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rizwanaq

@rizwanaq

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

maan nahi marsakta yaar...mujhe lagraha hai kai karan nai maan ka accident karwaya issliye vo yakeen nahi kartay kai yash maan hai...LEKIN!! maan ka body nahi mili...

aur mujhe tho lagta hai kay yash in actual fact maan hai...or is yash-maan kay silsilay mein...maan...ie yash ko sach mein geet se pyaar hone laga hai... aur sameera ki asliyaat jaane ke baad ke vo maan ke paise ke peechay thi...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

BE MINE FOREVER
PART -12

GEET is in his arms. At dis moment she forgot all about her pains. She only wants to stay forever like dis. Yash's heartbeat is running very fast,which is feeled by her too. This was the first time when she feeled his concern for her. She actually love her pain and injury,coz of her pain hr Maan take so much care of her. He made he

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sit in a car comfortably and called d doc. He ordered him to reached KM as soon as possible. He was really worried for her.

GEET:Maan tum pls party me wapis chale jao or guests ko attend karo,main ghar khud chali jaungi.

YASH:party ko sambhalene k liye mom or Karan hai.main tumhe aisi halat me akela nai chhod skta.

GEET:Maan main theek hu.

YASH:ha wo dikh raha hai kitni theek ho.pau se itna khoon beh raha hai or keh rai ho theek hu.

GEET:lekin Maan.

YASH:koi behas nai bola na hum ghar ja rahe bas.

He drive madly to reached to KM. within 15Mins dey were at home. He took her in his arms. Geet felt very awkward. Yash enters in
KM. All servants were shocked seeing d view.

NAKUL:suraj lgta hai main spna dekh raha hu. Zra mujhe chunti to kaat.(Suraj pinched him) aooouch main sach me jag raha hu.

SURAJ:ha yaar aaj suraj kidhar se nikla tha.

NAKUL:lgta hai sir k sar pe jo chot lagi hai usi ka hangover hai.wrna bechari humari Geet madam ki kismat itni achhi kaha hai. Saab to
us chudail Sameera k chakkar me pad ke sabko dukh dene me hi mast hai.

SURAJ:bhagwan kare jo dekh rahe hai wo hi sach ho.

He enterd in their room nd made her sit on a bed..he called Doc again,bt his phone is out of coverage area. He tensed more. He take first aid box nd put her foot on his thigh. He opened d wrapped henky very slowly and carefully. It was cmpltly wet wid hr blood.Her wound is still bleeding. He start cleaning hr injury wid fresh cotton. Suddenly he noticed,a very small piece
of chandelier was pierced in her skin,it dig deep inside. He look at her. The pain she feels is clerly visible on hr face. Hs hands shivering while taking out d piece. It was realy tough coz as much he tries to draw it dat piece go more deep inside. Due to which hr pain
incresed more and more. But she doesnt complaints 4 once. He take a long breath,calm down hmslf nd focused on dat piece. Finally he
sucedded in taking it out. It was very painfull so she cleanched hs shoulder tightly. Yash got it dat she is in pain. Geet too realized dat she is supposed to b not allowed to do dat so she leave him immediately. Yash clean hr wound with antisecptic. It realy burns but she is concious now so she tightly clenched d bed sheet wid both hands nd closed hr eyes. Tear drop rolling on hr cheeks whch made him restless. He carefully bandaged hr wound.Yash now trying to bcm hard again wid her and behave dat he doesnt care 4 her. He gave her medicine but rudely.

YASH(rudly):ye medi. rakhi hai ise kha lena.

She feels d cold vibes again so she denied to take it.

GEET:mujhe nahi chahiye.i m fine.

YASH:theek hai khani hai to khao nahi khani mat khao. Who cares.

He placed d medi on side table nd reached to washroom 4 a change. Wen he came out he realize dat she do not touched d medi.it was
as it is there on table. Geet tries to stand on herself,but she gt imbalanced coz of her foot injury.
Yash instantly hold her and save hr from falling down. He bend little and put his arm bneath her
legs and lift her up in his arms.

