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Posted: 13 years ago
BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 66

BOTH Karan & Annie leave. Geet nd Natanya sitting outside d rom of Maan as he is sleeping coz of d effect of medi. Meanwhile Doc gv prescription of medi. Natanya went outside 2 brot all. Geet ws all alone. Wen aftr 15 mins Natanya cm bak nd she found Geet no where. She askd frm Hosi.staff bt no1 hv ny clue abot hr. Natanya check in all rooms.,bt Geet is nt presnt in ...
Hospital. She gt worried nd immediately informd Karan nd Annie abot dis.

Karan:Natanya chekd again.

Natanya:Karan kaisi bate kr rae ho maine achhe se do pura Hospital chek kia hai bt she is no where. Pure staff ko pata nai hai upar se bhabhi ka phone b switch off aa raha hai.

Karan:aise kaise wo gayab ho skti hai?

Natanya:Karan mujhe to baht ghbrahat ho rai hai.

Karan:dont scared Natanya,tm 1 bar firr chek karo tb tk main police ko leke waha pahunchta hu.

Natanya chekd nd calld hr again nd again,bt result ws same as b4.

Annie nd Lucky both reachd dere. Annie askd hr nd she told evrthng 2 dem. Karan also came wid police. At d sm momnt Maan regain hs concious nd hear evrythng. All strt searching hr...

Geet ws in an old godown. She opn hr eyes slowly2 nd found hrslf tied wid rope. Hr hand nd legs tied wid a strong rope. Hr mouth is also struvk wid old piece of cloth. She cant undrstnd wats going on. Who r dey nd y dey kidnappd hr. Suddnly she sw 1 familiar figure wid hr dizzy eyes. She raised hr head nd luk upwards. Hr all nerves shold seeing hr face. D coming 1 orderd 2 opn hr mouth.

Geet(in shock):mumma aap yaha?

Sunaina:i m sorry beta apko yaha aise lana pada,lekin hum krte b kya apne or koi rasta hi nai chhoda tha huare liye. Kitni bar humne apko marne ki koshish ki magar hr baar..(she grind hr teeth in angr)hr baar apke majnu ne apko bacha lia. Party me aap par shendeliar girvaya, shopping area me humare goons ne apko uthane ki koshish ki, or terrace pe b humi the wo jisne apko dhakka dia tha,lekin apko Natanya ne waha bheja tha isliye sabne unhi pe shak kia. Magar har baar wo Maan bech me aa gaya.

Geet's eyes widend wid shok:to iska matlab wo aap thi jo ye sab krwa rai thi..

Sunaina:ha humi ne krwaya ye sb kyunki apke jeete ji sari property huare bachho ko kabi nai mill skti. Maan ko marne k baad hume laga tha ki sab humara ho jayega,magar wo budiya kuchh zada hi tez nikali.usne Maan k acci se pehle hi will change kr di thi or sab apke naam kr dia tha.agar hume pta hota to hum Maaan k bajaye seedha waar ap par hi krte.

Geet:Maan ko apne marne ki koshish ki(she luk at hr in disgust)

Sunaina:ha wo b humi ne krwaya tha.ab aap chupchap in papers pe sign kr dejiye wrna Maan k liye achha nai hoga.abi to sirf uska pau tuta hai kahi aisa na ho wo khud pura khtam hi ho jaye.

Geet:kaise kr skti hai ap ye sb apne bete k sath?

Sunaina:he is nt my son.now shut ur mouth nd sign it.


She signld hr goon nd he opend hr rope. Sunaina passd papers 2 hr. At d same momnt Maan nd Adi enters in.

Maan:Geet sign mat krna.

All eyes movd 2 hm nd Geet smiles seeinh hr love ner hr.

Sunaina in amusmnt:aap yaha kaise pahunche?

Maan:y mom? Y u do all dis?just 4 d sake of property?1 bar kaha to hota main khushi se sab un 2 k naam kr deta.

Sunaina:Maan i m nt emotional fool(Maan trying 2 mov 2wards hr)stop dere or i ll shoot her.

Maan:ok relax main kuchh nai karunga bt plss Geet ko hurt mat kariye.

Sunaina signal nd her men held both Maan nd Adi. Sunania 4ced Geet 2 sign d papers or she will shoot Maan. Meanwhile Maan sw Karan nd Lucky,both were hiding behind d large boxes. All 4 talk through signals. Lucky threw a stone on Sunaina' hand,due 2 whch hr gun dropped on floor. Karan movd quickly nd tuk gun in hs hands. Maan freed hmslf nd Adi nd start beating all d goons. Lucky, Karan and Adi also help hm in beating goonns. Annie nd Natanya 2 entrd nd Freed Geet b4 Sunaina coz any harm 2 hr. Police also came nd arrest all d goons.

Annie sw hr mom,hvng hatred in hr eyes:i hate u mom,u ruined our life.

Karan:y mom? We nvr evr thot dat u r behind all dis.

Natanya:mom apne to mujhe b fasane ki koshish ki.bhabhi ko dhakka apne mara or ilzam mujhe pe dal dia.

Karan:mom aaj main bhai ki wajhse hi zinda hu or ap unhi ki jaan lena chahti thi.i ll nvr 4gv u.

Geet rush 2 Maan nd hugged hm tightly. Maan 2 embrassd hr.

Maan:jaan r u ok?

She nodded yes and he snuggled hr mor. Police tuk hr away. Karan nd Annie went closr 2 hm nd apolozise 4 hdeir mother's sins. Maan huggd both.

Maan:tm 2 ko sorry bolne ki zarurat nai hai tm pehle b mere apne the or humesha rahoge. Mom ki wajhse humare rishte pe kabi koi asar nai padega.

Geet:Maan ghar chale dadima pareshan ho rai hongi?

Maan:Lucky tm sabko leke KM jao mujhe police station jana hai kuchh 4malities hai jo abi karni hai.


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum updt...hate sunaina...thank god maan reached on time...her children too hate hr...poor geet is shocked with all that is happening ...the ff is ending😭...waitng fr the nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
thank god maan came on time n save geet
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy dat kids r nt like der mother...maan saved geet
Edited by maanmeet1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh... waise i knew it yeh mom kuch jayada hi sweet thi... diabetes ho gyi😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
psycho lady...for whom she did all things...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum updt...hate sunaina🤬
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Posted: 13 years ago




Last part ...So soon...



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Posted: 13 years ago
oh teri it turned out to be his mom
well looks as if she wasnt his real mom then which is why she said that her children wouldnt get anything
now that i think about it that does seem as if she was the one behind it all
well after his brother and his wife were out of the clear only she and sam remained to be the suspects right
couldnt have been someone who didnt know them right
wow so you finally solved all the mysteries
and to think all this because of money really sad that
her kids must be so ashamed right to call her their mother especially annie who is so close to geet
that was just pathetic of that woman and sad no really
but all is well now so glad they came there
wait how did they know where to find geet i wonder
hope you clarify that as well too
nahinnn not the last chapter already man
hope you will start something else too soon again
would love to read it if you do

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 66
nice part...
OMG that was Sunaina all the time...
but now shes caught...
cont soon dear...

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