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awesome ff... read it in one goo.. plzz add me in ur pm list... waiting for next update,,, update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ya yash ko ab sab maan sach mai samjh rahee hai???like annie and adi??? adi na jisa us sa baat kee maan ka past bol kar???😕
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Oyeee..Bechara Adi...

Maan Babu Geet ko bedroom me lane ke liya kya kya papad bel rahe hei...
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BE MINE FOREVER

PART 28

GEET take vegetables and sat on dining table and got busy in cutting them. Maan gave a look to flour bowl.

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MAAN(thought):maan beta tune challange to kar diya hai lekin ye kaam karega kaise.

He thought for a few moments, then he put a jar full of water in it. Flour turned into a mudd like mess. It looks like a keechhad. Maan irretatiely put his hand in the bowl and start mixing it. Wet flour bcom sticky and glued to his fingers. He irretates more. So to get rid from that he put more water in the bowl and make it hell. Geet came to kitchen to see how he is doing and she gave euuu look to him.

GEET:Maan pls stop. Ye kya kiya hai tumne?

She look at his face. Maan also placed some flour on his face too. It was stick to his raw stuble. Geet patted her forhead. She takes the bowl from him.

GEET:Maan chhodo ise.

MAAN:are Geet bas hone hi wala hai.

GEET:he wo dikh raha hai. Pura keechhad bana diya hai. Aise na ye agle do saal mein bhi nahi gunda jayega. Maine kaha tha na ye tumse nahi hoga lekin tumne sunn na to hai nahi na. Ab chhodo ise or hath dho lo,chalo.

She runs the water and help him in removinging the sticky flour from his fingers.

GEET:Maan ruko.

He look at her in confusion. Geet placed her hand on his cheek and wash out the floor stick to his stuble. Her cold fingers on his cheek gave pleasure to him. He had a strong urge to take her hand and kissed on it. Geet broke his fantasy.

GEET:Maan tum jao baitho. Main ye sab mess theek kar ke aati hu.

He feels disappointed.2 hours passed. After that she get busy in cleaning the clothes. Maan again intrupts.

MAAN:Geet abi ye kaam to easy hai. kapde to washing machine ne dhone hai. Or itna to main kar hi skata hu. Tum tab tak koi dusra kaam kar lo.

GEET:Maan are you sure.

Maan nodded yes. Geet gave him clothes and powder and went to do some other works. Maan put all clothes in Machine tank and read the instruction of using it but he forgot the instruction of using the powder. Look at the numbers of clothes he put half pack in it and start the machine. with in a few minutes whole bathroom filled with washin powder leather and bubbles.. Machines vomits all the extra soap and bcoz of rotation,bubbles born more and more. Geet came to see the situation and she feels to cry.

GEET:Maan ye kya kiya hai tumne?

MAAN:kapde dho raha hu or kya.

GEET:kapde dho rahe ho?(He nodded yes and Geet fumed) kapde dho raha ho ya sara bathroom. Pura jhag jhag kar diya hai. Maan pls tum rehne do. Abi ye sab saaf karne me pata nahi kitne ghante jayenge.

MAAN:main saaf karwata hu tum tension mat lo.

Geet eyes wide open.

GEET:nahiii. Bilkul nahi. Ab tum kisi b kaam me meri help nai karoge.

MAAN:lekin Geet itna sara kaam tm akele kaise karogi?

GEET:Maan tm sach me meri help karna chahte ho na?(he nodded yes) to pls sirf ek kaam karo.

MAAN(excitedly):kya?

GEET:yahi k tum kisi b kaam ko krne me meri koi hlp mat karo. Yai meri sabse badi help hogi.(Maan made baby face) Maan tm jakr TV dekho tb tk main ye sab saaf krti hu.

Maan went out. Geet get busy in dong cleaning all tis. She really get tired after doing lot of work today,thanks to Maan's help,her work load getting doubled. So she felt sleepy. Her body aching badly so she sat on sofa and cought in deep sleep immediately. Maan came out from his room to c her. She is half laid on sofa resting her head on back. Maan simply lost in her. He adore her innocent beauty. He sat near her nd gaze her continously. He want to assure that she is in deep sleep. He put her hairs strands behind her ears,brushing her cheeks. In this Maan's fingers caress her cheek,feeling the soft shining skin of hers. She too feels the warmth of his fingers, his touch. Maan scooped her and take her in to their room and made her laid her comfortably.

MAAN:i m sorr Geet. Jane anjane aaj maine tumhe bahut tang kar diya. Lekin mera maqsad tumhe pareshan karna nahi tha. Main to sirf tumhare sath kuchh waqt bitana chahta tha. Jo pal hum sath milke khoobsurat bana sakte the sab meri wajah se barbad ho gaye. But i promise you i filled our life with the trail of pleasure moments. When we are together we dont need anyone around us. He kissed on her face every where...
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BE MINE FOREVER

PART 29



TWO days passed. Today Adi is at home coz of weekly off. So he decided to do some houshold work with Geet,coz he is habtual to these works. Maan is not at home as he is going to investigate about raghu and the real culprit,afer lunch. In evening Adi was busy in watering his garden with pipe. Maan still not came back,and Geet need something. So she came ou to ask fr...
om Adi. She called him. Adi was completely lost in his own world,so when she call him suddenly,he moves with watering pipe to her. The pressure of water is soo high. As a result Geet drenched completely from tip to toe. Both's mouth open wide. She look at herself first den gave a furious look to him. Adi scared as she look him.

