FF-Obsession,chapter29 and next thread-pg150,7oct. - Page 58

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Sorry have been quite late in commenting.

Loved the last few updates...The story is unfurling well - and described in a detailed manner. Maan's love for Pari, his depression, his intention of ending his life and finally rising above it to find a facet of his love he did not know.

Geet's heartbreak is logical and I liked the fact that she kept herself aloof to help herself as well as him.

The meeting was awesome. Both behaved as expected - I guess Maan has started feeling close to Geet right from when they started discussing about Pari. Close doesnt mean love, it just means a bond between two souls - else they wouldnt be able to discuss about Pari's illness which was so personal to Maan.

I love the slowly developing attraction and I believe you have shown it with with great patience and care. So no complaints 😃

Looking forward to know who wrote the poem...I guess its not only Kavita, but Pari also used to write.

Originally posted by: Diva7

🤣🤣🤣now i seriously need to keep a close watch on my food content n shud start avoid carbohydrates, fat, n high sugar food coz i'll get diabetes aftr reading dis🤣 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Diva7

surprise suprise n i luv surprises😛...ohh boy u bowled me over i luvd d fact dat she was bold, straight forward yet simple when she confessed her luuuvvv...dats d usp of d update👍🏼...rahi baat maan ki... i lyk his restlessness coz u wrote it brilliantly bt i dnt think he's easily goin to accept his feelings... lets see kab tak sigh!!!!!!...

n m vry happy u kept ur promise n gav us a maaneetlicious update😳😉

btw i jst noticed somebody finally got a profile pic hmmm... naughty child😆

m luving d flow of d ishtory vry much...thnks fr pm dear

Originally posted by: palindrome

"shakkar ki bimari"...tell me whom i am talking about???

Originally posted by: palindrome

hmm..i love him unconditionally...😆he is my favorite cartoon character...