YASH:kaha jana hai?

She doesnt look at him coz she is angry wid his twisting behaviour.

GEET:Maan mujhe neeche utaro main khud ja sakti hu.

YASH:ye mere swal ka jwab nai hai.maine puchha kaha ja rahi ho?

Geet give up.

GEET:wshroom. Change krna hai.

Yash took her to washroom and made her stand outside.

YASH:dekho abi tumhara pau pe zada zor dalna theek nai hai.tm change kar k aa jao main yahi bahar tumhara wait kar raha hu.

Yash waits for her.when she came out he again took her in his arms and made her laid comfortably on a bed. Then he placed a pillow
beneath her injured foot and covered her properly.

YASH:ye medi kha lo wrna dard ki wajah se puri raat so nai paogi. Pls.

he requests very politly so Geet melts immediately. She take medi. Due the affect of medi. She slept soon. But Yash not. The image
of that Chandelier falls on Geet made him restless. He tries realy hard to get rid of all this but all in vein. The very thought trembled him badly. What if he not reached at d right time? What if that Chandelier hit her? Many questions stroked his mind. He was very curious to know wheather it was just an accident or a full proof plan...

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 13

YASH was vry disturbd. He cant sleep 4 a minute. The thought of dat moment throbbed his heart badly. He got up and check hr again and again to make sure dat she is alrite. He analyises the situation.
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Yash thought:ye sirf ek hadsa tha ya fir sochi samjhi sazish. Lekin Geet to party me aane hi nai wali thi to kya ye Maan ko marne ka plan tha. Kahi Maan ka accident b to 1 planned murder to nahi tha. Or agar aisa hai to kon ho skta hai in sab k pichhe. Koi business rival ya koi aisa dushman jo Maan se nafrat karta hoga. Ya firr koi family member. Lekin ye sab to Maan k apne hai. Kahi Geet ne hi to Maan se badla lene k liye ye sab nai kiya. Lekin agar wo aisa karti to wo khud kyu waha marne k liye khadi rehti... Ufff ye sab kitna uljha hua hai. Ya firr kahi aisa to nahi k main hi ovr react kar
raha hu. Calm down yaar calm down. Filhaal to ye soch subah Annie ko kya jwab dena hai. Use ye sab jab pata chalega to wo hazar swaal karegi khas kar k jab baat Geet ki ho to wo bilkul bardasht nahi krti.

He tenced more. In his deep thoughts whole night spends. He dont know when he got in sleep. When he awaked he scanned whole room. His eyes searching for Geet but she was not dere. He stands immediately and checked
her in washroom. Bt she was not dere. Den suddenly his eys catch some unusual on pillow which he placed underneath hr foot. He chek nd realized d blood stains r still wet. This view make him mad. He went to door to c her but b4 he open d door Geet enter in d room wid a mug of coffee in hr hand.

GEET:good mrng Maan.

Yash fuming in tension. He clenched her arm very hard.

YASH:kisne kaha tha tumhe ye coffee banane ko. Jo kaam theek se kr nai skti wo krti hi kyu ho? (she is getting scared seeing him in anger again)kitni baar samjhana padega ki mere liye
kuchh krne ki koshish mat kia karo.mujhe ye sab pasnd nai hai. Lekin nai koi b baat tumhari samjh me ek baar me kaha aati hai. Nakul...Nakul (he shouts,and Nakul came inside)

NAKUL:yes sir.

YASH:ye coffee le k jao or ise nali me fek do or jaldi mere liye new coffee bana k lao.(He turns2 Geet)or tm chup chap jake bed pe baitho koi zarurat nai hai faltu k kaam karke ye jatane ki k tume meri kitni parwah hai.

He leave hr nd go to wash room. Annie listen all dis. She came inside nd hugged Geet. Annie is very worried,till she know about d last night incident.