GEET(angrily):Adi bhaiya ye kya kiya apne.

ADI:i m so...sooorry Geet maine jaan k nai kiya ye.

His voice flattered.

GEET:rukiye aap aaj apko chhodugi nai.aap or Maan dono bas mujhe tang karne me lage hue ho.

She start running after him. Adi too start running to save himself fron her anger. Adi aage age or Geet uske pechhe. Both ran in whole house here and there. But no result. After 15 minutes both get tired and their breth get harder. Both hyperventilated.

GEET:Adi bhaiya stop for a minute. Pehle pani peeyenge fir continue karenge.

ADI agreed. Both stop there cat and mouse chase for few minutes as they need some water. Geet went to fridge and take a botle of juice and drink half of it.

ADI:geet mujhe b pass karna pls.

Geet pass him a bottle of juice, adi drink the remaning juice. Its taste is realy very bad.

GEET:Adi bhaiya ye juice ka taste bahut ajeeb tha,kadwa kadwa.

ADI:ha maine bhi aisa kadwa juice aaj tak nahi piya.

GEET:ADI bhaiya apne pehle mujhe bheega diya fir paglo ki tarah doda rahe ho,or ab ye kadwa or ghatia juice pila diya. Sab galti apki hai ab bacho aap.

She again start running after him,and they continue until Maan came back home. When he came back he saw whole house is completely messed up,as Geet threw many items on Adi to hit him. But Adi runs realy very fast to save him. He still holds the juice bottle in his hands. Suddenly Maan noticed somthing strange in both's behaviour. He hold both in his each hand.

GEET(in intoxication):maan dekho na Adi bhaiya ne mujhe bheega diya,or ab wo ghatia wala juice b nai de rahe hai.

ADI(in same condition as she in):nai maan sir ye meri bottle hai main nai dunga.

He had hicupps too.

MAAN:Adi ek min muje wo bottle do.

Adi:nai dunga aap Geet ko de doge.

MAAN(angrily):adi do idhar.

ADI(scared):deta hu sir.

Adi passed bottle to him. Maan recognised d bottle.

Maan(thought):o my god isme to maine koniac rakhi thi,Geet se chhupakar. Lagta hai in dono ne ise juice samjh kar pee liya hai.

Both Geet and Adi are very tired now and after drinking alchohal,both's eyes getting heavier. They dont able to stand properly and fall on him.

MAAN(thought):lagta hai ab in dono ko mujhe hi sambhalna padega. Pehle adi ko uske room me chhodkar aata hu firr Geet ko le jaunga.

He made her sit on sofa and gave her instruction of not going anywhere till he came back. Geet nodded yes yes like a good student. He take Adi to his room made him laid on his bed and covered him.

ADI:gd nyt Maan sir.

Maan:gd nyt Adi.

He turn off the lights and came out. Then he went to Geet,scooped her and went to their room. He made her sit on a bed and start searching some fresh clothes for her as her clother are still wet. He take his long shirt for her. When he came to her,she will dancing on bed.

MAAN(worriedly):geet came here otherwise u will fall down.

But she cant get him as she is not in her. Maan grab her aram and dragged her towards him. Geet imbalnced and going to fall but he hold her on time. She wrapped her arams around his neck and looked lovengly to him.

GEET(innocently):Maan mujhe na kuchh kehna hai.

MAAN smiles on his innosence:bolo kya baat hai.

He made her stand on floor.

GEET:Maan us dinn tumne mujhe kiss kiya tha aaj main tumko kissy karu?

O what a chance he got. His princess wants to kiss him. The very thought increase his heartbeat. He feels goose bumps inside. She gave a cute childish smile to him,which make him more crazy.

GEET:main na aaj tumko kissy karti hu.

Geet first kissed on his forhead, then on his eyes one by one, then on his both cheeks. Maan really enjoyed this moment. Then she get closer to his lips. Maan is ready for this,she come more closer, but before she kissed on his lips,she lost her concious completely and fall on his chest. Maan shake her but she faints now...

