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Posted: 12 years ago
BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 10


ALL r enjoying d party. Sunaina take Yash 2 stage were she wants 2 test hm,wheader he recognize d guest or not.Bt Yash is a real player.He was fully trained 4 dese kinds of bouncers. He greet all d guests hmself wid
deir identies. All3Sunaina, Karan and Natanya were amuzed seeing dat he actually knows evryone personaly. Suddenly he saw Sameere coming towrds d stage. Sunaina wants 2 grab d situation. She wanted 2 know now what he do. How he reacts? She cm nd gave gift 2 newly wed.

SUNAINA:Maan beta ine to aap achhe se jante hi hai to introduction ki koi zarurat nai hai.

Yash's eyebrow notted.

YASH:ise main kaise bhul sakta hu.

He grabbed hr arm nd take hr to another side.

SAMEERA:How dare u touch me?

YASH:to ab tumhe mere chhune se b prob hai? Pehle to tumhe mera touch bahut achha lagta tha ab kya ho gaya?

He hold hr waist nd dragged against hm.

SAMEERA:I dont know k tm kon ho. Or agar abhi k abi tumne mujhe nai chhoda to tumare liye achha nai hoga.

Yash looked in er eyes angerily.

YASH:kya karogi?

SAMEERA:tumhe shayad pata nai lekin ye hotel mere fiance ka hai to main bahut kuchh kr skti hu.

YASH:itna hi pyar tha mujhse jo 6 mahine bhi nai lage naya rishta jodne me?

SAMEERA:tm Maan nai ho jo mujhse aise swal kr rahe ho. Or agar 1% main maan b lu k tmhi
Maan ho,to jab tm shadi kr skti ho to main bhi engagement kr skti hu. Kam se kam Arjun tumhari tarah double standard maintain nai karta.

YASH:lekin kya wo ye janta hai ki na jane kitni rate or dinn b tumne meri baho me kate hai.

He smirked. Sameera got angry too.

SAMEERA:bahut bolte ho. Bt 4 ur kind information he know eyerythng. Now leave me rite now.

Yash loosen hs grip over hr. She threw hs hand 4m hr nd left frm dere. Annie saw all dis. She steps towards hm.

ANNIE:ye sab kya...kya kar rahe the tum?

YASH:Annie mam aap b impress ho hi gai na meri performance se?

ANNIE:matlab?

YASH:mtlab ye ki Sameera ko dekh kar Maan kaise react karega yahi apki mom dekhna chahti thi to maine unhe dikha diya.

ANNIE:tum uske sath jaise bate kr rahe the 1pal k liye to laga jaise bhai ko hi dekh rahi hu.

YASH:ab isi baat k to paise le raha hu.agar ab b Maan na lagu to kya fayda itni traning lene ka.

ANNNIE:wow ab mujhe pura yakeen hai ki jo main tumse krwana chahti hu tum wo kr sakte ho.

YASH:thank u.

Meanwhile hr phone start ringing. Annie ans d call. It ws frm Romeo.

ROMEO:Annie sis 1 emergency hai,wo hmare client hai n Mr. Mittal wo kal Paris ja rahe hai isiliye jo meeting kal honi thi wo aaj or abi krni padegi.

ANNIE:lekin aise kaise wo time change kr skte hai?

ROMEO:Annie bat ko smjho wo paris ja rahe hai wo b 1 mahine k liye. Agr aaj meeting nai hui to baat 1 mahine tak tal jayegi. Maine Pandeyji ko b inform kr dia hai wo pahunchte hi honge.main b pahunchne wala hu tm b pls
pahuncho.adress maine sms kr dia hai tumhe.ok bye.

Annie cuts d call nd dialled 2Adi nd inform hm dat she is leaving due to sm urgent work so he reched to d party as soon as possible. Coz she wnts to make sure if he done ny mistake Adi cover up immediately.

ANNIE:Yash mujhe 1 bahut impo.meeting k liye jana padega pr tm tension mat lena.maine Adi se baat kr li hai wo bas aate hi honge tab tak concious rehna.

