SS- colors,link for my new story page-20 - Page 7

Oh yes i observed that. Probably this was the only update where there was the mention of another color. No matter how minute the mentioning was, it left its mark. You know you've correctly caught Maan and Geet's characters. Though there is a ray of hope in Geet about a new tomorrow, there is also this melancholy in her which comes in her words. And Maan.. He tries his best to replace it with hope and love. True. Just as the twinkling stars look all the more special in dark night, her vision when it is back, would be all the more blessed because there are some days in her life where she didn't see the world with her eyes. World would look all the more beautiful, wouldn' it? I sometimes wonder doesn't she have this eagerness to see her Maan again? But i personally am more interested on the day when she would experience all these colors with her eyes. The pink star, the green rose, the blue curtains, his chocolate eyes. Aww. You made me go into dreamy mode.

Wow another theory behind the orange colour. Am realy learning colors here. Nice update so maan hate orange bcse of her accident.Hey r u an artist. Thnxs 4 update waiting 4 next

You know I have love and hate relationship with orange. It sounds weird but I like the color only in the setting sun, and the sky color at that time. Remaining times, or at remaining places I feel as if the color of orange isn't justified. The glow, or the lightening.. something. Okay now I am not making any sense. Ignore me. I was not surprised by Maan's out burst. He is.. i don't know something very realistic. I can so very much connect to him. We often develop a dislike of certain things if they are involved in certain disasters. The analogy I am going to use now is absolutely insane but well.. There was this Maths lecturer, who used to scare the shit of us. Every time I came across the book i kept for his class, I used to feel a dread, almost unconsciously. 😆
Again, I am not making any sense. Sorry, these days my mind ceased to work.😆 Though I can feel every emotion with the words of your story, I am unable to express what I feel.
I have read other comments in your thread and one such comment attracted my attention.

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Orange - Wow...why nestlings but every child waits for the color for their parents to come back from work...loved it when she said that probably it saved her from death...glass is always half empty or half full. She chose to cherish her breath over her eyes...and that is all was required to give positivity to probably the most painful of the events in their life

I can't agree more. It always lies in us as in what to take out of a situation. If we were in Maan's place, we would definitely have had behaved like him since according to him, the color was connected to his beloved's accident. However, Geet's reply showed the optimism to him, and it pinched me when he broke down in her arms.
Again in this update, you reminded me of something. Sunsets. You know I love watching setting sun so much. It is something I do religiously. For some reason I always loved Setting sun more than Rising sun. One of my friends once said we aren't supposed to watch a setting sun. It indicates the end of life or something like that. But I never stopped watching it. Because the beauty in sunsets not only lies on the scenery it makes, for me it also lies on the school children who goes back to their homes happily, the flock of birds, which pass through the sky and everything..which takes us back home. Again, I am not making any sense. Ignore me.

part 7
so so so beautifully written...
loved it dear...
cont soon...

Hi Dear

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Hi Dear

I juts found this SS and have read Blue, Yellow and Green. I have to stop now as need to go for a meeting but I must say you are just awesome or rather mesmerizing

Your writing has so much depth and emotions. It has power to change one's perspecive of day to day things, to look at common mundane things differently.

We seldom think about significance of each color but they do form part of our subconcious thinking. For eg:I know my daughter glows and look beautiful when she wears yellow...for me also blue is color of vastness...I use blue vedsheets usually as they make my bed look big.

All the metaphors you have used are brilliant.

Lastly, yes I agree. There is always so much more to see. She is a sunflower and her sun will be always there for her but "Hope" not only festers desire to achieve something but also helps in overcoming what is not reachable. "Hope" in her case is desire to see again and if that doesn't happen to live with it as well...

This is addiction of beuatiful writing...

I have cut short my meeting to read your updates...and now i am finallu caught on all parts...

Dear, have you written anything else on IF...I will like to read.

Originally posted by: palindrome

I just loved the way you defined hope...when you will read further you yourself will come to know whether she got her "hope" or not..So happy reading and thanks for liking it..

ps-thank you so much for telling this blue bed sheet thing..I will try this.😊