MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 50

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Posted: 13 years ago
so all is well tht ends well...it was gr8 ff dear...luved the u potrayed maan and geet in every thick and thin of life...and pls give an epilogue too!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
aww lovely update please dont stop writing i love it 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome,amazing part
loved it
feel sad as the it's last part
loved maaneet moments
maaneet make annie and karan understand
I'll miss this ff
waiting for an epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

NOTE
HI FRNDS THIS THE THE LAST PART OF 'BMF'. I WILL TRY 2 GAVE EPILOGUE TOO AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. SO I ALSO GET RID OF FACING ANNOYING BEHAVIOUR OF ALL OF YOURS FOR MY WORKS. I TRY HARDER TO GET YOUR FEEDBACK BUT NO USE MY ALL TRIES FAILS. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DISCOURAGING ME. SEEING YOUR RESPONCE FOR MY ALL FFS I TAKE A DECISION TO STOP WRITING ON IF. AFTER 'RL' COMPLETES I QUIT IF ADN ONLY WRITE FOR MY LOYAL READERA IN MY SECREAT GROUP.
THANK YOU GUYS YOU DO WELL FOR SHOWING MY PLACE




HEY WHAT HAPPENED DEAR
U R AN BEAUTIFUL WRITER
PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING😭 AND PLZ DONT QUIT IF DEAR
SORRY IF WE HURTED U
PLEASE DONT DO THIS TO US
WE LOVE U AND UR WRITTINGS. DONT DO THIS DEAR PLZ🤢


BEAUTIFUL UPDATE OF BMF. THIS IS ONE OF THE BEAUTIFUL FF. I AM FEELING BAD THAT IT IS ENDING THIS SOON. GIVE US ONE LONG BEAUTIFUL EPILOGUE. WE MISS THIS FF
PLEASE ONCE AGAIN THINK DEAR. DONT STOP WRITING PLEASE DEAR😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME GREAT PARTS👏⭐️👏⭐️
WAS NOT ABLE TO READ FROM SOMETIME
SORRY FOR THAT
BUT NOW I HAVE READ IT😃
GREAT LOVED THE UPDATES 👍🏼
WAITING FOR EPI😉
PLZ DON'T DISCONTINUE WRITING😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
dont stop writing...i hope u will continue evn aftr RL...also waiting for update of ur another 2 ongoing ffs...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

NOTE
HI FRNDS THIS THE THE LAST PART OF 'BMF'. I WILL TRY 2 GAVE EPILOGUE TOO AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. SO I ALSO GET RID OF FACING ANNOYING BEHAVIOUR OF ALL OF YOURS FOR MY WORKS. I TRY HARDER TO GET YOUR FEEDBACK BUT NO USE MY ALL TRIES FAILS. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DISCOURAGING ME. SEEING YOUR RESPONCE FOR MY ALL FFS I TAKE A DECISION TO STOP WRITING ON IF. AFTER 'RL' COMPLETES I QUIT IF ADN ONLY WRITE FOR MY LOYAL READERA IN MY SECREAT GROUP.
THANK YOU GUYS YOU DO WELL FOR SHOWING MY PLACE




HI di... your work is really good... but y r u punishing ur regular readers for others... pls continue ur work.. waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago


But im not happy with ur note dear...

Plzzz think about us...



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Posted: 13 years ago
BE MINE FOREVER
EPILOGUE

ALL'S life goes smoothly. Annie nd Adi gt married wid deir beloved ones. All's life run easy going. Sunaina nd Sam gt imprisonment 4 hr deeds. 5 years spend happily.

Bright sunshine slanted through d glass windows,curtain s movd in d breeze. Geet ws still sleeping,laying on hr side. In d uncustomed silence he could hear hr quiet evn breathng. She awake nd see hs dark brown eyes,through curtains of hr dark lashes. He smiled at hr nd caressing hs fingersin hr hairs.'gd mg love'. Returning hs smile little shyly,she ans,'gd mg'. Maan adore hr natrual beauty nd cant help it,he bend ove hr face nd kissed hr both eyes nd cheek nd tuk hr lips,nd nibbed tenderly hr bottm lip,as pr hs daily routine. But frm past few months he do 1 mor thng. He movd 2 hr abdomen nd kissd on hr baby bump,coz she is 8moths pregnant. Geet bcm use 2 of hs touch nd kisses bt still evrytime he share proxcimity,evry fibre of hr body trembles as it ws hr frst time. At d vry momnt both hear a disturbing knok on deir door. Maan stud up nd opnd d dur. Natna ws standing ws he 3 year old dadughtr Alya nd Maaneet's 4 year old son Saksham. D day she cnfrmed hr sec pregnancy,Natanya tuk Saksham's all responsiblities ovr hr. Both kids jump on bed nd kissd hr baby bump 2 send deir love 2 coming sibbling. Geet embraced both nd loved dem. Natanya passd a glass full of almond milk2 Geet.