ANNIE:tu kaisi hai theek to hai na tu?pata hai meri to jaan hi nikal gai thi jab subah bhabhi ne bataya to?tujhe lagi to nai na.

Annie checked hr to make sure dat she is fine. Geet trying to calm down her. She cupped her face.

GEET:Annie calm down dekh main bilkul theek hu or tere samne hu.tu shant ho ja.

At d same time she recieved a text msg on hr mobile,send by Yash.

Annie thought:Yash to ghar me hi hai fir usne msg kyu kiya.

She read d msg in which Yash told her to check her foot. Hr foot may b bleeding. Annie immediately look at hr foot.

GEET:tu kya kr rai hai?

ANNIE:tu chup reh mujhe dekhne de.

Yash was rite. Bleeding starts again. Annie called d doc. Doc came nd treat hr. He also gave hr injection.

ANNIE(worridly):doc Geet ki bleeding baar2 shuru kyu ho jati hai?

DOC:actually inke pair me jo cut laga hai wo kafi bada hai or thoda sa bhi stretching hone pe bleeding shuru ho jati hai. So its better ki
ye zada bhag daud na kare.coz zada chalne firne se pair pe zor padega

ANNIE teased hr:are doc ye kya keh dia apne. Kabi bandariya ko shanti se baithe dekha hai. Wo to bas idhar se udhar kudti rehti hai.

Geet slap on hr arm:ruk tu tujhe abi batati hu.

ANNIE:dekha bhagne daudne ki taiyari kar li isne.

All in d room laugh together. Doc left.

ANNIE:suna tune bandaiya ab agar bed se uthi na to main teri tange tod dungi.

GEET:samjh gai meri ma, lekin tange mat todeiyo.

Natanya fuming in hr room. Karan saw her.he hold hr frm hr shoulder.

KARAN:kya hua jaan aaj subah2 gusse me kyu ho?

NATANYA:kyunki iss ghar me humari koi aukat nai hai.

KARAN(confused):ab kya hua?

NATANYA:jisse dekho jethaniji ki aaobhagat karne me laga hua hai. Hum to jaise is ghar me hai hi nahi.

B4 he ans Sunaina listen hr talk nd intrupts.

SUNAINA:dekhiye beta agar kisi ek member ko puchha ja raha hai to iska ye matlab nahi ki bakio ki value kam ho gayi hai. Geet ko chot lagi hai apko pata hona chahiye isliye shikayat karne k bajaye family members ke sath adjust karna seekhiye.

She left and Natanya fuming in anger. Karan trying to calm down her.

KARAN:clm down jaan bs 1 bar is duplicate k khilaf saboot hath lag jaye fir ye sab roz 2 k tamashe band ho jayenge.

NATANYA:i tell u Karan do smthng realy fast or we lost evrythng.

KARAN:chill i m searching d clues.once i got some strong proof against him and he is finish...now smile pls.

Natanya smiles weakly...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Maan ka accident nahin hua that was a planned murder

i m shocked

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Hmm...may be everything was planned...maan's accident and now this attempt to kill him...i think all these were preplanned attempts...yash is thinking in the correct direction...

bechari geet toh har baar suffer karthi hain iski wajah se...

Karan ko itna achhe se kaise patah hain ki woh maan nahin balki duplicate hain???

jaldi next update dedo...waiting for it...

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

nice update...

i am having a doubt kahin Maan ke accident mein karan aur nt ka haath tho nahin

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Was it maan own brother who tried to kill him for what the business and the property
I guess yash is correct in assuming that this accident of maan wasn't an accident but pre planned murder
How else would it explain that his brother knows that yash is a duplicate unless he knows about the accident or murder
So yash or maan who ever you are feeling something for her are we
Geet yaar your timing can be bad that chandelier was meant for someone else but you got in the way
Wonder what else we will find out about the whole yash. Maan thing and the alleged accident of maan

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

i knw it...maan k murder ha tha...koi accident nehi...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

wonderful updates...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...