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Posted: 12 years ago
part 23
so Yash is really MAAN...
but how and why was he as Yash these years?
and how does Adi know hes really Maan and not someone Yash?
and this sudden pyaar for Geet?
oh all so confusing...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 22 n 23
awesome update
so yash hi maan hai...
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome Yash hi Maan hai Jaan kar achcha laga
because after 1st chap. ieven commented about it ki agar Maan mar chuka hai to ye Geet Maan ki kahaani nahin ho sakti
so I was right



sorry it was not after 1st chap.but it was after 6th chepter when we learnt that Maan was dead
Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
and finally the mystery is out in the open yash is maan
just as we all suspected but werent too sure about till adi confirmed it for us
so now he is trying to get closer to geet now he wants to love her cherish her after all he did to her
adi is so right to tell him off man after what he did maan did ya really think you can come back and just get back to loving geet
wait but why did he pretend to be yash then
whats going on there is something more afoot here
annie didnt know that yash is maan only and she slapped him thrice well he did ask for it after what he did to geet these slaps are nothing 😡
dude if i were you i would at least for now stay away from geet so that annie doesnt kill ya or adi doesnt tell annie about you being maan and not yash
wow so one of the main mystery has been unveiled just few more left right

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updates wating for next updates
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hum to confusaa gai hei...
Yash is Maan...Ye kab hua...????
How Adi know about it...Yash n Maan r one person...???
If Maan was perfectly fine than why was he living with unknown people ...????
Why he was pretending in front of Adi and Annie that he is Yesh...???
If he was Maan to kai maheeno tak training kis baat ki le raha tha...???
Karo Karo iss confusion ka kuch karo...Plzzz


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome parts..i guessed may be yash is maan..n it was r8..wow adi..kya questions tha...nice slaps 4 maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
BE MINE FOREVER

PART - 24


Maan listen him without saying any word coz he is guilty and have no ans to his allegations.

ADI continousely show his anger to him.

ADI:main janta hu aaj main apni aukat se bahut jada bol gaya hu or iska anzam kya ho sakta hai uska bhi andaza hai mujhe. Lekin koi b wajah sach se badi nai ho skti or aaj main sahi hu or aap galat. Aapka us dinn accident na hota to apne to Geet ko apni zindagi se nikal kar bahar fenk hi diya tha. To firr aaj aisa kya ho gaya hai ki jiss chehre se apko duniya mein sabse jada nafrat thi wahi aaj apko sabse jada pyara ho gaya hai(Maan looked down). Maan sir batao ye sab kyu? Kyunki Sameere ne apko chhod diya hai. Usne apke pyar ka mazak bana diya,isliye ab apko Geet chahiye. Geet apki physical need hai.

Listen to this Maan realy got angry and shout again. But Adi didnt feared frm this.

MAAN:ADII...

ADI:chillaiye mat. Chillane se sach jhooth or jhooth sach nahi bann jata hai,or agar aisa nahi hai to durr rahiye Geet se. Kyunki main nahi chahta ek baar fir uska dil tute. Apne halat se samjhota kar chuki hai. Chalta hu sir lekin jane se pehle ek aakhri baat kehna chahta hu ek baar apne ander jhank kar dekhiye or firr faisla keejiye ki kya aap uske layak hai?

Adi came down. Geet went to him with a cup of tea.

GEET:Adi bhaiya aap yaha main apke liye chai leker aa hi rahi thi.

ADI:nahi Geet chai ka mann nahi hai abhi.main bas ek zaruri kaam se aaya tha. Ab chalta hu.

Geet noticed lines occured on his forhead.

GEET:Adi bhaiya kya hua? Kuchh kaha kya Maan ne?

ADI:nahi Geet aisi koi baat nahi hai. Bas office ka thoda tension hai or kuchh nahi. Tum itna mat socha karo. Main ek baar dadi ko dekh kar aata hu firr ghar bhi jana hai.

