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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

read all 13 parts together...nice story...loved maaneet bedrm most...the decoration n color combination is just wow...

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Love both d parts...😛

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

very nice... i have a feeling yash is maan

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

awesome, brilliant parts
loved them
continue soon

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sanam1234u

@sanam1234u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

realy like concept...feeling like yash is maan...

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Interesting ff... But i have a doubt on yash's identity nd i think MSK is playing yash's character...nd i think yeh sunaina is a biggest villan in this ff

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cutemishti

@cutemishti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Nice story line. I doubt yash is maan only. During accident he would have escape and lost his memory. May be sameera is behind in these accidents.

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

who is behind all this..

nice part...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 14
Annie came out nd gave hm a sign to came
out wid her. Yash followed hr. Both went to
Annie's room. Annie's eyebrow notted.
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ANNIE:Ye sab kaise hua? Geet waha kya kr rai
thi?
YASH:believe me mam main b nai janta ki Geet
waha kaise aai. Apke jate hi maine Geet ko
wha dekha to socha us se rudly behave kru
jaise apne kaha tha.
ANNIE:ha to rudly behav krne ko bola tha wo
dance floor pe kaise pahunchi.kuchh idea hai
kal kya ho skta tha(she is fuming)tumhara kya
gaya,dost to meri ghayal ho gayi hai.sirf
tumhari laparwahi ki wajah se aaj use itni
chot aai hai. I want clear explanations u hawa
me bate krke mujhe behlaane ki koshish mat
karo.
YASH:mam main use waha sirf dantne k liye hi
le gaya tha,lekin fir music shuru ho gaya or
hum dono sbke beech me fas gaye. Fir main
badi mushkil se nikala Adi sir ko dhundhne k
liye or unke aate hi hm party me wapis a gaye
or tab maine dekha ki wo Chandelier Geet k
sir pe girne wala hai or maine unhe bacha
liya.ab agr main waha ladta nai to sabko trust
kaise aata ki main Msk hu. Adi se puchhiye
maine kitni achhi performance di waha.
Den he shut hs mouth. Annie is silent. He is
confused,dont get what she is thinking rite
now.
ANNIE:Theek hai ab tum jao(he wnt to
door)or ha meri baat yaad rakhna Geet k sath
hadd me raha karo.samjhe tum.
He nodded yes nd wnt out. The whole day
Yash was busy in finding d answers of his
questions. He spend whole day in study
without eating ny thing. In eveningg he went
to his room when he entered she served him
a coffee. He worried for hr nd in pretext of
anger he again show hs care.
YASH:tumhe k baat smjh me nai ati mujhe
tumhri hath ki coffee nai peeni to fir kyu
baar2 kitchen me chali jati ho?
GEET:Maan pls gussa mat karo ye coffee maine
nai banai Nakul ne hi banai hai.main to sirf
lekr aai hu.
YASH:maine kaha tha lane k liye?(Geet nodded
no.) to firr kyu gai thi bahr.
He feel realy bad whenever he scolds hr lyk
dat so after scolding hr he realy need a break.
To calm down hmslf he wnt out. Geet wnts to
say sorry to hm
GEET thougt( geet tu b na ek to maan ne
waise hi subah se kuch khaya nai hai uperse
tujhe b wai kaam krne hai jo unhe achhe nahi
lgta sari galti meri hi hai main hi umaan ko
pareshan krti rehti hu)
geet came out tnd seek fr hm,bt she doesnt
found hm.
GEET:Natanya tumne Maan ko dekha?
Natany showing attitude.
NATANYA:jethani ji mere paas or b kaam
hai.veerji k aage pechhe daudna to apka shuk
hai.fir koi fayda nai hone wala.
Geet got dat she dont tell anythng so she
moved frm dere.but Natanya stops hr.
NATANYA:waise pakka to nai pata pr veerji
shayad Terrace pe hai.
GEET:thank u.
She left without ansng hr. Geet too go to
terrace nd looking for hm here nd dere. But
Maan ws nt dere. On other hand Yash ws also
looking fr hr. He came out in d lawn hope may
b she is here to take fresh air.
"MAAANNN",sud denly he hear d scream of
Geet. He look here nd dere bt she ws nt at all.
Den he looks upwards & hs eyes came out. Hs
heart sinks, feet freeze in fear. He feels as sm
one takng hs lyf out of hs body. D view ws
realy horrible to hm. Geet was hanging wid d
edge of d railing of d terrace. He collect hs all
nrgy nd ran 2wrds terrace. Geet's grip bcm
loosn. Hr hands strt sliping frm d railing she
hold. Yash reaced to hr nd hold hr arm on
time b4 its too late. Hr body weight ws totally
hr hnds nd she hanging,so its vry difficult fr
Yash to pulld her up. In dis process of pulling
her up Geet's arm scratched wid d edge of
railing sevral times. After his endless tries
finaly he sucedded in pulling hr up. Geet was
so feared nd feeled vry insecured,so she
hugged hm to calm down hrslf. Yash was too
in same condition. He embraced her to make
sure to hmself dat she is safe now. Both's
breath get harder. Meantime Natanya, Sunaina
and some servants also came dere. But yash
doesnt want to seprate hr frm hmself so he
stayed in d same position. More than Geet,he
wants to assured hmslf dat she is alrite.
SUNAINA:o my god beta ye sab kaise hua,aap
theek to hai na?akhir yaha ho kya raha hai koi
batayega mujhe.
YASH:agar aaj main waqt pe nai aata to Geet
neeche gir jati.
SUNAINA:geet beta aap terrace pe kya kr rai
thi or aap neeche kaise girne wali thi?
Geet was still in panic.bt she explain.
GEET:mumma main Maan ko dhundte hue
chhat pe aai thi,fir pata nai kaise main waha
latak gai.aise laga jaise kisi ne mujhe push kia.
Yash's ear wide open.
YASH:tmse kisne kaha ki main terrace pe hu?
GEET(innocently ):Natanya ne.
All eyes turned to her. Natanya feel nervous.
NATANYA::maine to bas yu hi bol dia tha...
Yash gave a furious look to her...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

?? BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - 15
YASH was in extreame anger. He fult to hit hr
badly.
YASH:jb tumhe pata hi nai tha ki main kaha hu
...

to tmne Geet se jhooth kyu bola?
Natanya trembled with fear. Dont know what
to say to him.
SUNAINA:ha beta apko jab pata hi nahi tha ki
Maan kaha hai to apne Geet ko terrace pe kyu
bheja?
NATANYA:mumma maine to aise hi Geet ko
talne k liye bol diya tha..
She get numb nd cant able to face d anger in
Yash's eyes so she ran frm dere.
SUNAINA:Maan beta aap Geet ko kmre me le
jaiye,unhe aram ki zarurat hai. Or ha beta pls
ye sb Annie ko mat bataiyega wo khamkha
aape se bahar ho jayengi.
Geet nodded yes. Yash take her to room. She
is still in trauma. Suddenly he noticed scratch
marks on her arm.
YASH:Geet tumhe to bahut chot lagi hai.
Geet saw her arm.
GEET:nai Maan its ok ye to mamuli si khronch
hai.main theek hu.
Yash gave her water to make her breath
normal. Then he hold hr arm,clean hr injury
mark nd rubbed an ointment on hr injury nd
blow on it. Geet saw hm lovengly. Yash
noticed her love for hm in hr eyes. He realize
dat he had to step back now. So he leave hr
immediately nd went out. But now one thing
is confrmd to hm dat some one wants to kill
her. Two inncidents back to back take place. It
was definately not a co incidence rather dan a
full proof planned action. His tension increses.
He wants to know who is responciple for dis.
What he/she wants exactly. What was d main
motive of a killer. Next day he went to Grand
Hotel where killer first attack on hr. He waits
fr Arjun Oberoi. Manager informed Arjun
about his arrival. At the same time Sameera
was wid hm. Both came down, sameera
holding hs arm tightly. Both smiled alot while
talking on some topic. Yash noticed both and
thought...
Yash thought(Ye Sameers hai jiske liye Maan
ne apna sab kuchh chhod diya tha, yaha tak ki
apne parivar ki b parwah nai ki jo sse itna
pyar karta hai. Ek taraf wo masoom hai jo
bina kisi aas k use deewano ki tarah chahti
hai or ek taraf ye hai jise uske jane ka afsos
tak nai hai)
ARJUN nd SAM cm to hm arjun greet maan.
ARJUN:hi Maan aaj yaha kaise?
YASH:arjun tm abi k abi apne maintainance
staff ko yaha bulao. Mujhe unse puchh tachh
krni jaruri hai.
ARJUN(unwilling ly):Maan tm ab tk usi baat ko
pakad kr baithe ho. Relax yaar it was just an
accident.
Yash look furiously at hm.
YASH:it was not an accident.it was a planned
incident. Tm seedhi tarah se help kr rahe ho
ya firr main police ka sahara lu. Meri ek
complaint or puri police force action me aa
jayegi. Uske baad tumhare hotel ka kitna nam
kharab hoga wo tum b jante ho.
ARJUN:ok main bulwata hu yaha sabko.
He ordered his manager to call the workers
right now. All workers came there. Yash start
his investigation. He asked many questions
from all.
YASH:us dinn chandelier ki saaf safai kisne ki
thi?
Worker: sir us dinn Raghu ne ki thi.
YASH:to raghu kaha hai?
Worker:sir wo to us dinn se kaam pe aa hi
nahi raha hai.
ARJUN:what? Wo kaam pe aa hi nahi raha
magar kyu?
Worker:pata nahi sir usse contact nahi ho pa
raha.
YASH:Or ab hoga b nahi. Ab to wo bhag bhi
gaya hoga. Lekin mujhe uska add chahiye.
Manager:yes sir abi deta hu.
Yash take d address nd reached dere. Raghu's
house is locked nd no one near around know
where is he rite now. Yash go to police and
asked for help but not officialy. Police men
came with him and broken the locked door
and start searching may b they got some clue.
After searching whole house,they got a chit
nd Geet's pic from dere. In a chit there is a
message to kill her. Except this chit there is no
clue of killer.
Inspector:mr. Maan raghu jb tk pkda nai jata
kuchh theek se kah nai ja skta.waise maine
apne admi laga diye hai.i hope wo jldi hmari
pakad me hoga.
YASH:insp. Kya main wo chit le skta hu?
Insp:lekin aap kya karenge?
YASH:main unhe mila k dekhna chahta hu.kya
pata insabke pichhe koi bahut nazdeeki ho.
Insp:theek hai aap le jaiye.
He gave dat chit to him. Yash take the chit wid
hm and went to KM. Now he wnts sm
documents written by d family members.so
he can match it with everyon's hand writing.
But now d prob is dat frm where he get d
written documents of everyone. He went to
store room where may b he got smthng. He
start hs search. It was vry huge room filled
wid junk nd dust. It is just lyk a searching a
pin from hey stack. 2 to 3 hours spend in hs
search,he found ntng. Suddenly he saw an old
cabinet. He moved to dat. May b he got
smthng frm dere. It was locked. Bt he brokd d
seal. All boxes r empty except one. He opn dat
1 nd he found is shocking. It was a pink
coloured cover private diary of Geet...

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Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago

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