MG SS : ADDICTION PT 9 PG 75 AUG 19 - Page 23

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awesome dear...Maan is really feeling the grief Geet have...omg u r portraying in such a lovely manner I m loving it from my heart
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who the hell is she???
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part 5
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superb part

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geet asking for Divorce !! 😲

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Posted: 12 years ago
ADDICTION










"Her journey from deep darkness to his world

a world where she will see the first ray of love and affection''..


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PART 6



Maan was in the world the real geet that unknowingly and unbelievingly he had discovered.. he was having no further doubts that the geet she portrays to be is just a livid image of the bubbly and vivacious girl that she was hiding all her life…

Maan settled himself beside her .. geet unknowingly hold his hand.. and maan just pulled her tired self to him.. he was sitting next to her … her flicks fall on her face .. that irritated her .. he very consciously removed the hair strands that were teasing his love..and yes he did got his prize for that his geet just got cuddled to him ..



the moments of love that he want to share with her ..he never got them just because .. geet was never in her senses.. Either she will be bickering over something or the other and lately he started to ignore her knowing her .. but how far he could have kept himself away from her …

Though she was a drug addict but here he was deeply and insanely addicted to her…. He knew the moment she will open her eyes his baby princess will vanish leaving his hot headed wife and that's the biggest challenge he have to face now… to change her…

Maan: today it had started geet.. I just got a glimpse of my real geet .. the geet who seemed to be lovely and cheerful..who knows that life is just to get treasured … it needed to be prized with the love and affection of your dear ones… the geet who loves her parents… who knows how to crib just to get her demand fulfilled…. Today it was your clothes… though I don't have any problem with what you like.. but still some things needed to be changed for others too….

Later .. maan searched her armoire .. he wanted to know what were all in her name.. Which property she says about all the time.. but he just got some bank statements her cheque book.. Credit cards.. and some cash too… but from where she did get all these was not there.. maan took all the things just to get himself know that what were the real sources …

As he was about to close his search he got to see something.. there was written CONFIDENTIAL.. and there were some keys …that seemed to be of some locker..but seeing in geet's room he didn't find any …

Maan couldn't believe his wife can be such a mystery …. Yup she was indeed he thought with sigh…

Maan: how much I have to know about you geet …. Damn you are so complicated.. he was having a idea that whatever it was ..no one had any idea and knowing geet and her habits she needed someone to instruct her..she was like a puppet of someone's hands….

Later yash and priya tried to talk to maan but maan gestured not to speak… geet was all awake and she was limping well off course she had badly hurt herself.. priya's heart cried seeing her only daughter going into a dark unbreakable shell and darkness…

Geet was fiddling with the dupatta..she was finding it difficult or say she was highly irritated the way it just fall off her shoulder …

She just for once gave a threatening look to her annoying duppata ..which was not unnoticed by maan and her parents… well maan know what she must be thinking… yash was finding it difficult not to laugh ..and finally seeing his princess all restless and twitched he just broke into peals of laughter ..when priya nudged him to stop…

Geet looked at her dad with wide eyes.. her almond doe shaped eyes were finding it difficult to conceal her embarrassment but still she frowned a little and looked at her dad with a cute baby pout…

Maan was finding it difficult not to smile ..but seeing his cute wifey he know that he just couldn't hold know….

Geet cribbed…

Geet: dad ..why are laughing… I knew it all the way that you don't love me..and know you are making fun of me..fun this stupid piece of cloth she again glared at dupatta.. earning another hearty laugh from her dad and she just didn't believe that her dad will make fun of her …

Geet whined…

Geet: daddy..

She just gave the perfect puppy dog eyes … and her expressions were just like a three year old girl..

Yash wiped off the single tear drop that dropped from his eyes..but maan nodded in a no asking not to cry… he quickly wiped off the lone tear murmuring a THANK YOU to maan…

Maan just quickly averted his eyes … he didn't want anyone to see his uneasiness.. yes he was quite but was feeling really odd and happy seeing her like that…

Yash opened his arms for his dear daughter ….

Yash: come here darling….

Geet smiled widely and went to the protective embrace of her father …..

Geet: mumma see dada loves geet more….

For a second all the eyes were on her.. priya couldn't believe that geet called her mumma after all these years.. she was not believing that her baby called her mumma what she was longing to hear..

Last time she heard this when geet was seven years and after that she didn't even know what happened to the bubbly and chirpy geet .. she just lost her daughter as the days passed.. it turned into months then years..

Geet didn't know why she said this … she was feeling all the heated eyes towards her … she immediately excused herself…

Though her wound was too deep but she didn't cared..she just walked.. hurting herself.. making her feet bleed…

Yash tried to stop her but she was like that she didn't listen…

Yash: geet stop baby.. why are you doing this…

Geet neither stopped ..nor turned..she just yelled….

Geet: I have nothing to do with this woman .. she is not my mother.. my ma died/…. I don't have any mother…

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Well a question to readers….

Are you liking this story and want me to continue or shall i drop it here

Silent readers do respond to this question ..

NEXT: geet screemed.." I want divorce from him.. get the papers ready "


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