MAAN(thought): my bad luck...phewww...
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BE MINE FOREVER

PART 30



MAAN made her laid on bd,nd sat near hr. He ws worried if he nt change hr clthes,she must catch cold. But one truth is here dat inspite of being husband nd wife,det wer still strangers to each other. He knows he had a full rite to do dis,but he aware of d distance between dem,whch is actully made by hm. So may b she is nt accepting dis. He dosnt wnt to hrt hr mode...
sty nd hr feelings. He had to wait fr d rite moment,until she accept hm again as hr husband nd gave hm a rite on hr body. So now he ws in dialamma what to do as except hm no one is dere who help hm changing hr cloths. He sat in frnt of hr nd pulled hr up nd tagged hr to hmslf nd switch off d lites. First he pulled off hr shrt. Den he moved hs hands on hr back upwards nd opend d knot of hr bra nd pulled it off too carefully. Aftr dat he immediately placed hs shrt on hr. Wen he was surw dat she was now covered wid hs shrt,he made hr laid properly. Den he moved his hand to d lastic of hr salwar. He loosen it nd pulled off it too. Aftr dat he covered hr wid his soft duvet. He pickd up all hr wet clothes nd put dem fr cleaning. He too feel vry tired now,so he change hs clothes and ladi next to hr. Both slept on d same bed for d first time in d marriage of almost two years. Bt he made proper distance. Bothsleep calmly. But as clam as dis nite may b next mrng wouldnt...
Next day Geet wake up early in d mrng. Hr head is still aching badly due to hangover. Slowly slowly she got hr full concious,and she suddenly realized she is naked completely inside his shirt.she look at herslf nd got dat she only wear his shirt. Den she saw him slep beside her,bare chest. She wants to remember what happened last nite. Bt all memories r faded nd mixed up in hr mind. She only remember sm flashes of last nite incident, how she was inludge in a fight wid Adiand den she drank smthng. As much she try to remember her head ached more. Last flash she remember of lastnitewas how desperate she is to kiss him. Den she look at his face. And her lip marks on his face strenghten hr doubts. She hold hr head,as she feeling guity. She knew vry well dat hr Maan dsnt love her. Nd whatever happend last nite ws nt for hr. She know dat Maan only love Sameera,so he also concidered last nite,nthng mor den a big mistake. She got up immediately and went to wshrum nd sit ina showr,as she tries to wash d moments of last nite. She cried alot. Den she took all hr energy nd aftr taking a bath she wear hr cloths nd without looking at hm fr a single sec she went out,as she dont hv a courage to face hs anger nd frustration.she is vry disturbed. Adi too got up nd came out. He also feels d same head pain lyk hr, adi wishd hr Gd Mg,bt she lost in hr own wrld so she cnt hear hm. On d other hand Maan too wake up nd start patting hs rite side,searching hr actually.bt he found it empty. He stood nd chek d whole room.bt she was nowhere. He wants to c hs angel's face,so he called hr from his room.. Adi gave a shake to Geet to bringhr back frm hr thoughts. Both hears Maan's voice. Geet get more nervous. She doent wnt to go near hm,so she avoid hs summoned.

ADI:Geet kya hua jao dekho na kya baat hai? Maan sirbula rahe hai.

GEET(annoyenglily):Adi bhaiya pls aap jake deko kya baat hai main kam kr rai hu,

ADI:achha thek hai,main hi puchh leta hu kya bat hai.

Maan watng fr hr,so he hide behind d door.at d momnt Adi entred in d room widout noticing,Maan hold hm frm behind. Adi screams at hs sudden attack. Maan too disappointed to c hm so he threw hm on ground again. Adi groan in pain nd Maan fumed.

MAAN:Adi maine Geet ko bulaya tha tm kyu aa gye?

ADI:maan sir aap agr isi trah romantic hote rhe to,i guess mujhe apne lie hospital me ek room book krwana padega, hayee hayee.

MAAN:Adi Geet kaha hai?

ADI:wo kam kr raihai isliye usne mujhe bhe dia.

MAAN:jao or abi Geet ko yaha bhejo.i wnt to c hr only.

Adi wnt out nd told hr. Bt she denied again and snd hm back to Maan. Maan desperately waitng fr hr. Dis time Adi is too vry concious. He peeped frm outside nd caled hs name b4 he enters d room.

ADI:Maan sir main hu firse.

And he entered d room.

MAAN:Adi i want Geet use bhejo.wo kyu nai aa rai hai.

ADI:Maan sir wo kaam kr rai hai bahut busy hai isliye usne bola hai apko jo b kam hai aap mujhe bata do main usko bata dunga.

Maan feel sad nd fall on bd. Adi came to him.

ADI:sir ek baat bolu?

MAAN:ha bolo.

ADI:Sir aap Geet se pyar krne lage hai to pls use bata do. Kyunki pati patni k bech itni sari duriyan unke rishte ko kamzor kr deti hai.

MAAN:Adi kehna to chahta hu lekin aise nai. I want to make dat moment very spl and memorable for us. Or mujhe pata hai ki mujhe ye sab kaise karna hai. Main aaj raat ko hi Geet ko apne dil ki baat bol dunga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet story... but am scared as to who is trying to kill Maan and Geet... i kind of hate the couple Karan and Nayantara...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Richa for the wonderful updates.
Geet feeling that Maan will shout at her
Waiting for Maan to tell those 3 magical words to Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
enjoyed all d parts so much

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