He nodded. She left d party hall. All enjoying d party nd danced wid deir partners. He feels alone nd awkward. He scanned evry where. Suddenly he saw Geet,who dressed soo beautifully nd luks vry eligant in white shifffon saree. Hr innocent face attracts ny1. She is trying 2 hide hrslf behind ! pillars. She luks worridely evrywhere,as she also had a fear if Maan caught hr he scolds hr badly. Both's eyes met she afraid alot nd try 2 escape frm dere. Yash remembered Annie's instruction. So he ran aftr hr nd grabbed hr arm nd dragged forcly in2 d party hall. Geet begged.

GEET:Maan pls mujhe jane dijiye.main apki party kharab karne nahi aayi thi.

He pulled hr towards hm.

YASH(rudly):do u think i m a fool.tume samjhaya tha na meri parties se durr rehna. Firr kyu ayi tm yaha? Or to or ye ghatia party b tumne hi arrange ki hai. Tumne kya socha ki mujhe pata nai chalega.

Her eyes turn wet.

GEET:i m sorry Maan i dnt wnt 2 hurt. Main to sirf Annie ko help kr rai thi.i evn dnt wnt 2 cm in d party lekin mummyji ne kaha ki aaj ki party me sare family members ko hona chahiye. Trust me Maan main b yhi chahti thi ki yaha se jitni jaldi ho sake chali jao taki apko koi takleef na ho.

Yash:ye acha hai1 to galti karo or firr bahana bana do.

Geet:main janti hu tm mujhse bahut nafrat krte ho.isliye meri kisi b baat ka yakeen nai karoge(tears rolled on hr cheeks). Lekin trust me Maan maine kabi tume hurt krna nai chaha.aaj b agar tum mujhe na dekhte to
main yaha nai hoti ghar chali gayi hoti. Tum mujhse nafrat krte ho lekin main to tumse pyar krti hu or kabi wo kaam nai karungi jisse
mere pyar ko takleef pahunche. U hates me but i love u.

Geet's tears make hm uncofrtable.He melts nd freed hr instantly. '
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 11


Yash freed Geet. Geet moved from dere,but stopped by Yash. (music starts). All couples came on the dance floor but spot light covers
...
only Yash nd Geet. Yash pulled Geet towards him. He put his one hand on her waist nd crushed her in his fingers. He feeled her soft skin and she feels sensation running in her body. This was the first time when his touch doesnt hurt her. He rubbed his palm very softly on her waist and hold her
hand in his another hand. Both looked in each other's eyes. Dance started...

SHOLO SI SHOLO SI TERI ANKHO KI YE ROSHNI,
KISKE LIYE HAI KISKE LIYE HAI,
CHANDANI 2 TERE CHEHRE KI YE CHANDANI,
KISKE LIYE HAI KISKE LIYE HAI..
TERA MUSKURANA NAZAR YU ZHUKANA(2)
MERE LIYE HAI BAS MERE LIYE..(2)

Yash nd Geet dancing passionately. Dere bodies rubbed against each other in very arousing way.

SAMJHO MERA JO ISHARA HAI...
JO BHI HAI MERA WO TUMHARA HAI(2)
LEHAR ME KHOI HU KHOI,
YE MERI ADAYE YE MERI WAFAYE(2)
TUJHKO PATA HAI SAB TERE LIYE HAI...

Maan twist hr and den bang her 2 his chest.Both completely lost in each other...

HAS K DIKHA DO DEEWANE KO,
JO HO RAHA HAI HO JANE DO(2)
DIL KI YE ULJHANNN ZUBAN PE AATI HAI TO AA B JANE DO,
YE HONTO KI NARMI,YE SAANSO KI GARMI(2)
MERE LIYE HAI BAS MERE LIYE HAI...

