MG SS :- CUTE LOVE STORY Part 14- Page 20 Imp Note -page21 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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If anyone want that I should write this ss in hindi too then please tell me I will surely do it .
So please tell me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GOOD START
DO CONTINUE
AND ENGLISH IS FINE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3

Geet: Avni go to your room

like polite child Avni left from there

Maan : From time I come here you didnt think you didnt asked me to sit.This is bad manner.

Geet: Mr.Polite dont teach me manners.Tell clearly what what you want?
Maan: I told clearly I want Avni and Aman back .They are my bro's children, my family.

Geet: They are my sister's children and my only family too.

Maan: But how will you take care of them you have lost your job.

Geet shocked : How do you know?

Maan: well MSK knows everything.See I know you love both of them and also I know you love Avni like your own daughter.But dont you think they are Khurana's children and deserve best life and everything best in their life

Geet: I agree but in these six year where were you when they need you most?

Maan: Yes you are right. But in these six year I hope just that papa will understand and will accept them but it was false hope he didnt accept them till.But I will make him to accept them.Now I am giving you time today.But tomorrow morning I will come to take them with me.

said so and left from there,

Geet having tear in eyes and was not able to think what to do?

Aman and Avni came there

Aman:I heard everything.What do you think that I will go with him.No am not.

Avni:I will also not.I cant live without you.I love you Masi.

Aman:Yes Masi.

Three of them hugged each other.

Then Geet seperated them and said,

Geet : But I dont have job.How will I take care of both of you?

Avni and Aman were quite for sometime.

Avni: You too come with us; we all will go.

Aman: Yes we will not leave you alone.

Geet: Ok.I will think.But now go get ready we are going out for dinner.

Avni:I want icecream, chocklate too.

Geet : yes you will get .Go fast get ready.

Avni left and geet's eyes well up tear and thought to herself" This is my last dinner with both of you.I will miss you so much.I am sorry."

Avni and Aman come,

Geet quickly wiped her tears and they left for dinner

Precap: Again,Maan at Geet's home


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome update me want one more puleeez
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice dr...
loved the updates...
hope maan takes geet too...
sorry for late comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved ur story..
cute indeed!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks to all of you who loved my ss .It inspire me so much
I will surely give next update long.
Please dont stop giving your precious comments I need them very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very very lovely update..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4

Three of them enjoyed their dinner and were happy,after sometime they came back,

Geet said to both to sleep.
Geet was in her own thoughts
"How will I tell you that I am not coming with you? You both have to go without me."
Then Geet gone to their room ,
They were sleeping peacefully, she saw them and came back.
She started to pack their bags, all stuff of them because she accepted that she is not able to take care of them.
Next Morning,

Maan came to home,
Door bell rang, Aman opened door
Aman : Why you are here?We are not coming with you.
Geet came and said: Come inside.
Maan: So,Whats your decision?
Geet: Yes they are going with you.
Avni:And you masi? If you are not coming I also not going with him.
Geet: Dont be stubborn sweety.I am not leaving you, I will come to meet you time to time.
Aman: You want to take both of us with you.Right.
Maan: Yes,I am.
Aman:Then you have to accept condition , then we will come only
Maan:Ok.Tell me.
Now geet was feared what will he say because, she know his nature and so rude sometime, never hear others.
Aman: If masi will come then we will come.
Maan: Ok .I accept.
Geet: But Aman listen to me...
Aman left from there
Avni: Please masi come with me.How will I live without you?
Geet instantly hugged Avni
Maan thought" Aman and Avni are so attatched with her.So she have to come otherwise both of them will not come."
Maan: I think you shuld come with us. As you do not have job what will you do here, may be in delhi you will get more jobs opportunity.
Geet thought for some time and said: Ok I am coming.
Then she told Aman I will come with both of you.
She went to her room and started to pack her stuffs,
also thought"Today I come to know how much Aman caress for me, just he cant express.Its a new ray of hope that old Aman will come back soon just like before when didi and jiju were with us."
All of them get ready an left for Delhi.
Precap: They reached Delhi.
If you like please press like button at least
It motivates me, Please...
I will update next part in few hours.




Edited by 7sanjiri - 13 years ago

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