MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 33
nice part...
poor Geet...
and Maan grrr...
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part 34
so thats her bro...
does he know all about Geet?
Maan is now realizing...
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part 35
nice part...
what they gonna do in Paris?
cont soon dear...
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Awesome updates
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Superb update...
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very interesting ff
read it in one go
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan bolte hai na...try try till u succeed...toh try karo...shayad geet maan le...magar usse pehle teji ko toh manao...

superb n beautiful updates...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

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Posted: 12 years ago
THANKS A TON GUYS FOR UR LOVE N RESPONCE ...SORRY FOR NOT REPLYING TO EACH N EVERY COMMENT ..BUT I READ THEM ALLL. I UPDATE FROM PH SO NOT ABLE TO GIVE REPLY ..
I KNOW U ALL R WAITING FOR MAANEET CONFRONTATION...WE R HEADING FOR IT...HAVE FAITH..MAAN DID WRONG WITH GEET N HE WILL HAVE TO MANAOFY HER WITH HIS STYLE..😉😆
BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 36

PARIS : 9 PM
GEET sitting in a garden area all alone,coz she wants to b spend sm time alone. Pammi too allowed her,dont want to force her for any thng. She was reading a magzine. Meanwhile, Villa's electric doors open again. A very good looking guy wearing lather sports jacket and denim jeans enters inside on a sports bike and moved to parking area. After parking ...
hs bike he came straight to Geet. He smiles,looking at her. But Geet was still in confusion who is he? She actually cant recognize him.

GEET:aap kon hai? I m sorry maine aapko pehchana nahi.

He was her second elder brother Lakhveer Kapoor,popularly know as Lucky.

LUCKY:most of the time log mujhe yahi kehte hai (he joked)

Pammi too came to join them.

PAMMI:Geet budhu pehchana nahi? bhai hai tera Lucky.

Geet's mouth wide open. She smiles and rush to him and hugged him as both see each other after very long time.

LUCKY:kaisi hai meri chhutki?

GEET:main theek hu veerji aap kaise ho?

LUCKY:ekdum mast.

GEET(explains):wo veerji aapko bahut saal pehle dekha tha na isliye.aap to teji veerji ki shaadi me bhi nahi aaye the.

LUCKY:tab mere exams the na to veerji ne kaha functions se zada zaruri exams hai,isiliye nahi aaya tha...par koi baat nahi ab to tu aa gayi hai to hum sab milke khub enjoy karenge...ghumenge firenge jaise bachpan me karte the... Achha ye bata akeli aayi hai ya Maan b aaya sath me?

His words gave lot of pain to hr,as she hd no ans to hs que. Pammi undrstnd hr situation. She gav a sign to Lucky,dat he dont talk nythng about Maan. Lucky gt nd tried to change d atmosphere whch gt serios suddnly wid d discussion of hs name.

LUCKY:parzaiji veerji aa gaye ya abi office me hi hai?

PAMMI:ha bs aane hi wale hai.

LUCKY:ha or aate hi pehle meri clas lenge. Geet tujhe yaad hai kaise mujhe dante the wo silsila abi tak chalu hai.

Geet smiles little bit. Both feel good seeing hr smile.

PAMMI:ha to aise kam mat kia kr na k unhe gussa aaye. Chal ab change kr ja...or Geet tu b andr aa ja bahar thand badd rai hai tujhe sardi lag jayegi.

GEET:przaiji aap chalo main aa jaungi

PAMMI:achha theek hai pr jaldi aajaio.

She nodded yes.nd both Pammi nd Lucky wnt inside. Geet sit all alone. Cold breeze start blowing. She feels shiver in hr body. So she stand up to go inside. Suddnlu she feels a coat draped around hr from behind. She look bakside nd sw Maan standing dere. She bcom dumb struck lookin hm dere. She trnd to hm.

GEET:Maan tum yaha?

