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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

awesome part

who is the man who saved geet

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

part 31
nice part...
OMG she left and who is this person who saved her?
he seems to know her too...

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

part 32
nice part...
Maan has always been selfish...
Sameera left him so now hes falling for Geet...
disgusting...
cont soon dear...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

BE MINE FOREVER
PART 33

ANNIE still not satisfied with his explanations. She still have many questions in hr mind.

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ANNIE:or bhai Geet? I mean aap sirf dadi k liye laute. Kya aapke dil mein Geet k liye thodi si b jagah nahi hai?

MAAN:hai,infact aaj sirf wahi ek hai jiske naam se ye dil dhadkata hai.lekin us wqt aisa nai tha. Mujhe yahi lagta tha ki mere acci. Ke pechhe bhi Geet ka hi hath hai or wo ye sab natak tum sabki sympathy hasil karne ke liye kar rahi hai,isliye jab tmne mujhe Adi k paas traning k liye bheja,to un 3 mahino me maine Geet par nazar rakhi or uske sabi docs se bhi meeting ki jo tumne in 6 mahino me change kiye the. Fir jab mujhe vishwas ho gaya ki wo sach me sadme me hai tab maine Adi se kaha ki wo ab bol de ki main ghar lautne k liye ready hu. Ghar aaya to Geet k kareeb kab aa gaya pata hi nai chala.

Suddenly Annie realize Geet was not there.

ANNIE:bhai Geet kaha hai? Baato baato mein main ye to bhul hi gayi ki mujhe ussse bhi to milna hai. I missed hr so much. Bhai Geet so rahi hai kya?

Her questions shaked him and he realized d demand of the current situation. Both Adi & Maan looked each other faces,as they dont have any answer to her ques.

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Its around 3 am. Geet got her concious. She sit in a car mutly next to that stranger. Both reached to aerodrome. All formalities had done. He take hr to his private jet. Tears rolled down on hr cheeks as she is leaving all her relations behind forever. Both sit inside. She is still crying. He console her.she rested her head on his chest and he embraced her tightly. Jet take off...

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ANNIE:Geet kaha hai bhai bolo na?aap chup kyu ho?

MAAN:Annie Geet kaha hai ye to hume b pata nai hai.

ANNIE(tensed):kya matlab k apko nai pata geet kaha hai?

Maan told hr everything. Annie got a big shock and fell down on sofa. Maan hold her. Adi gave hr a water.

ANNIE(impatiently):bhai geet ko dhundho.pata nai kaha hogi.

MAAN: Annie calm down,hum itni der se Geet ko hi dhund rae hai.achha ek baat bato Geet k dost kon kon hai kyunki Geet ko sabse zada tum janti ho.

ANNIE: bhai mere alawa Geet ka koi dost nahi hai.wo bahut reserved nature ki hai,kisi k b sath jaldi khul nahi pati hai.bhai yaha aisa koi nahi hai jiske pas wo ja sake. Bhai apne mandiro ya gurdwaro me check kiya?

MAAN: nahi waha to nai kiya.

ADI: lets go Delhi k sabi dharmik sthano ko bhi check karte hai.

MAAN: hum ye alag alag directions me dhundhege.

All three went to search her. They moved their cars in Delhi everywhere. Check all spritual places but no result. At 8 am all came back to Adi's place empty hands. All three are very worried. Many bad thoughts swimmed in their minds. Annie's anger grew more.

ANNIE: maine kaha tha na apse apke bharose use chhod kar ja rahi hu uska dhyan rakhna. Lekin nai itna chhota sa kaam bhi aapse nahi hua. Aaj Geet pata nahi kaha hai,kis haal me hai.or ye sab sirf apki wajhse. Pehle aapne apni us Sameera k sath milkar us bechari ko itna pareshan kiya,uss se b apka mann nahi bhara tha jo ye kiya uske sath. I told u bhai agar meri dost ko kuchh bhi hua to main aapko kabi maaf nahi karungi.

She moved from there in anger. Maan have no ans to hr assicuations. Adi went behind her.

ADI: Annie pls gussa mat karo or meri baat dhyan se suno.

ANNIE: bhaiya mujhe kuchh nai sunna mujhe sirf Geet chahiye thats it.

