Her Bitter fate#3 UPDATED Epilogue / Pg 24 - Page 10

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Last Part


Maan and Geet .. two words one meaning, were sitting in front of holy fire..which was giving them blessing for living whole life in shade of God warm shadow.. The fire was witnessing their flawless and pure relation which was paradise of this word. It was his luck to see this heavenly marriage which was taking place in HP .. geet home .. in handa haveli where once her life had drown in deep dark of her Bitter Fate but today once again her savior , her shining knight was making her to him for ever, giving promise to keep her safe and happy for ever. He will not leave her in any turn of life.. he will always give her , first part of his every happiness and will push her behind him if any sorrow comes in their way. He will always make her his support and live forever like she wants to him. He will give her all possible happiness and peace in life and never make her hurt in even his nightmare.. these were vows which maan was repeating in his mind when priest was doing all rituals..


Geet was no less .. she was already wrote her whole life to his name.. she was not geet but just a name... she was maan .. she had meaning of her being alive, without her maan .. she had no soul.. she had nothing rest to give him .. she was already left her whole existence for her maan.. she had no thought, she had no wish , no demand form God ..from her babaji... her babaji already gave his most precious bless in form of maan,, to her. She only wished now , never ever in her whole life her maan get any sorrow or pain..otherwise she wont spare those who would be reason of his slight wince..


Rano and Mohindar were standing their , looking both fondly. Both maan and geet were their children .. making their life complete with a eternal bonding. They both blessed them all happiness of life with heart of a mother and a father.


Maan n Geet was taking fera (walking round around holy fire) when it started drizzling outside.. (elders says its a good sign when it rains during any marriage) the couple is blessed by Lord Shiv n goddess Parwati specially with all divine boons... yes indeed it was heavenly wedding with most simplicity. Inside it was artificial decoration but outside God was all busy decorating whole nature with his own holy hand.


Inside maan put red sindur in her hair part, here outside, moon bend his head down to witness this most beautiful sight of his life removing all water drops from him.




In side maan tied Mangalsutra in geet neck, outside all stars run giving blessing from open roof of mandap (marriage tent) with their small twinkles.. saying we are with you.. your life always be shine with our illumination.




Here maaneet stood and took blessing from their elders, outside all dark clouds of sky vanished, leaving a dim yet lovely rainbow, saying I ll make your life as colorful as mine is.




Here geet did her Bidaai ritual with heavy, crying heart .. outside nature blew cool breeze patting, caressing geet hair , blessing her with all freshness of life.




It was divine, it was most beautiful sight when maan held her shoulder and nodded no , saying dont cry angel, I cant see drops in your eyes.. it belongs to me now.. if you will cry .. my heart will cry blood tears. Geet wiped her tears listing his pain and smiled making his time stopped. Maan wanted to cherish this moment with kissing her forehead but he controlled. After bid adieu to all they sat in car which was decorated with red and white flowers. Maan drove to his farmhouse as it was near from there. Geet kept her head on his shoulder smiling, closing her eyes, lost in her beautiful dream which was no dream anymore. It was real... now she dint need to dream for anything. Her prince charming was there to fulfill her every wish without saying. All flowers danced with cool wind looking this divine sight inside car.




They reached their farmhouse. geet opened her eyes witnessing most beautiful sight in front of her. it was small yet elegant banglow surrounded with large palm tress and a lake besides. there was all over candles decorations were enhancing its loveliness. geet was looking it with widen eyes and open mouth. maan looked her face ..it was cute and funny.. he very wanted to catch this special moment for ever. her open mouth was inviting him. He moved to her wneh she was still busy in seeing all decorations. he held her waist and took those lips in his, capturing her whole sweetness of mouth in his. he was kissing her slowly like wanted to save this time in frame for whole life.. geet first shocked with his sudden touch on her lips..then started giving response with same passion. she was enjoying with him.. making him on cloud nine. he was chewing and nibbling her lips with love and care not to hurt her. her delicate body was shivring shaking with his sweet passion. maan tightened his hold on her body and started caressing her hair and back.