Maan com closr to hr nd placed hs finger on hr soft supple pink lips to shut hr mouth. He looked in hr eyes. Den he snaked hs arm on hr waist nd pull hr closer. He gazed hr lips. Geet's breath get harder. He placed hs anoth hand half coming on hr neck nd half on hr cheek. He start pulling hr towrds hm. Then he leaned ovr hr lips. Geet closed hr eyes. Maan took hr lips in hs. He suck and bite hr lips. Geet completely lost in hm.
Bt hr fantasy broked soon wid d sound of Teji's porch. He arrived home. She open hr eyes and looked all around,bt Maan is nowhere.

GEET(thought):ye sab main kya soch rai hu. No i have to forgot hm. Wo sab main bahut pechhe chhod aayi hu. Ab mera or Maan ka koi lena dena nai hai. Mujhe strong hona hi hoga.aaj ke baad main aisa koi khyal nai aane dungi apne dimag me...

She lost in hr thoughts nd sddnly shocked by d touch on hr shoulder.

TEJI:kya hua Geet tu dar kyu gai?

GEET:kuchh nai veerji bas aise hi kuchh soch rahi thi.

TEJI:ab tu ye sochna vochna chhod.tu ab apne bhaiyo k sath hai hai to sochne ka kaam hm karenge tu sirf apni zindgi njoy kr(he draped hs blazer to her,to save hr frm cold) ab chal ander warna sardi lag jani hai tujko.

He take her inside. Geet went to her room. Nd Teji too go to his room for changing his clothes. All came to dinner table. All enjoying the meal and Lucky trying every possibility to make her happy. They all talk casually. Geet feels good with them and smiles little bit, as Lucky is very funny. They all three make sure not to discuss any thing about Maan or his family. Aftet meal all went to their rooms. Geet laid on bed but cant able to sleep properly, she is very disturbed inside... But she decided do stick on her decision.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 37

PARIS: 6 AM
Flight land on airport. Maan, Annie and Adi cme out aftr cheking process. Dey all welcmd by hr company's MD, Mr. Peter Rodriks. He make sure dat dey all feel comfortable. A luxuarious Bentely waiting for dem. All 4 sit nd travelled to Annie's mansion in Paris. Paris is 1 of d most bautiful city of France. Dey all explore d aura of dis city. Wid in 45 mi...
ns day all reched to hr mansion. All entered and relaxed demselves on couch.

MAAN:Annie Paris to aa gaye,ab aage kya plan hai?

ANNIE:Geet ko dhundhenge or kya.( she turnd to Peter) Peter have do me a favour, (she gave him a pic of Geet) she is my frnd named Geet. Nd i hav a doubt dat dese days she is staying at Kapoor Villa,owned by d rich business tycoon Mr Tejveer Kapoor. U hav to find out all info.about hr as quick as possible.

PETER:but mam its nt soo easy. Hs villa is surrounded by many security guards approx 100 security guard r always on work. Mam wo koi kille se kam nai hai. Its very impossibe to peep inside.

ANNIE:i dont wnt any excuses. I only wnt result at any cost. By hook or by crook do what i said. Find out she is dere or nt nd wht hr daily routines...on wat ocassions she came out of d house. I dont mind how much money or time is required bt i wnt ans of all ques.

PETER:ok mam i try my level best. He left nd all 3 went to deir rooms and do some rest as dey all were very tired. Peter was very tensed how he can do this.1 day is passed bt he found nothng. He use his contacts nd luckily he found som1 who can do dis work. Actually Kapoor Villa's cctv chked evry month,so evry month company snd 1technision fr checking all d camers. Peter bribed that technician. He agreed nd go to Kappr Villa. He chekd all the cameras and also tried to find out where is she. Meanwhile all family memebers came for breakfast. Techanisian match the Geet's face wid the pic and make sure that she is d same girl whom he is searching. They all talking.

PAMMI:suniye main kya soch rahi thi ab Geet b yaha hai to kyu na ghumne chale.

TEJI:good idea. Pammi tum Geet k sath chali jao or dono apne liye shopping b kar lena.

PAMMI:kyu aap nai chaloge?

TEJI:jaan samjha karo office me aajkal kaam bahut hai.or jab se tumne concieve jiya hai meri help karni b bilkul band kr di hai.tm ek kaam karo Lucky ko sath le jao.

