~JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN~2(MG)(Part 34-Pg79)) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats 4 da new thread x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all congratz for the new thread
this story is so innocent n sweet
read all the parts in 1 go
i so hate that raj
obnoxious guy 🤬
the teaser is interesting
wonder who clled
update soon
waiting eagerly

p.s pls pm me the next tym u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats 4 new thread...

n awesome teaser
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congrats on the new thread
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-24

I was not willing to pick my phone up after such a tiring night, but i don't know why my heart wanted to pick up my phone, i rubbed my eye and press green button and lazily said

"hello who is this"

when i heard

" maan "

and i heard a cry...

i said quickly "what happened maa??"

i heard "beta voh,voh...beta voh.."

i said "hain maa ..kya"

"beta voh dadi maa ko heart attck agaya hain.."

"what..."

and i quickly said

"no this can't happen, i am coming back to india, arrange for the ticket"

i cut the call and started packing up my things...

i quickly ran to the airport, took a flight...

though i have promised myself not to have that man again, but for my dadi maa i am ready to break all the promises, after dada ji she was the one who understood me, who made me meet my sweetu, who opposed all decision of my dad. she was one who was always on my side, who come i will leave her like this, only for my stupid promise...my dadi maa hold more important place than this...

the plane landed, i quickly ran out, i saw bahadur kaka standing there, i quickly reached him

" kaka, dadi ma.." and my word remain unfinished and tears made their way in my eyes...

i heard

"beta, malkin ki tabiyat bahut khrabb hain, voh bas apke naam le rahi hain..jaldi chailya..."

i nodded and ran to the car

...

we finally reached the hospital, i was praying to babaji for my dadi maa..

i reached the floor, and came to know that dadi maa was in ICU , i quickly ran towards the room..i saw mom and that man standing..

my father moved toward me, as if to hug me, but i crossed him and hugged my mom, who was crying

"beta maa..."

" kuch nahi hoga dadi maa..ko..mein agaya huin na.." aid with tears, that were coming out from my eyes...

i heard the doctor...

"ye maan kaun hain..plz uhne jaldi bulaiya...she is continuously calling him"

"mein huin maan.."

"so finally you came..good, now come with us.."

they made we wear something for protecting germs from entering...

i entered the ICU and saw my dadi maa, pale , weak..i haven't seen dadi maa like this, she was a string lady, always cheerful and responsible..and seeing her like this i broke down, tears made their way

"Mr Maan you have to strong for her"

i nodded and i was taken near her

i saw her opening her eyes

and said softly

"maan.."

"hain dadi maa maan..apke maan"

"ap agaye.."

"ji..dadi maa..."

and took her hand near my face..

"vicky kahan hain..??"

"voh bhi araha hain dadi maa...ye apne apna kya haal bana liya hain.."

"ab ap agaye hain na..ab hum bilkul thiek hon gaye ga.."

i nodded...

"beta, voh nahi ayi..."

" kaun dadi.."

"sweetu.."

i was shocked, how come dadi expected her to come, how come she know about her , i was going to ask her, what she wanted to say...when she said

"voh bahut pyaari bachi hain, kuch dino phele uska phone aya tha..she was asking me about my health, because she read somewhere that i am not keeping well...apko pata hain maan she gave me 2-hrs lecture on healthi asked her ki usko number kahan se mila tho usne batane se mana kar diya...bahut pyaari, bahut masum.."

i smiled and i know she was innocent

"par ziddi bhi hain, mein usse pucha ki voh kahan hain, usne batana se mana kar diya..aur fir phone rakh diya"

"maan hum apse kuch manga, ap hume denga"

"hain dadi maa"

"maan apni sweetu ko pass le ayiya...hum jaane se phele uss pari se milna chata hain.."

" promise kariya..."

" hain promise dadi maa"

and i was lost

"i know ap raj ke baare mein soch rahe hain, fikar mat kariya...hum hain na..when dadi is here why do you fear.."

we laughed after hearing my dadi's fav dialouge...

"ab unhe araam karne digiya.."

"ji,.."
and i went out...i saw dad coming towards me

i quickly said

"maa, mein bahut thak gaya huin, i am going to hotel.."

i heard "hotel kyun"

"maa, plz mujjhe force mat kariya ga...i am here for dadi ma...and i will not come to that home..

"but why beta.."

"maa apko yaad hain, ek baar mein vahan se nahi jaane chahata tha..par kisine mujhe ghar se nikal diya...ab mein vahan vapas nahi ana chahata..."

and i went away

i hated my dad, he took my childhood away from me, i wanted to near dadi maa, maa and MY SWEETU..but he just pushed me away , because of his false ego..i hate him..

i was driving back from hospital in cab..simple reason i don't want to pain to my dad.., my mind was still wandering on dadi maa's wish..which was my wish also..i wanted my sweetu beside me...but where is she?? how will i complete her wish...

oh baba ji please show me some way...plz...

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what is geet doing??

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
congrats for new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZAHRAN99

Arre waah...!

Aap to Rajnikant mood mein chali gayi...!!
1.New thread...!
2.Teaser...!

3.Aur kaal update dene ki promise...!

IN ONE DAY...!!


R U fine...???
I mean kuch hua to nehi na aapko...???




NAHI NAHI HUM THEIK HAIN...!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanluver

first of all congratz for the new thread

this story is so innocent n sweet
read all the parts in 1 go
i so hate that raj
obnoxious guy 🤬
the teaser is interesting
wonder who clled
update soon
waiting eagerly

p.s pls pm me the next tym u update



ADDED...THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENT...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
BEST OF LUCK Maan!!! find your girl boy!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
dadi ko heart attack aa gya...
dadi wants to meet sweetu...
maan searching his sweetu...
superb update...

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