After long they parted. Maan looked her face which was totally red due to shy.. she looked him and bend her eyes down. he touched her lips with his thump removing her messed lipstick.. he straighten her duppatta which had fallen down from her head .. he was checking her everything as she was some teenage girl and was going out .. she got confused with his this act.. why he was making her presentable like she had to go in front of any elder then she saw house door opened and dadimaa was standing there with puja thaal.. smiling.. waiting for them. now geet understood why maan was caring her dress and makeup after kiss.. she fell for him once again badly with his this sweet gesture. maan wiped his face also looking in front mirror and went out of car. he went to geet side and opened door. he raised his hand to her. she held and came out..


As she stood on her feet maan lifted her in his arm. Geet shocked and looked to dadi who was shaking her head and smiling at her grand son naughtiness.. they reached to door where dadi did all rituals. both took her blessing and dadi blessed geet with " sada suhagan raho.. dudho nahao puto falo (blessing of marriage) geet blushed hearing her bless as maan gave her teasing look.. dadi finished all essential rituals and left for delhi with driver (as maan said to do essential ritual in farm house and rest next day when they will reach Delhi) but dint forget winking to them.


Now Maaneet were all alone.. maan looked geet and smiled teasingly.. geet condition was so mess.. she was all shy and scared.. her breath was heavy and fast.. her body was shaking and thrilling.. her head was spinning and she was burning inside thinking what would happen. What maan will do as his eyes was all dark due to desire. She was busy in her thought when she felt his hand on her bare waist below dupatta.. she shivered. Her whole body heated with his warm touch. He hugged her from behind and kissed her neck. She closed her eyes in anticipation. He removed her dupatta from head and was going remove from shoulder when she smiled naughtily, pushed him back and run to upstairs.. " geett" maan called irritated with her sudden act and followed her... geet was running , giggling when maan caught her and pulled her toward him .. geet collided in his chest. Her breath was fast and heavy .. he looked her face then to her lips which had adorn a sweet smile.. he brushed her lips with his.. both s breath were warm. Both were panting hard due to prevision . She was lost in him shutting her eyes when maan lifted her in his arm.. she felt her legs in air but still was closing her eyes .. enjoying every bit of their first proximity..


he looked her face. It was glowing like full moon and red shade on it making her breathtaking and adorable. He started carrying her to his room.. she was smiling resting her head on his shoulder.. he bend down and kissed her cheeks.. she hides her face more in him. He inhaled her hair and kissed . She snuggled more into him.. he reached to their room and closed door. His putting her down on bed made her open her eyes.. she looked around..


it was huge and beautiful room .. all over chain of flowers filling breath with sweet smell.. beautifully decorated with dim candle lights were filling magnificent and romantic feeling in their heart.. it was indeed their best night.. as it was their first night...



Geet was sitting there bending her knee and head as well like a shy bride.. maan looked her and smiled looking her lovely gesture.. he vowed to make her his wife for seven births .. as he was just again fell in love with her.. she was looking endearing.. he moved to her making her gasp in sensational fear.. she bended her face more feeling so blush.. could not able to look him.


" geet " he called.. " geet meri taraf dekho please " he requested her to look him. She nodded no smiling .. "ek baar bhi nahi dekhogi " he again asked.. she still nodded no.. making her ear ring making sweet sound.. which felt magical in this dark alone silent night.. he smiled and laid down , keeping his head in her lap .. she surprised with this act. He took her hand and kissed looking her face which was bending over his. He was caressing and kissing her hand and arm making her total crimsoned. He started removing her bangles and kissing on empty places.. then he held her neck and bend her more toward him taking her lips in him


After short kiss he left her as it was paining her back .. he sat up in front of her and slipped her dupatta from her shoulder .. she closed her eyes.. he laid her down and came over her .. he traced her face with his finger then replaced with his lips.. her heavy breath was making him insane in desire but he wanted to calm her first.. he dint want to make her scared with his uncontrolled passion ..least he knew that she was burning inside as well.. she was too wanted to be his forever as he desired.. both were longing each other inside them .. both were eager to reach to each other soul as fast as..