Natanya:chaliye uthiye or pehle isko peejiye.

Geet made bd face again:cant u tired of dis?

Natanya:pls bhabhi grow up.ap aise tantrums karoge to bachho pe bura asar padta hai.firr ye 2 b muje tang krte hai.

Maan tuk both frm hr lap and siglnd hr 2 drink it. Both kids kissed hm wish mrng.

Saksham:papa aaj ap amusmnt park leke chaloge na?

He asked in hs cute voice. Alya placed hr tiny soft hands on hs cheek nd made hm face 2 hr.

Alya:bade papa meko b jana hai.

Maan kissd both nd assured dem dat he tuk both 2 amusemnt park aftr he cm frm office in eveng. Both smiled nd clappd,showing deir happiness.

Maan:Natanya Dadima or Karan Paris se kab laut rae hai?

Natanya:wo 2 dinn me aa jayenge.

Geet:Ayush or Piyush kaise hai?
(Ayush 5 year old son of Teji and Pammi; Piyush 3 year old son of Lucky and Annie.)

Natanya:bachhe bilkul theek hai bhabhi. infact meri to 3 se bat hui.

Maan:tumahari Sia se b bat hui kya?

Natanya:ha wo Karan or Dadima, Adi-Pinky se milne b gaye the to unhone baat karwai thi.abi bolne lagi hai wo,bilkul apni mumma Pinky style me non stop.

(Adi shiftd permanantly aftr maarigae 2 Paris& wrks wid Annie&Lucky)

All laughd.Geet insist Maan dat she 2 wants 2 c all kids.

Maan:Geet keep sm patience until my little Angel came 2 our lap.aftrwrds we all go 4 a long holiday,promise .Aftr 2 days Karan nd Dadima returs. Kids were happy 2 c dem bak. Days passing cm4tably ndfinally d day of hr delivery came. Maan tuk hr 2hosp.immediately. Dadima nd Karan also went wid both. Natanya stays at home wid both kids. Geet ws in extreame pain. Maan hmslf felt hr pain nd hs body drenched wid sweat.

Dadima:Maan beta relax.she is f9.

Karan:bhai sb normal hai so need 2 worry at all.

Maan:bt she is in pain.

He said in weak voice. Maan roamed in tension,meanwhile Doc cm out wid a smile. All rush 2 hr.

Maan curiously:Doc howz she?and howz my baby?

Doc:dont worry Mr.khurana,she is f9 nd baby 2 and congratulation its a baby girl.

A wide smile came on all faces. Karan immediately in4md Natanya.

Dadima:hum mill skte hai?

Doc nodded yes nd all went inside. Geet ws laying,seems vry weak,bt hving a smile on hr face. Dadima kissd hr nd tuk cute little princess in hr arms. She ws sleeping calmly ndhr face seems vry Angelic. Karan bend nd kissd hr. He placd small gold chain in hr nek. Maan sat besides Geet. She raised hrslf nd Maan hlp hr. Dadima gv hr 2 Maan,as he is getting desperate 2 c hs Angel. Dadi left both alone. Maan kissed Geet and hs daughtr tenderly. Aftr 2 days she gt dischrgd nd came bak 2 KM. Natanya gv warm wlcm2 both. Saksham nd Alya r so excited 2 c hr. Both caressed hr cheek lovingly nd she also smiles bak in hr sleep,feeling d love of hr elder sibblings.

Dadima:Maan beta kya naam socha hai apne inka?

Maan:Diya. Just perfect 4 my cute little Angel. Al blessed d baby.

Maan tuk both 2 deir room. Geet placed hr in hr craddle. Maaneet luk hr sleeping calmly nd embraced Geet. She also hugged hm bak.tears of happiness poured frm hr eyes. Maan parted little nd wiped.

Maan:y dis Geet?

Geet:coz i m happy.u filled my life wid ur love nd brot 2 precious gifts 2 our life.i love u Maan.

Maan:i love u too jaan.U gave meaning 2 my life.

Maaneet:BE MINE FOREVER.

Both murmured nd smooched again.


Note-THIS ENDS. AFTR DAT I END LFR TOO AND THOT OF GIVING RL IN SUMMRY SO I LL B FREE AND QUIT FROM IF. NO COURAGE LEFT IN ME TO BEAR MORE INSULT OF MY WORK SO PLS DONT FORCE ME.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
may be i didnt comment each and evry time but always pressed the like button...infact got used to reading it daily...now will miss it...plzzz dont stop writing atleast seeing the like of ur ff...all the best...

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