ADI: Annie main manta hu tumhara gussa jayaz hai, lekin iss tarah ek dusre par ilzam laga kar to problem solve nahi hogi na isliye pls shant ho jao. Dekho iss time Maan sir bahut pareshan hai aise mein hum unn par ilzaam lagayenge to wo or pareshan ho jayenge. I know k Geet ke liye tumhara concern bilkul jayaz hai lekin iss tarah se Maan sir pe gussa dikha kar Geet nahi milegi... Achha hoga ki hum ek dusre ko blame karne ke bajaye ye soche ki aage hume kya karna hai... Aage ki strategy decide karte hai tabhi koi result aayega.

ANNIE: Adi bhaiya Geet theek to hogi na?

She looked at him in great hope.

ADI: dont worry Annie humari Geet ko Kuchh nahi hoga...

He patted on her head lovengly and gave her a moral support...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 34

ADI trying to convience her.

ADI: Annie Maan sir or Geet dono ek dusre se ko chahte hai. Dono ke bech me misunderstanding ho gayi hai wo b kyunki conversation gap hai isliye...so its very important k dono ki galatfahmi ko durr kiya jaye. Maan sir or Geet dono is time emotionally weak or disturbed hai. So its very important k hum samjhdari or thande dimag se kaam le. They both need us. So calm down.

ANNIE:ok bhaiya main abb gussa nai kahrungi lekin Geet...what abut her bhaiya?

ADI:sochte hai...kuchh na kuchh to sochna hi padega.

All 3 sitting together and thinking what to do next. Annie travelling from one corner to another. Meanwhile her stare stuck on a old newspaper. One of its headline attracts her attention suddenly. She grabed the newspaper and read it carefully. Adi & Maan look hr in amuzment. Annie immediately call Romeo. He picked up d call.

ANNIE:hello Romeo.

ROMEO:hi Annie how r u?nd where are u?

ANNIE:romeo main indai me hu.lekin abi ye sab chhodo.mujhe ek favour chahiye...tumhe abhi k abhi mera ek kaam karna hai.

ROMEO:bolo Annie kya baat hai?

ANNIE:Romeo Mr. Kapoor indino India me hai.

ROMEO:kon wo Kapoor empire k malik to nahi jo world k top most Richest persons me gine jate hai?

ANNIE:ha wahi.Romeo pata karo wo is time kaha hai. I need all information regarding hm.

ROMEO:ok Annie mujhe thoda sa time do main abhi sari info nikalwata hu.

He cuts d call.

MAAN:kya hua Annie kon hai ye Mr. Kapoor and Y r u so curious too know about hm?

ANNIE:bhai ye humari last hope hai,hmne delhi ka chhapa chhapa chhan mara lekin Geet ka kuchh pata nai chala,pr ab lag raha hai pata chal jayega,bs aap thoda patience rakho. Romeo ka call aata hi hoga uske baad sab clear ho jayega.

Romeo call back and gave her all d information he collects.

ROMEO:Annie Mr. Kapoor pichhle dino India me the. Par pata chala hai wo kal raat ko hi wapis chale gaye. Kisi ko theek se pata nahi hai ki kya baat hui hai. Annie sab theek hai na?

ANNIE:Romeo thankyou soo much.dekho ab meri baat dhyan se suno,ek or kaam hai jo tume karna hai.

Annie gave him instruction,what he have to do now.

MAAN:Annie yaha main Geet ko leke pareshan ho raha hu or tm bahar jane k plans bana rahi ho.

ANNIE:bhai mujhme na aapse jada akkal hai or Geet ki fikar bhi.

ADI:lekin Annie bataogi tum kya karne ki soch rahi ho?

ANNIE:Adi bhaiya ye dekhiye Mr. Kapoor aap kaise bhul skte hai inko(Adi take a deep thought). Are bhaiya ye Mr. Kapoor hai.

Now Adi got dat who is he.

ADI:oh ab yaad aaya. U mean Geet inke sath hai?

MAAN(still in confusion):koi mujhe batayega kon hai ye or geet se kya lena dena hai iska...

He is fuming,feeling jealous with him.

ANNIE(with a smile):bhai ye mr. Kapoor hai geet ki massi ke bade bete. Mr. Tejveer Kapoor. Paris k rishest bussiness tycoon. Bhai hum Geet ko sb jagah dhoondh chuke hai lekin wo nahi mill rahi iska seedha matlab yahi hai ki Teji veerji use apne sath Paris le gaye hai. Romeo ne mujhe bataya hai ki wo kal raat ko hi nikale hai.

