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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#631

so it was pari who wrote it...amazing part...continue soon

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: nats0101
hey u left it hanging at d wrong point..
i m guessing sm secrets r abt to b revealed??

yes dear in next chapter only...

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#633

awesome part dear

loved it

oh you ended with anew mystery

please cont soon

thanks for pm

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

prt22
Gr8 prt
Maan is confused abt his bhaviour...
N geet is confused abt her feelings
Loved their indirect conffesion alott...
Those dialouges wer beautifull

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

prt23
Only one thing i wnt to say...
U stopped at vry wrong place...
Plzzz updt nxt prt soon
I wnt to kno wt is der in dat doc.

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Sarah08

@Sarah08

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

hmmm...this is one hell of a dark story which is so beautifully written that it respects nothing but appreciation and admiration. I never thought that a story as such would attract me with Maaneet in it but u have truly put me in a trance. I guess, they will discover that Pari was the one who wrote the last poem in the upcoming updates, can't wait. If u are sending PMs out for updates, pls add me. Thanks and all the best especially for your writing career :)

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

wow liking their bonding i will call it and maan slowly opening up to geet...so pari has left another message/clue for maan on his laptop this time i wonder if its the draft to her last poem 😊

great update

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

amazing update..actually feeling bad 4 geet i dnt wanna maan 2 reciprocate her feelings bt he is actually making mockery of dem ..nw coming 2 last bomb so itz pari who used maan's lapi bt nvr knw wat u actually decided...

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

uff in my bak bak i totally forgot, y i was here in frst place...soiieeyyy kaan pakad k😳

now talk abt update...it was pretty nice infact, now a days m lyking d update more n more😳 n u better know d reason..so no brownie points fr guessing 😆

when i started reading i was lyk😃...grinning ear to ear, obviously lyk a fool😆

when maan was pouring his heart out n showing things i was lyk😭 u always do wonders whenevr u described his pain👏

n at d end, i was lyk😲

"and that is my favorite one...",she thought"...awww

so wat d reason is "her challenge"...atleast she become d reason of his existence n he dropped d idiotic idea of suicide, dat was enough in itself

ps i dnt remember, did i evr told u dat i luv to roam around hanging garden, Nahiii naaa so how can u assume it by urself 😡...now m feeling lyk a hanger who's latking lyk pendulum doing tick tock, left right n waiting fr clock to hit 10:00 a.m. ... arrggghhh