He went to Dadimaa's room. Geet went to terrace to know what happened between them as she senced some trouble. Maan was lost in his bitter words. Adi was right and he is guity. He always treated her like an animal. She is nothing for him. Geet came closer to him. Maan was busy in thinking about his sins.. Geet touched his shoulder to made him realize about her presence. As she touched his shoulder he came out to real world and turned to her. Geet saw tension on his face.

GEET:Maan kya hua?

She asked worridely. In deep inside Maan was very scared. The thought of loosing her made him insecured. He instantly embraced her tightly. Geet shocked at his sudden action, but said nothing to him. Maan feels that all doing conspiracy against him. At this moment everyone seems enemy to him, he feels that every one is trying to snatch her from him.

MAAN (thought): tum sirf meri ho Geet,sirf meri. Or duniya ki koi taqat tumhe muhse juda nahi kar sakti. Firr wo chahe Annie or Adi hi kyu na ho.

Geet trying to loosen the hug but as much she tries, he tighten his grip more over her. He doent want to let her go away from him. He wants to make sure to himself tat she is with him and always stay with him. The warmth of her body made him comfortable. Geet doesnt understand why he react like that. But she got it tha fact that right now her Maan needs her so she hugged him back to make him calm down. Both stay in the same position for a very long time. Both loosen the hug. Geeet caressed his cheek lovengly.

GEET: Maan tum theek to ho na? Kya hua hai?

Maaan was not in condition to explain her anything.

GEET: Maan are you alright?

He nodded yes.

GEET:to firr hume neeche chalna chahiye. Annie bas jane hi wali hi ek baar usse puchh lu use meri zarurat to nahi hai. Sab theek se rakha bhi hai ya nahi.

She start movin from there. But Maan stops him by holding her arm.

Maan: mat jao Geet. Ruk jao mere paas, hamesha k liye.

Geet stop. She saw a strange fear in his eyes for the first time. Becasue before this she only saw anger in his eyes. She stops and Maan again hugged her tightly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
BE FOREVER MINE

PART - 25

NAKUL came to inform them that Annie is about to left the home and she summoned both. Geet and Maan came on the main gate of KM. Annie waiting for both.

GEET:Annie sara saman rakha na tune? Teri aadat hai bhulane ki.

ANNIE:ha meri maa sab rakh liya hai,bas jane se pehle tujhe dekhna chahti thi.

GEET:sunn waha apna dhyan rakhio or pahunchte hi mujhe phone zarur kar dio,tu hamesha bhul jati hai or main yaha pareshan hoti rehti hu.

ANNIE:achha dadi amma main pakka phone kar dungi or sunn uchhal kudd mat kario.teri chhot abhi bhari nahi hai.

GEET:ok boss.

Both laughed and hugged each other. Maan staring both lovengly. Annie loosen the hug and go to him. She hugged him too. Maan shocked.

ANNIE:bhai is pagli ko apko sounp k ja rahi huiska dhyan rakhna.

Maan nodded yes. Annie sit in a car and left frm dere. Maan and Geet came to hier room. Maan was confused what happened to her. Why she behave lyk that. But soon his focus shifted to Geet again. He is vry worried fr hr. Stil he have no clue about the culprit who wants to harm her. He is very confused at the moment. Next day he again go to police station and meet the S.H.O.

INSP:i m sorry mr. Khurana lekin na jane ye raghu kaha chhup k baith gaya hai. Wo humare case ki imp. kadi hai. Jab tak wo mill nai jata humare liye is case me aage badna mushkil hai. Anyways aap bataiye us note se kuchh mila aapko?

MAAN:ha bhi or nai bhi.

INSP:kya matlab?

MAAN:jaane dijiye aap nai samjhenge.i hav to leave now. Main Geet ko zada der tak akela nai chhod sakta.

INSP:dont worry hm puri koshish kar rahe hai mujrim bahut jald humari giraft me hoga.