MAAN:par ye sirf ek andaza hai.kya pata Geet yahi hui to?

ANNIE:bhai hum Geet ko Paris me dhundhte hai or yaha ka intzam bhi main karke jaungi...i m sure bhai Geet Paris me hai. Adi bhaiya, Maan bhai pls aap log apni packing kar lo coz maine Romeo se bol diya hai wo humari tickets confirm kar de. Ye ek business tour hai isliye Visa ka prob b nai hoga. Maan bhai aap embassy me call karo or ye kaam pura karwao tab tak main baki ki tayiyari karti hu.

In eveng Romeo nd Tasha came to Adi's place.

ROMEO:ye lo sis tickets tumhare jane ki sari taiyari ho gayi hai.raat k 8 baje ki flight hai.

Annie:thanx Romeo. Achha mere Paris k staff ko inform kar diya hai na ki main aa rahi hu.

ROMEO:dont worry Annie.meri baat peter se ho gayi hai maine use bata diya hai ki ab tum apne Paris wale office se hi operate karogi. Isliye use Mansion ko b rehne k liye ready karne ko bol diya hai.u dont worry at all.

ANNIE:Romeo ek kaam or hai tum dono se.tm dono pechhe se Geet ko dhumdhne ka kaam jari rakhna. Ye ek private dectative agency ka no hai zarurat pade to inki help b le lena. Lekin ek baat ka dhyan rahe ye baat sirf hm 5 k bech hi rehni chahie.

TASHA:dont worry mam aap befikar hoke jaiye.

ANNIE:Or ha ek or baat mere is trip ke bare me ye Geet k gayab hone k bare me meri family me se b kisi ko kuchh pata nahi chalna chahiye. Romeo tum jo b kaam karoge bahut hi carefully karna or Tasha tm Dadi ko dekhne k bahane ghar jana or waha ki sari reports mujhe batati rehna,

both nodded yes.

ROMEO:dont worry Annie main sab sambhal lunga...jaisa tum chahti ho waisa hi hoga...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 35

In PARIS : 2 pm
A lavish Royals Royace stop in front of palace lyk mansion. Electric gate opens nd car entrd in d mansion. Immediatly a srvnt rush to opn d door of car. Geet nd Teji came out frm d car. It was a huge white modern terracotta roofed villa built on various level with a profusion of flower draped balconies, balustrades and floor of ceiling windows enjoy...

ing dramatic view of rocky coast above which dey were perched,of looming mountains and a breath catching expanse of azure water.
She hesitated to go inside. Teji cm to hr nd huggd hr.

TEJI:kya soch rai chal andr ye tera ghar hai samjhi.

GEET(hesitately):lekin veerji main yaha achanak aise...

TEJI:kaha na ye tera ghar hai ab chal andr.

Both entrd.it was lyk a heaven.wid d entranc she saw a big hall attached wid marble stairs and pillars covered wid creep. Each nd evry corner decorated wid expansive items. Bneath stairs there is musical fountain,which looks very beautiful. Suddenly a grl wearing vry loose top of pink nd white colour wid black slackes rush to Geet nd hugged hr warmly. She was vry excited nd happy to saw hr aftr sch a lng time. Geet too huggd hr bak. She is a wife of Teji named Pammi.

PAMMI:Geet kaisi hai tu? I m so happy to c u dere.apni shadi k aad aaj dekh rai hu tujhe. Tujhe to humari yaad ati hi nai.

GEET:nai parzaiji aisi bat nai hai..

PAMMI:rehne de 2 sab pata hai mujhe. Bt i m so happy ki iss aar ye tujhe leke aaye hai.mujhe tujhse bahut sari bate krni hai...actully busy hone ki wajahse teri shadi me b hm aa nai paye the...

This topic hurts hr nd Teji noticed it so he intrupts their convrsation.

TEJI:are Pammi sari bate kya darwaje pe hi krni hai ab to ye yai hai krte rehna bate.filhal isko iska room dikha de.thak gayi hai itne lambe safar k baad.

PAMMI:i m sorry main b na jhali hu bato me sb bhul jati hu.chal Geet tu aram kr le pehle tb tk main lunch lgwti hu. Suniye, aap b fresh ho jao.