Geet waited for his next step... and he was waiting her to open her eyes.. to be her witness of their pure love.. she listened his wish and opened her eyes.. she looked his eyes which was seeking permission to her .. she could not bear his request and hugged him tight making her body glued to him.. he too hugged her tight, feeling happy that his request was granted without saying.. he kissed her neck her shoulder and his hand made his way to her dress..


In no time , his eyes were seeing the world's most beautiful creation of God, with his bare eyes.. she was feeling no shy .. no embarrassment as she knew.. she had no right on her body from now as it was his.. only he had right to sip her beauty.. only he had right to capture her every curve of her body, every lines every pattern of her skin with his eyes and lips as well.. their uncontrolled passion , longing , desire made their way and they both lost completely in each other, filling their love , filling their emptiness of life with each others savors of love


He took her in a new world.. a world of their dream.. a world where all happiness rests, a world of their wish and desires, a world where no bitterness will enter as this world was of Maan and Geet... this word was of Maaneet.. A Maaneet World.



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Hope I Did Good

Thank You So Much Liva (Raingurti) For These Most Memorable Photos


This FF was my first dream in Maaneet dreamland.. and today my dream is ended.. i am feeling emotional right now.. but it doesnt mean i will stop dreaming 😊

Hope you all liked and enjoyed this journey of my maaneet dream

Love You All For Giving Me Support And So Much Encouragement so I Could Finish It So Well





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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
yipppieee me first
me dancinggg
cnt believe it that the ff is over
but as the say
all good things got to come to an end
but we want a huge huge epilogue
pretty please ( baby face )
anywayz back to the update
maan n geet's marriage was truly divine
even nature is symbolizing their true n divine bonding
their eternal oneness was bound to happen
as no one in this world has the right to break maan n geet
they r made for each other
god's favorite children
bound to each other for life
update the epilogue soon
waiting eagerly


Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
first of all wish u to finished this ff so beautifully 👏...thank u lovu to make us part of ur journey of maaneet dream n I don't know about others but me sooo honoured to be part of this journey.I know today u r so emotional coz this was ur first ff n its very close to u as well mine coz in this ff we mean me n soma come to know as a ff writer. and come to todays update I must say this was the best part not only this part the whole ff was awesome n todays was beyond of .lovuuu congrats once again n thanx to give us a beautiful divine maaneet ff.👏👏...love uuu...muahhh
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: suhaaana

sweeetooo me waitinggg jaldi karo before papa comes😆



😆😆 papa aa gaye kya 😛 jaldi se padh lo 😉
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
lovely update dear..
it was w0onderful journey with her bitter faith..
and tru.ly said it was but her destiny was maan and he met her unknowingly and they were one forever..
finally we say na all things come to and end and truly .loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
AWWW BLESS A PERFECT ENDING TO A PERFECT COUPLE
MAN WHAT A WEDDING HUH THAT WAS SIMOPLY WONDERFUL MINDBLOWING AND OUT OF THIS WORLD
THIS FF OD YOURS WAS HUST PERFECT IT HAD DRAMA ACTION COMMEDY ROMANCE AND EVERYTHING THAT YOU SEE IN A SHOW WOW THAT WAS JUST WOW MAN
MAN WHAT A WAY TO END IT ALL THEIR LOVE CULMINATING IN THEIR WEDDING AND THEIR LOVE FULFILLING ITS DESTINATION
WONDERFUL I DONT HAVE ENOUGH WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT
CHEERS FOR PM
SEE YA FOR YOUR OTHER TWO FFS NOW

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
lovely update
will miss thsi story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
awesum part
loved it
do post an epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Monica ,awesome dear ,loved it 😊
will be waiting for an epilogue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww...its magical...dreamyyy...

mujhe laga jaise mein GEET dakh rehi hu...

aur lovu tune meri wish v puri kar de...finally mujhe surrr mil gayi...yeppiii

lakin mein sad v hu...pata nehi mujhe q aisa laga jaise GEET aj fir se end ho gaye...mujhe aj pata chala mein teri ff se itne connected thi...😭...lakin har fairytale ki ek happy ending hoti hai...😊 lovu mein teri 1st FF ko kabhi nehi bhul paungi...thanks lovu 4 giving me HER BITTER FATE❤️❤️...love u...muahhh
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