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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 48

(Warning : Here has some violence in this part )

she was seeing back and running and suddenly bumped to someone.. she fell with sudden bump and looked up... "maan.." her lips whispered smiling with tears...she stood up and hugged him crying bitterly. Her all strength, all power, all will of fighting, of saving her dignity vanished finding her savior there..in her arm.. soothing her.. she felt like a cloud with no weight in her left. Her leg started paining, her hand , her arm was hurting badly, her whole body was just giving away.. she had no worry no stress of self now.. she was flying, her soul was flying in sky of her maan secure love.


Maan hugged her even more tight to get his soul his life back.. he was not sure he was alive or dead. His body his heart his whole existence was wandering to find solace till now but now they were in so much peace ... his geet was in his arm made him alive again. He felt his heartbeat back in his heart again. They were hugging each other tight , lost in each other love.


After some moment maan parted her and cupped her face asking "geet tum thik toh ho na " she nodded between her tears. Her lips were trembling not having any strength to say a word. He hugged her again feeling her pain. He kissed her head her forehead to heal her. Geet was feeling better now. She parted and tried to say "maan.. wo..wo.maanav..ma..maanav..."



"shhh geet .. mai jaanta hu " and he insert her in his arm wall. Maan looked maanav... his eyes were burning, his heart was screaming, his whole body was raging in revenge, in hatred, in feel of to murder that bas**** then and there. How dare he touched my geet.. how dare he even think to harm her.. how dare he.. I will not spare him.. he will have to repent.. he will have to burn alive.. he will have to give his all flesh and blood even then my revenge my hatred would not be calm down.. I will not leave you maanav.. not anymore... you will have to die today maanav... you have to...


he left geet there being sure she is fine. He stepped toward maanav.. then naina. Naina started shaking with his ablazed eyes.. she stepped back scared. Maan gazed maanav. Maanav was not scared. He was still smirking.. he clapped... "wowww... look .. geet s maan ..her savior came to save her.. not bad ..not bad... achha hai.. aaj dono ka kaam yahi pe khatam kar dunga... "


maan was not hearing him. He was glaring him like a hungry lion. He had no other disturbance . He had only one aim to destroy.. to kill that devil that bas*** who touched his geet..who gave her pain.. who gave her tears... maanav took his silence as his fear.. he was going to say some more word when maan screamed loud and held his collar making maanav shocked and frighted in less then a second. Maan was screaming. Hollering like a wildest animal who was thirsty from ages.. he clutched maanav neck and raised in air hollering. Maanav was struggling .. shaking his leg which was in air.. fighting for a bit of breath but maan was tightening his clutch... he threw him forcefully on ground. Then run to him again and pick him up clutching his caller again making him stood. Then maan punched in his stomach this hard to make maanav bleed from mouth badly..


geet and naina horrified looking this much violence.. naina picked rod and run to maan from behind to hit him but maan showed his finger to her .. glaring her nodded no.. saying " Dont dare to think even..otherwise... " rod fell from her hand and she stepped back freighted. Taking advantage to this moment maanav freed himself and started to run when maan picked rod and threw to him targeting his leg but it hit on his head hard.. maanav winched in pain and fell down clutching his head.. maan again run and punched him hard .. making him more and more alike dead.. geet was now started worrying looking this much rage in maan eyes.. she never wanted to be killed anyone by his hand. She run to maan and tried to stop him but maan was not in his sense.. geet pain, her scream, her tears filled face was coming one by one in front of his eyes making him more furious.. maanav had hardly any life left... he was near death... geet condition was being bad looking all this.. maan looked her.. he felt her condition and stopped hitting maanav.. he hugged geet tight soothing her.. healing her. Satish came on time and arrested both maanav and naina.


Maan kissed her face madly feeling her safe. His heart followed by his eyes, were crying blood tear. "geet tum thik hona " again n again he was asking her.. he checked her face arm her whole body if she was hurt..if she had got any scar.. she cupped his face looking his restlessness. "maan mai bilkul thik hu..mujhe kuch nahi hua " she kissed his cheek making him calm. She smiled. He smiled back. "ghar le chalo na maan " she said. He peaked her forehead then lips smiling and both left to KM.


Precap : Maaneet Marriage 😳

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Hope I m doing good

This FF is going to end very soon.. thank you so much giving me this much support & love to complete this Maaneet journey... 👏

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Me waiting eagerly for precap😳
Loved the part di... Urgh this Maanav nd tht bitch.
Glad tht geets fine, aakhir maann jo tha apni Jaan ko protect krne k liye😉
Pls jaldi jaldi maneet ki marriage krwao😊
Oh teri!!!! Pls dnt end it this soon yar, post marriage scenes nd baby scenes nh honge????😭
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Wow di ur updates r jst rocking, kal raat apne ekdum hrttouchin aur jhakaas os dia, aur ab dis update, luv it di. Vry glad dat d b*****d maanav n dat bitch naina r thrown out. Me waiting 4 next part di, plz updt soon, badly waiting 4 maaneet marriagbe.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
maanav deserve it..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
amazing update dear
i m glad no shock this time eheheheee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nice update..
finally maanav and naina arrested..
now maaneet mariage wohh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
wowww yar ...but u r going to end it

so better to start new...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
chalo maan ne geet ko bacha liya...aur manav ka band baaja diya...m sooo happy...dancing in joy...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
amazing update as usual
maan vs maanav was awesome
bola tha na maanav maan se panga mat lena
ab bhugto
n naina man such a cheap character
precap is dreamy
update soon
waiting eagerly

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
this is the right way to behave with a bas**** like maanav

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