Pammi take hr to a beautiful nd lavish room. There ws a enormous bed covered wid dark satin sheet,only half aware of d exclusive wood. D array of sft furnishing defined deir status nd taste.

PAMMI:Geet tu frsh ho ja tb tk main baki kaam dekh leti hu.

She came out nd went straight to hr bdrum,where Teji tryng to get out of hs tight fit black taxedo. Pammi helps hm. She huggd hm.

PAMMI:jaanu i miss u soo much.

TEJI(smiles):me too sweethrt.

Pammi loosen d hug:suniye apse kuch puchhna hai.

TEJI:geet k bare me?

PAMMI:ha wo aaj mujhe kuch bujhi2 si lagi.maine jb use pehle dekha tha to wo hr wqt muskurati rhti hai lekn aaj uski ankhe udas si lagi. Kya baat hai.

TEJI(fumed):kuchh theek nai hai pammi. Ye to rabb ka shukr hai ki main waha time pe pahunch gaya wrna unlogo ne to koi kasr nai chhodi thi meri behan ki jaan lene me.

PAMMI(shocked):aise kyu bol rahe ho janu?

Teji told hr evrythng what happnd dere nd how he saved hr frm acci.

TEJI:Pammi isliye main nai chahta ki waha ki koi b baat uske samne ho.

PAMMI:aap fikr na karo main uska pura dhyan rakhungi.

TEJI:achha ye batao wo nalayak kaha hai?

PAMMI:aap b na hr waqt us bechare k pechhe pade rehte ho...

TEJI:pechhe na padu to wo nalayak koi kaam na kare. Tumne to use sar pe chada k rakha hai isiliye mujhe sakht hona padta hai.

PAMMI:arre bab lucky is time kaha hoga,office gaya hai.

TEJI:pammi ab ek kaam karo jaldi se lunch lagwa do,fir mujhe office b jana hai.

PAMMI(made golguppa face):ye kya baat hui abi aaye ho or aate hi jana hai.

Teji hld hr frm bak nd whisper in hr ear:to kya hua raat to apni hai.

Pammi blush,loosen his grip over hr nd wnt out.

In INDIA :6:30 PM
ANNIE:Romeo koi b baat ho mujhe cntact kr lena or Tasha b careful while attndng my prsnl calls,coz ghar se call tumare pas hi aynge(both nodded yes. She trnd to Maan & Adi) aap dono ki packing ho gai?

MAAN:ha ho gai hai.

ANNIE:to chale?

All 3 wnt to Airport at 8 pm sharp dey catch d flight. Plane take off. Maan was vry dstrbd inside. He really hope dat in Paris he must found hr safely. He closed his eyes nd c hr face in hs thoughts.

MAAN(thought): pata nahi kaisi hogi. Mujhse baat karegi bhi ya nahi or main kya kahunga us se. I just hope wo ek baar bas ek baar meri baat sunn le. Geet main aa raha hu.

At the same moment Geet too open her eyes as she hear his voice. She whispered "MAAN".

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

all 3 parts are superb..

the lack of communication between them seperated them

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

oh ya forgot of her brother man
well what with maan being maan it just went out of our mind
can ya believe it he actually thought she is responsible for his accident and kept an eye on her then only he realised that she is actually in shock
waah maan waah i must applaud you coudlnt even believe your sister that geet wasnt well you had to keep an eye on her to realise that fact
and then he says he loves her my foot he does
its not only the lack of communication that separated them but his ego his stupidity his lack of trust on geet
i hope her veerji doesnt make it easy for maan to see geet that will serve him right
uggg he makes me so mad that maan
but triple updates so cool man

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

part 33,34,35:

So geet flew away to paris with her brother...aur yaha annie ko sab patah chala ki dono ke beech kya huva...

Annie ne der se hi sahi par pehchana ki geet kaha gayi hogi...aur uski andaaza sahi hain aur is baat ka pata unhe paris jaake hi milega...

Geet ke bhayya aur bhabhi toh usse bahut pyaar karte hain yaar...so happy that she will stay safe here till maan comes and takes her with him...par mujhe nahin lagta ki it will be that easy for him to take her with him as even her brother doesn't have a good impression on them...

Ab dekhthe hain kya hoga...the 3 are coming to paris...

Update soon...Waiting for it...

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

The updates were fabulous.So now Geet is in Paris with her brother.Maan,Adi and Annie are going there as well.I wonder how Geet will react when she sees Maan.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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