Maan go to Adi and discuss him on this matter. He tells him everything. Adi agree wid his plan. Maan go back to KM. Sunaina was ready to go somewhere.

MAAN:mom aap kahi ja rahi hai?

SUNAINA:he beta achanak kuchh kaam aa pada hai or hame abhi isi waqt jaipur jana pad raha hai. But u dont worry hum 3 dinn me lautt aayenge. Tab tak aap sabka khyal rakhiyega,kyunki aap bade hai.

MAAN:ji mom.

SUNAINA:chaliye ab hum nikalte hai.
She left.

MAAN(thought):maan yahi sahi waqt hai Geet ko is ghar se durr le jane ka. mom or Annie dono hi ghar pe nahi hai. Wo agar yaha hongi to 100 rukawate aayengi. Lekin ab mujhe rokne wala koi nai hai. Jab tak asli mujrim pakda nahi jata main Geet ko is ghar me rehne nahi de sakta.

He went to Dadimaa and sit beside her.hold her hand in his own

MAAN:Dadimaa main aapse maafi mangne aaya hu.ek baar firr mujhe ye ghar chhodkar jana hoga. Lekin is baar baat Geet ki zindagi ki hai. Dadimaa Geet ki jaan ko khatra hai or uski jaan bachane ke liye bahut zaruri hai ki main ye ghar chhod du or Geet ko yaha se durr le jau. ( listing him she get worried) aap tenshion mat lo aapko mujh pe trust hai na? (dadimaa shook her head) to bas main wada karta hu ki Geet pe koi aanch nahi aane dunga or jaise hi main us insan ko pakad lunga jo Geet ko harm pahuchana chahta, main or Geet is ghar me laut aayenge. Ye wada hai mera aapse.

Dadima trying to raise hr hand to gave him blessings and permission both. Maan kissed on hr forhead. He came to hs room and start thinking what he do to leave the home. Meanwhile he listen some noise outside. He came outside to check whats going on. He saw Natanya make some issue and scolds Geet. Maan fists tighten. He came down and shouts on her.

MAAN:Natanya how dare you? Tumhari himmat kaise hui Geet se aise baat karni ki. Mat bhulo wo tumhari jhethani hai. Kya itni b tameez nai sikhai tumare parents ne ki bado se kaise baat karte hai.

GEET:Maan jane do.shant ho jao.

KARAN too intrupts:baat to aage bad chuki hai.ab is ghar me ye admi nai reh skta.hm nai mante ki ye Maan bhai hai.

GEET:Karan ye tum kya keh rahe ho?

NATANYA:Karan bilkul sahi keh rahe hai.ab ye behrupiya yaha nai reh skta.

MAAN got his point to leave the KM:to theek hai main b ab is ghar me ek pal bhi nahi rukunga.

GEET:Maan kyu baat ko bada rahe ho. Calm down pls.

MAAN:nai Geet ab hum is ghar me nai rahenge.kya tum aise ghar me rehna chahti ho jaha tumhare pati ki koi izzat na ho.

GEET:Maan geet to wahi rahegi jaha uska Maan rahega. Tum yaha rehna nahi chahte to hum aaj hi ye ghar chhod denge. Both go back to their rooms and take their belongings and left the KM. Both came outside.

GEET:Maan hum kaha ja rahe hai?

At d same time Adi came to dem.

ADI:mera ghar pe Geet.

GEET confused:lekin adi bhaiya hm apke ghar kaise reh skte hai?

ADI:ek traf to bhaiya bulati ho or pucchti ho ki bhai k ghar kaise reh skti hu. Mana mera ghar is mahal k samne jhopda hai,lekin ap dono k rehne ka intzam to kr hi skta hu.

GEET:Adi bhaiya mera wo matlab nai tha.

ADI:to firr chalo mere sath.

Geet look at Maan fr aproval. Maan shook hs head. All 3 left nd reached to Adi's home. All 3 entr in d home. Geet scanned d whole house as it is new fr hr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 24 n 25
loved it..

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