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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

part 24
interesting...
then why was he acting like Yash before?
hes insecure and scared for Geet's safety?

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

part 25
i feel like slapping that Natanya...
so what is Maan's plan?
Annie now accepted Maan her bro?
cont soon dear...

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Part 21,22,23:

Ohh...geet is so innocent...woh sab ko aise hi maaf kar deti hain aur sab ko aone hi tarah sahi samajhthi hain...

Toh geet ko lekar annie tensed hain...aur dadima ko kya hogaya???why is she worried about maan???kuch toh patah hain unhe iss mystery ke baare main...

Finally patah chal gaya ki yeh maan hi hain yash nahin...toh adi ko bhi ye baat patah hain ki woh maan hain...kis liye chupaye tha usne sab se aur annie se bhi???oho...kitna mystery hain yaar...

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Part24 and 25:

So annie ko patah chal gaya hain ki yash hi maan hain...good she will not be tensed for her now...

Ab maan ne kya plan kiya hain mujrim ko pakadne ke liye...

iss natanya ki aur karan ki toh band bajaana chahiye...mujhe toh sunaina pe bhi doubt hain...kabhi kabhi toh bahut sweetly act kar thi hain...shaayad achhe ban ke sab ke saamne aur peeche aise kaam kar raha ho??? kya pata ho saktha hain...it's my idea...maine toh detective novels zyaada padh liya hain yaar isiliye my antennas are always up...

loving the mystery now!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maan and geet out of the house and safe in some place and mujrim to come out soon...

I am sounding like a news reader now...na...

Waiting for ur next updates...

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pingu-tingu

@pingu-tingu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Awesome update ! Finally maan realized his mistakes!

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mehak173

@mehak173

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

loved both the parts but y was maan pretending to b yash ???

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krithi12

@krithi12

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

loved both parts .whats maan plan

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singh24

@singh24

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

okay why was he pretending to be yash then
wonder if annie knows that yash is maan only
but i still dont get who is after geet and trying to harm her
love it how geet trusts that husband of hers still even after all he has done to her
and now he wont leave her ever again
and has become the maan we all know
well hope the culprit is caught and soon man

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

BE MINE FOREVER

PART - 26

ADI made dem sit in a hall.

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ADI:Maan sir Geet abeap dono yhi beitho,main bs abi aata hu.

He go straight to d master bedroom of hs home. He collect all hs belongings and packed dem in one bag and came out.

ADI:geet aaj ye room tmhara hai. Aap dono apna saman set kar lo. Tb tk main dusre room me shift ho jata hu.

Both go inside the bedroom. Geet unpacked their bags and get busy in setting dem in wardrobe,nd Maan is busy in staring hr. After doing her job she went to kitchen. Kitchen was open and attached with the main hall. She start searching the tea,sugar etc to make tea for her and Adi and coffee for Maan. Adi hear the noise and came out.

ADI: are Geet tum kaam kyu kar rahi hu. Mujhe batao kya chahiye main bana deta hu.

GEET:Adi bhaiya mujhe bhi ye sab kaam aate hai. Or aap bhi ek baat sunn lo hum dono iss ghar mein ek hi shart pe rahenge ki aap mujhe koi b kaam karne se mana nahi karoge.aaj se ghar k sare kamo ki zimmedari meri hai suna apne.

ADI(smile):ok ok as u wish.

GEET:ab jaldi se kitchen k sath mera intro karwaiye.

Adi shows her all necessary items. She made both tea and coffee. All three enjoyed after that she get busy in preparing dinner. While doing dinner Maan discuss about the activities take place in office. Adi gave him each and evry single detail. After dinner Maan and Adi get busy in future actions and she is busy in Kitchen. When all 3 tired, they went to their rooms. Maan change his clothes and laid on a bed to relax himself. Geet too go to washroom for a change. She came out and pick up the pillow and blanket and start moving from the room. Maan totall get confused.

MAAN:hold on Geet kaha ja rahi ho tum?

GEET:bahar hall me.

MAAN:ha wahi puchh raha hu bahar kyu ja rahi hu?

GEET(innocently):sone. Maan ye humara mansion nahi hai. Khud hi dekho yaha couch nahi hai. Or waise bhi Adi bhaiya se kya chhupa hai wo to sab jante hai humare bare me. Unke samne hume pretend karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. KM me to ghar walo ki wajah se ek hi room share karna padta tha,taki sab normal dikhe. Lekin yaha aisi koi prob nahi hai. Yaha hum freely reh sakta hai. Isliye tm yaha bed pe so jao coz sofa tumari hight k hisab se chhota hai. Main bahar sofe pe so jaungi.

MAAN(hesitately):Geet main kya soch raha tha...wo hum ek hi bed pe...

But b4 he complete Geet intrupts in between.

GEET:wahi to main keh rahi hu Maan.i know hm ek hi bed pe nai so sakte.isiliye main bahar ja rahi hu. Gd nyt Maan.

MAAN:Geet Geet meri baat to suno...

Bt she left without listining hm and close d door. Maan patted on his forhead. He feels very sad. He wants hr but fails to convience her. He laid on bed and stare d celieng above make bad faces.
(tere bina tere bina lagta nahi mera jiya...
ab tere siva chale meri saanse na re na...
ek pal ki bhi juadai ab sahi jat nahi...(2)
marna jo chahu agar to maut bhi aati nahi...
Har dua meri lagti beasar...
Shamo sehar dhundhe tujhko nazar...,)
he rotate frm 1 end to another. Hr absence is untolrable fr hm. He was very use to c hr. So he decided to bring bak hr in room. Maan came out. There ws dark completely,bt he decided nt to switchon d lights as he doesnt wnt awake hr. He reached to d sofa,saw hr sleeping covred hr face wid blanket. He listen d snoring sound underneath d blanket.

MAAN(thought):Geet aaj kharate kyu maar rai hai? Bahar thand hai shayad isliye.ab main iski ek nai sunuga.ise andar le jata hu.chahe subah mujhpe kitna hi naraj kyu na ho.

Maan bend placed his hand underneath her and lifts hr up wid using extra muscle power dis time.

Maan(thought):ye Geet kyu kya ho gaya.ye itni bhari kaise ho gayi,abi kuchh dinn pehle to iska weight itna nai tha.koi baat Maan adat daal le baad me asani hogi. Abi pehle ise andr to le jao.

He step forward to hs room. At d same moment Adi shout loud as he is worried why he is in air. He start wriggling in Maan's arm. Maan lost his balance and both falls down on floor. Geet too listen the noise sounds coming frm outside. She came out from another room and switch on d lite. D view shocked hr cmpletly. Maan laid on floor and Adi laying on him and Maan's hand wrapped around his waist. Her mouth wide open and eyes poped out. Maan read hr mind and expressions,so he trying to clear hr doubts immediately. He stood up immediately.

MAAN:geet jaise tm soch rai ho waisa kuchh nai hai. Main to pani peene bahr aaya tha or adi neend me chal raha tha to hum dono takra gaye or hm nechhe gir pade... Waise Geet sofe pe to tm so rai thi na fir andr se kaise aai?

GEET:ha main sone to aai thi pr bahar Adi bhaiya pehle hi baithe the to unhone kaha ki wo mujhe thand me yaha sone nai denge.isliye unhone blanket or pillow leke mujhe apne room me bhej diya.isliye main waha sone chali gai or Adi bhaiya yaha so gaye. Lekin Maan peene ka pani to maine rakha tha.

MAAN:ha wo maine dekha nai tha.

Adi groaning in pain:haaye.abi aap dono ek kaam karo,pls dono jake so jao isse pehle ki mera kuchh or tut jaye...

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