MG SS :- CUTE LOVE STORY Part 14- Page 20 Imp Note -page21 - Page 3

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nats0101 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aman may not voice it bt he does love geet!!
nice one!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very loving kids... great story.pls cont soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
aman love geet but he is expressing his love for geet
plz pm me also
Edited by lovesia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5

After long journey they reached to Delhi in khurana mansion,
Avni: Masi its look like castle.Its beautiful.
Geet: Yes Avni its big.
Maan:Yes, now it is your home also.
Avni: Do you live alone here in this mansion? You dont feel fear here.
Maan:No, your grandpa also live here and caretakers also.
Then Maan told Nakul to take them into their room.
Avni:Its very big room.I am not going to stay alone in this room. Masi you have to live with me.
Geet: Yes dear. I will live here. I cant leave you alone sweety.
And Avni kissed on geets cheek.
Aman also got seperate room.
Maan said them to take rest and come for dinner.
Aman:Its very big but useless, Where is tv? As far I know there are seperate tv in each room in big homes.Then why not here.
Then Nakul called them for dinner
Avni: Masi this dining table is so big.But we only few then why?
Aman: Avni these are dining tables which mostly present in
big homes and it is also big
Maan also joined them.
Avni: You told that grandpa also live there?then where is he?
Maan: He is out of city for work and will come tomorrow by time of evening.You start eating.
Aman: I want to tell you something why there is no tv in my room .I want it.
Geet: Aman its not way of talking to elders.I told you before also but...
Maan cuts her
Maan:Its ok you will get it.But get ready early tomorrow we are going to your new school for admission.Good night to all.
Geet made Avni to sleep and layed beside her was lost in her thought,
"Tomorrow I would have to search for new work, its also important." While thinking she drifted in sleep.
Precap:Children in school.






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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update
aman toh maan ka bi baap nikala attitude mein
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstly Happy Ganesh Chaturthi to all.
Thanks for appreciating.
I request to them who read this ss, if not able to comment
at least hit like button
I need ,it means alot for motivation to write
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aman n his attitude!!
superb..
waiting for more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 6

Next morning
Geet: Get up! Avni.You get ready.Today you are going to your new school.
Avni get up
Then in hurry she left to see Aman is get up or not,
Maan was coming from front in hurry ,she collided with Maan but before she fall maan held her in his arms and lost in her eyes.
Geet was feeling uncomfortable tried to free herself.Due to her movement maan came out of trance and made her stand properly.
Geet:I am going to see Aman is he ready or not?
Maan: Ok.
She left from there.
Maan thought to himself,
" Maan you never reacted like this before,you lost in her eyes.How beautiful her eyes are!"
Maan stop what you thinking saying so he brushed off thoughts.
Geet: Aman get ready.
Aman:I am ready.
Then all completed breakfast and three of them left for school.
Geet said bye to Aman and Avni
Geet was searching for jobs in newspaper.
But unfortunately all were mentioned that require experianced employees.
First time she thought her degree is of no use because she thought before in big city like Delhi she will get job on basis of her education.
she thought for sometime then got ready and left from house and called taxi.
In School,
Three of them come out of car Maan took them to principal's office.
Principal sir: Good morning Mr.Khurana.
Maan: Good morning.Today am here for admission of my nephew and niece.
Principal: Are they here with you?
Maan:Yes.
Maan called them in.
Principal:In middle of session admission is not allowed.So I have to take their interview according to rules.
Maan : Ok.I will wait outside.
Aman and Avni said Good morning to principal
Principal asked them some questions.
At last he called Maan and said " They are approved for this school.Both can join from tomorrow.
Maan: Thank you so much.
Then they took tour of school.
Avni:Bhai, our new school is very nice and big
Avni:Yes,Avni its big.
Maan:Do you liked or not?How is principal sir?
Avni:I liked so much.Sir is also very nice.
Maan: Aman you liked or not?
Aman:Its fine.
Maan took them to buy necessary things for school.
Throughout the shopping Avni was talking non stoply with maan.
Maan thought "how sweet she is! Geet really took care of both very nicely.She really teach her good value.Aman is also fine but sometime behaves weird.Now I know why bro was madly in love with bhabhi? Really Geet is very different from other girls.
Oh !god again geet.maan stop what you thinking."
They reached home.
Avni: Masi , masi where are you?
Maan asked Nakul"Where is Geet?"
Nakul: She only told that she will be back at evening.
Maan:Avni may be she have some work so she gone.You are good girl then go get fresh and come for lunch and Aman you too.Ok.
Maan: Where is Geet?Why she is not here?She dont no anyone here then...
Maan got tensed.
Avni: Chachu...
Maan: Come here.
Aman and Avni took lunch with Maan.
Avni: I had lunch but I will not take dinner without Masi.
Precap:Pratap singh Khurana back to mansion.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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geet searching job maan admitted them in school maan slowly falling for her awsem do next soon



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Posted: 13 years ago
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maan is already smitten by geet!!😆

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