drifted to sleep.
Next morning,
Geet wake up early and got ready then
Geet helped children to get ready then they came to breakfast table.But maan was not at table.
She served them , they finished and were leaving.
Geet:Where you going?
Aman:From today we are joining school bus.
Avni:Yeah chachu said us.
Geet:I will come to busstop I have to go to office.
Then three of them leaved.
Maan wake up and saw time it He thought"First time I wake up late"Then he hurriedly got ready"
and came down
Maan:Nakul where is Geet?
Nakul:Today she left early.
Maan:Bring only coffee for me
He thought"Why she left?Is she mad she is new in this city whatever she thinks do only that.didnt wait for me.
Nakul:sir coffee.
Maan had and left.
Then hurriedly drive for office.
Maan reached and asked pinki "Where is Geet?"

pinki: she is not yet reached office Maan:Ok.
then thought "But she left before me then...
As he was lost Geet came and was talking to pinki she didnt noticed maan but as he heard her voice and gone to cabin then called pinki said"Send Geet to my cabin now.
In maan's cabin,
Maan:You know you are 5min late for offic.If you are going to do it frequently then why dont you came with me?
Geet:Maan sir am sorry.I will be careful from next time.
Maan:I hope so.Now get back to work.
Geet left and said herself"Yesterday i thought he is nice but again devil ,leave it, it doesnt matter to me bcz as I will get new job I will leave this.
In maans cabin as he was lost in his thought his phone rang .
He saw caller name.
Maan: Hey after long time.
Sameer(Maan best friend):Yes I know actually one good news I am getting engaged.
Maan: When its really surprise?
You and engagement are you alright?
Sameer:Calm down man .
I am coming tomorrow.
Maan:I will be waiting ,bye
Sameer:Bye.
And tomorrow is sunday so keep in mind god know if you will get ready and left for office.I am seriously sorry for your employees and laughed
Maan :shut up. see you tmr take care.

Precap:Maan and Sameer meeting


Edited by 7sanjiri - 13 years ago

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