MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 27

ADI still feeling pain in hs back. At d same time his phone start ringing. Both Maan and Geet got concious that who calls him at 2 am. Adi saw his phone it was a call frm Annie. Adi too get concious,dat not to talk b4 both.

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ADI:ek imp call hai main abhi aata hu.

Both maaneet gave suspecious look. Adi noticed botn's expression and went out to avoid their que. And ans d call.

ANNIE(worriedly):hello adi bhaiya.

ADI:ha Annie bolo itni raat ko phone kyu kiya?

ANNIE's voice flattered:bhaiya maine KM call kia tha.to Nakul se pata chala ki bhai or Geet dono ghar chhodkar chale gaye hai.bhaiya main ab kya karu,Geet ka phone b nai lag raha hai.

ADI:Annie annie relax. Calm down. Maan sir or Geet ie time mere ghar pe hai or bilkul theek hai,so dont worry at all.

ANNIE:apke ghar pe hai dono?

ADI:ha wo sab jab tum aaogi samjha dunga filhal itna jaan lo dono theek hai or mere sath hai mere ghar pe so dont worry.(Adi's back is still aching) ahhh...

ANNIE:Adi bhaiya ap karha kyu rahe ho?

ADI:wo isliye Annie coz tumhare bhai ne mujhe abi 2 neeche gira diya hai.

ANNIE:what? Aap kya bol rahe ho?

ADI(laugh funily):hehehehe,Annie tm to Maan sir ko janti ho jab unhe koi cheez pasand a jati hai to fir wo or kuchh nai sochte bas usi cheez ko hasil karne me lage rehte hai.

ANNIE(confused):ha lekin iska apke girne se ka sambandh hai?

ADI:coz Maan sir ko raat k do baje Geet pe pyar aa gaya or wo use lene bahar hall me aaye. Bt my bad luck. Geet ki jagah main so raha tha. Andhre me unhone Geet samjh kar mujhe utha liya or firr hum dono neche gir gaye. Or meri back ki band baj gayi hai.(listning this Anie LOL)haso haso tum bhi haso band to mera baj raha hai. Agar Maan sir aise hi uncntrol hote rahe to mera pata nahi kya kya or tutega.

ANNIE:ok ok relax.bhaiya moov laga lo aram aa jayega.achha bhaiya ek baat batao apko kya lagta hai. Maan bhai kya sach me Geet ko chahne lage hai?

ADI:Annie jitna main Maan sir ko janta hu us se to yahi lagta hai,or aaj raat ke baad to mujhe or bhi yakeen ho gaya hai... Hayeee

ANNIE:bas i hope ke ab dono jaldi se paas aa jaye. Ok bhaiya ab main rakhti hu aap yaad se dava laga lena warna aise hi haye haye karte rahoge.

ADI:ok u take care.

Call cuts. He go inside and locked the door. Meanwhile Geet patted on his back and he shout in fear.

GEET:Adi bhaiya chilla kyu rahe ho main hu.

ADI(sighd):geet kya kar rahi ho tumne to mujhe dara hi diya tha.

GEET:ho gayi apki important call?

ADI:ha ho gayi.

Geet handed an ointment in his hands.

GEET:to ab ise lagaiye subah tak aaram aa jayega.

ADI(smiles):thanku Geet.ab tm jao or aram karo.gd nyt.

GEET:gd nyt Adi bhaiya.

She went to his room. He too go to sofa fr sleep...
Next day aftr having a brkfast Adi went to office. Maaneet was all alone at home. Maan wants to spend some quality time wid her as today no one is present to disturb dem. Bt Geet was busy in doing some house hold work as there is no domestic help available. She have to done all work at her own. Maan is getting frustrated so he decided to help her in work so it can finished early. Geet was in kitchen. He went to her.

MAAN:kya kar rahi ho?

GEET:Maan vegetables cut kr rai hu lunch or dinner k lie.

MAAN:geet main kya soch raha tha abi kuchh din main ghar pe hu to kaam me tumhari thodi help karwa deta hu.mera b time paas ho jayega.(GEET laughed)kya hua isme hasne wali konsi baat hai? Ek to main tme hlp kr rha hu or tm mera mazak uda rai ho.

GEET:sorry Maan lekn tmne baat hi aisi ki,ki main khud ko rok hi nai payi. Maan ye tumhare office ki koi presentation nai hai jo tm minto me sabko impress kr loge. Janab ye kitchen ka kaam hai. Achhe achho ke paseene nikal jate hai yaha.

Maan feels underestimated:achha ye baat hai to theek hai tm mujhe koi ek kaam do or main use karke dikhaunga.

GEET:Maan ye tumse nahi hoga.

MAAN:or agar kar diya to?

GEET:nai hoga.

MAAN:lagi shart.

GEET:ab isme shart kaha se aa gayi?

MAAN:kyu darr gayi?

GEET:ji nahi main kyu darungi bhala?

Maan gazed her notily. He steps towards her and she feels her breath caught in her lungs.

MAAN:koi b ek kaam do or agar maine use kar diya to jo bolunga wo tum karogi.

Geet's eyebrow notted:achha theek hai to tum ek kaam karo us bowl me sukha atta rakha hai use gunnd k dikhao tab tak main ye sari vegetables kat leti hu.

MAAN:itna simple sa kaaam ye to main chutki mein hi kar dunga.

GEET:dekhte hai...best of luck...
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Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it tnx 4 da lovely updates dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 maan ne adi ko uthaya.. wow. wht a scene... sahi h maan ko bhi tadapna chahiye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Richa--lovely update
i had missed previous one read all
bechara adi🤣
ab Maan veg.cut karega ya nahi😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
The chps were very nice and well written.Poor Adi! I can't believe that Geet actually caught Maan and Adi like that🤣 Umm...so Maan can be naughty as well huh?Looking forward to reading about how he mixes the atta😆Update soon😊
Edited by shruthiR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26
that was awesome...
bechara Adi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 27
nice part...
hes trouble in kitchen...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha HA HA...
Dostana yaha pe bhi shuru hogaya...maan ne adi ko geet samajhkar uthaliya ...hehe...
Ab woh geet keliye ghar ke kaam karne ke liye bhi ready hogaya hain...noprobs...kuch kaam karne se uski weight thodi kam nahin hojayegi...
Ab maan aata ka kya karega yeh mujhe janna hain...
Update next part soon...Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26 n 27
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
funny..
maan mistook adi as geet..
now maan helping geet in kitchen..
will he be able to do..lol..
awesome parts

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