Yash lifts her rotate her so passionately. Both forgot evry thng. People around dem start
moving frm d dance floor as dey covers d whole floor. Dance floor was on fire with d heatness and temptation they create wid their dance moves. She trembled with his touch on her body everywhere as his hands explore her every where. Both completely lost in each other. Every eye in the party stuck on them. Both hyperventilated. Suddenly Yash
got his concious that what he is actually doing. He just not supposed to do that,he realized.He leave his grip over her and free her. He left the Geet and party hall immediately and go outside to calm down himself. He trail his fingers in his hairs and trying to come out from the moment. He is very confused why he do that. He caught her to torture her then
why he danced with her like that. Why her tears disturbs him so much. All questions made him mad and caught in his own thought he walked uncounciously and hit with Adi.

ADI:are Yash tum yaha kya kar rahe ho party to andar chal rahi hai na?

Yash doesnt gave any answer. Adi gave a shake to him. He got stabled.

YASH:ha wo ander kuch acha nahi lag raha tha to main bas hawa khane chala aaya tha.

Adi smiled.

ADI:ab agar hawa kha li ho to kya hum andar chal skte hai? Dekho pareshan mat ho main aa gaya hu na ab tumhe pareshan hone ki koi
zarurat nahi hai.

Both came in party hall. Geet was still standing at the dance floor as she was still caught in that magical moment. Spot light was only on her. Yash look at her. Adi was very confused looking Geet in the party. Suddenly Yash look
upwards and the view filled his heart wid fear. Reason is a very heavy Chandelier was just a few inches far from Geet's head. without wasting a sec he ran to her and pulled her from dere. He envoloped her in him and fallen on d dance floor nd Chandelier too falls near dem nd broken in many pieces. Geet saved as she enveloped inside his arms. All
lights turned on immediately. Sunaina Karan and Natanya reached to dem. Sunaina hold Geet and Yash get up in anger nd called d manager.

SUNAINA:beta aap doni theek to hai na?

Geet nodded but Yash is boiling. Both manager and Arjun came dere. Yash is fuming and caught
d collar of Arjun.

ARJUN:Maan pls relaxed,it was just an accident nd apolozise for dat.

Yash's eyes turn red in anger.

YASH:accident hai ha.or sorry bol k tumhari resposibility khatam ho jati hai. Adi seeing he is getting out of cntrl.he trying to calm down hm bt he is boiling in anger.

ARJUN:i kno Maan k galti humari hai,lekin shukr hai ki sb theek hai.

YASH:Agar aaj waqt pe nai aata to wo chandelier Geet pe gir jata.use kuchh ho jata to kon zimmedar hota?

ARJUN:Maan she is alrite na?

YASH:tumhare staff ki laprawahi ki wajah se aaj meri patni ki jaan ja sakti thi. Tumhare liye ye mamuli baat hogi lekin mere liye nahi hai.
Or tumhe main chhodunga nahi.

He was very angry and not listining to any one. Suddenly Sunina called him.

SUNAINA:Maan chhodiye unhe idhar aaiye.dekhiye Geet k pau me chot lagi hai.ise jaldi doc k pas leke jana hoga.

Yash forgot his anger listening about Geet's injury. He leave Arjun nd came to c her. A piece of glass pierced in hr foot,when Chandelier falls on floor. Her foot is bleeding
badly. Yash forgot all other things except her injury. He immediately wrapped his henky around hr wound. Then he scooped her in his arms and walked out from the party...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update 👏
mujhe abhi lagraha hai ,ki Yash hi Maan hai..
Edited by -padma- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oyeee m sure yush maan hai ..
m i right ranimaa ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeh kya horaha hain??? Yash wahi hain yaa maan hain abhi bhi uska confusion hain...
Toh sameera ne inn 6mahino main engagement bhi karliya...hmm...aur yash ne jo behave kiya uske saath it will ,ake others believe that yash is maan...
Toh geet se bhi buri tarah se baat kiya hain usne...ab yeh dance kisliye...kyun behak gaya woh???
Update soon...waiting for it...
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Posted: 12 years ago



I think Natanya and Karan has something to do with Maan's accident...

Yash aka Maan is concerned for Geet...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb updates shona...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
humein kyun lag rahe hai k yeh yash nehi maan hai...kuch toh fishy hai...

awesome
n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
nice part...
poor Geet...
Yash's behavior i kinda find it weird...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
poor Geet...
was that deliberately done to hurt Geet?
cont soon dear...

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