GEET's ear open at d talk of Conceving hr:kya parzaiji ne conceive kiya kab?mujhe to apne bataya hi nai. Congrats veerji. (all smiles and she felt so happy for both)

PAMMI:ha main batane wali thi,par bato bato me yaad hi nai raha.

She hugged hr as she sit next to her.

GEET:konsa mnth hai?

PAMMI:sec.

Meanwhile Lucky came to join them.

TEJI:Lucky ek kaam hai tujhse.

LUCKY:hukum karo veerji,banda hazir hai.

TEJI:sunn aaj tu office se off lele or Pammi or Geet ko ghumane le ja sara dinn ghar pe bore hoti rehti hai...waise to Pammi ko akele bhej deta lekin is time pe main koi chance nahi lena chahta to sath hoga to mujhe tension nai hogi.

LUCKY:theek hai veerji main le jaunga.

TEJI:or sunn wapsi pe shoppng b krwa dio dono ko.

LUCKY:changa veerji.tussi fikr na karo main Summer Paradise Mall le jaunga,waha se jo shoppn krni hai kr lenge dono.

TEJI:ab khush Lucky jayega dono k sath.

PAMMi:lekinLucky tu waha jaldi jaldi chalo aise nai bolega ladkio ko time lagta hai shoppng me.

LUCKY:promise parzaiji main koi shikayat nai karunga. Waise b chhutki itne salo baad aai hai.so nythng fr hr.

Dat technician listen evrythng. He wnt out nd call Peter to gav hm all info he collects. Peter immediatly calls Annie.

PETER:hello mam.

ANNIE:ha peter hav u got smthng.

PETER:yes mam apka kaam ho gaya hai?

ANNIE:good,kya info. Hai?

PETER:mam jis grl ki pic pne di thi wo kapoor villa me hi hai. nd 1 mor impt.news mam today she is going to Summer Paradise Mall wid hr family in evening.

ANNIE(wid a big smile on hr face):gd job Peter.well done.

PETER:thanx mam.

She cuts d call nd rush to Maan & Adi. She ws vry happy nd cant able to handle hr happiness. She jumped on maan nd hugged him.

MAAN(in amuzement):kya hua Annie tum itna uchhal kyu rahi ho?

Annie's eyes sparkel in happiness.

ANNIE:Bhai guess what, Geet yahi hai Paris me.mera guess sahi nikla.

Listen to this both Maan nd Adi get excited. Maan's heart jumping in happiness.

MAAN:tu sach keh rahi hai na. Geet yaha hai Paris me?(Annie nodded yes) to fir main abhi jaunga use wapis lane.

Annie hold his arm and stopped hm.

ANNIE:bhai control ot thoda akkal se kaam lo. Agar hum waha jayenge to Geet se milna to durr ulta Teji veerji apne ghar me ghus aane ke ilzam me hum sabko jail ki hawa khilwa denge.

MAAN:geet meri patni hai or uss se milne se mujhe duniya ki koi takat nai rok sakti.uske bhai b nahi.

Annie gave a llok to him:Bhai, Geet aapse naraz hai or ho sakta hai uske bhai bhi ho,aise me hum waha jayenge t khamkha tamasha ho jayega.

MAAN:to tum kya chahti ho main hath pe hath rakh k baith jau...


ANNIE:nahi bhai maine aisa kab kaha. Main sirf ye keh raha hu ki aapko pehle Geet se akele me baat karni chahiye,taki aap khul k apne dil ki baat use bata sako.

Maan:or bina waha jaye ye kaise hoga?

ANNIE:hoga or wo b aaj hi. Suniye Geet apni family ke sath shopping ke liye Summer Paradise Mall jane wali hai.tu hum wahi use gherenge.

MAAN:hmm good idea. Theek hai to firr yahi karte hai.

(He smirked and thought): Geet aaj to tumhe mere samne aana hi hoga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomee and amazingg but i wanttt more
i cant wait maneet confront😳😳😳

Edited by maaniqra - 12 years ago

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