FF-Obsession,chapter29 and next thread-pg150,7oct. - Page 37

Originally posted by: Shonameet

so,finally pari is dead!(thank u)
maan is in shock. Paris parents accused maan for her death. They were against of their marrige n thought maan as a obsessed luver... How they agreed to geet n didnt file the case against maan??{as you might have noticed that pari's parents are secondary characters in my story..Actually i always try to keep the number of characters very low otherwise they confuse me while writing..you can assume being a psychiatrist herself,geet might have made them understand their daughter's problem.They don't trust maan but they would trust a psychiatrist}
Maan attempted suicide...but geet saved him.
''so u saved me'' '' no...i already knew that u would, thats why i chose a time when chances of ur arrival were minimal- he smirked'' ---than how geet reached on right time or he made sure that she did?? {you can say it a coincidence or fate that geet reached at right time..i don't think maan was able to plan anything like this in such mental condition,by god's grace she was able to save him}.He was so confidant that she will save him.{yes he was..and he should ask his heart why he believed that geet would save him}
If he didnt want her to save him than why he is telling her that he will try again?{yes this could be his mistake..if he really want to die then he should not tell her but now i think he won't do something like this..he will live as he has to prove his wife's love for him}
Maan slaped geet! Atlast geets luv/heart overpowerd her rational thinking nd she blurted out about the doubt she had regarding paris real feelings for maan. Though she realised her fault but it was late, the damage was done..., But she is not entirly wrong also!
As pari used to be in certain poems influence for short time...this thing also implies on that poem which she read before her first engegment...
But maan is so sure that pari luvd him more than he luvd her. And he will prove it...lets see how?
Btw what about that 'entropy entropy'??{😕 😕..dont know where she is at this moment}It seems they both had forgot about it. They should hav checkd if there is any new poem posted or the writer is still writing?? After all this is the root coz of all the problems{one of them was not in his senses these daysand other one was super tensed about his health and mental condition.. so who cares about entropy entropy now..damage has already done.

Originally posted by: Diva7

OMG😲 😲... my dear writer,do din mein do do suicide karwane wali thi, thank god ek hi hua😆 {32 days have passed in their world dear..😆}

m feeling dis is so far d best update of dis FF...m living, luving, mourning each n every word of it...my gosh u r hell of a writer😆...as i told u before i luv to read geet's journal n d way she described maan's state was simply superb👍🏼👏...so atlast u clear my doubt abt pari's luv fr maan...she luvd him n i hate dis fact😡😆...AB KYA HOGA ?????????????{ab maan geet ko prove karega that pari loved him}

d way story was progressing in these two updates n then saw d title of d second update i thought, sure maan is goin to get a tight slap frm her n it serves him right...bt u nvr fails to surprise or rather say shock me...sab ulta pulta ho gaya😆...here m writing d nxt line which geet thought in her mind aftr getting a dhamakedaar slap..."thappad se darr nahi lagta, pyar se lagta hai "🤣 {that was funny "my -soon-to-be famous-writer..imagine someday maan saying to geet."badi bhayankar lag rahi ho".,.if you remember this is the dialogue from same movie,i had never heard/watched a hero praising heroine's beauty in this way}wat dnt stare at me😲...encourage me m becoming a writer😆... yeah i know i know i steal it frm a movie... so wat it perfectly depicts geet's feelings... isn't it???

mind blowing update... yeah it totally blows my mind dat is y today m talking so much rubbish plz bear wid me😆...n still m no where to stop so before it blows ur mind also let me use my full stop button. where d hell dis key isss ahh got it...{where is this key???i want to know,so i could make it "on and on" forever}

Originally posted by: palindrome