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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Dear, have you written anything else on IF...I will like to read.

Also, I want to share this gem with all my buddies. Are you ok, if I send it next time I PM for my own FF


Yes,Its completely fine on my side..You can give this link to anyone if you find my work worthy enough to recommend someone for reading..😊
Regarding my other writings on IF,I don't know how you would react but that is completely different from "colors"..If this story depicts logic, sense and beauty,my other work is something completely illogical..😆Its a comic OS on punarvivah forum.If you watch gurmeet's new show and want to read this then i am providing the link for you-


Thanks..
and please give me link of your writings on IF.I definitely gonna read them...😊
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Superb! Todays color symbolise 'perfect balance'. I think their relationship is also 'perfectly balanced' by both of them. When one is drown in negetivity, sorrow n darkness... The other will replace it with posivity, hope n light. I feel agar 'sun set' nahi hota toh we wouldnt have given that much importance to 'sun rise'. Geets view made maan to see the better side and not to hate orange color... Just like maan has brought new hope n confidence in her to get her eyesight back.


i agree with you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Oh yes i observed that. Probably this was the only update where there was the mention of another color. No matter how minute the mentioning was, it left its mark. You know you've correctly caught Maan and Geet's characters. Though there is a ray of hope in Geet about a new tomorrow, there is also this melancholy in her which comes in her words. And Maan.. He tries his best to replace it with hope and love. True. Just as the twinkling stars look all the more special in dark night, her vision when it is back, would be all the more blessed because there are some days in her life where she didn't see the world with her eyes. World would look all the more beautiful, wouldn' it? I sometimes wonder doesn't she have this eagerness to see her Maan again? But i personally am more interested on the day when she would experience all these colors with her eyes. The pink star, the green rose, the blue curtains, his chocolate eyes. Aww. You made me go into dreamy mode.


This little black in her life will increase the beauty of every color if she would get the chance to see them again in future.😊 keep dreaming😉
Ok..i don't know how did i miss your comment on page 10..May be this time you were not first thats why..I was sooo much waiting for your comment since i have updated part 7..Finally i got to read what you think about little black in pink chapter...Now waiting eagerly for your comments regarding orange...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: farzu3008

Wow another theory behind the orange colour. Am realy learning colors here. Nice update so maan hate orange bcse of her accident.Hey r u an artist. Thnxs 4 update waiting 4 next

No I am not an artist..😆All the theory behind "orange"color is solely my blabbering..So its reliability will remain in "question"always..i am glad you are enjoying it...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: palindrome


This little black in her life will increase the beauty of every color if she would get the chance to see them again in future.😊 keep dreaming😉.


Haha as I already said, this story is already perfect in my eyes. Her vision being back or not doesn't really matter to me. She had her vision in the form of him already.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

You know I have love and hate relationship with orange. It sounds weird but I like the color only in the setting sun, and the sky color at that time. Remaining times, or at remaining places I feel as if the color of orange isn't justified. The glow, or the lightening.. something. Okay now I am not making any sense. Ignore me. I was not surprised by Maan's out burst. He is.. i don't know something very realistic. I can so very much connect to him. We often develop a dislike of certain things if they are involved in certain disasters. The analogy I am going to use now is absolutely insane but well.. There was this Maths lecturer, who used to scare the shit of us. Every time I came across the book i kept for his class, I used to feel a dread, almost unconsciously. 😆
Again, I am not making any sense. Sorry, these days my mind ceased to work.😆 Though I can feel every emotion with the words of your story, I am unable to express what I feel.
I have read other comments in your thread and one such comment attracted my attention.



I can't agree more. It always lies in us as in what to take out of a situation. If we were in Maan's place, we would definitely have had behaved like him since according to him, the color was connected to his beloved's accident. However, Geet's reply showed the optimism to him, and it pinched me when he broke down in her arms.
Again in this update, you reminded me of something. Sunsets. You know I love watching setting sun so much. It is something I do religiously. For some reason I always loved Setting sun more than Rising sun. One of my friends once said we aren't supposed to watch a setting sun. It indicates the end of life or something like that. But I never stopped watching it. Because the beauty in sunsets not only lies on the scenery it makes, for me it also lies on the school children who goes back to their homes happily, the flock of birds, which pass through the sky and everything..which takes us back home. Again, I am not making any sense. Ignore me.

First of all every place where you have said "ignore me,am not making any sense",you definitely make sense😊 Incident about your maths lecturer,you know it reminded me of what??? your own story"if it wasn't for the night"..the way geet gets shivers down her spine due to fear only by thinking about maan in that story is somewhere matching with your dread that you used to feel seeing your maths book😆 i loved each and everything you said about sunset...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another beautiful update! Dont know why... But seeing purple i expected RAINBOW. I like 'purple' a lot. She has change everything excpt rainbow... Cos there are few things in this world which cannot be experimented even in our wierdest imagination... Their natural beauty is incredible n cant offord to mess it.@@ What color symolise their relation?-- my thought was 'WHOLE RAINBOW'..., THEIR RELATION HAS EVERY COLOR... just like maan said. @ BUT she explaind it more specificly. ''PURPLE''... As she said -- RED n BLUE most distant colors together produse PURPLE... symbol of union of the two stark opposites... JUST LIKE THEM. @ I belive... When to opposite or contrast... Come together it enhance their beauty... They compliment each other... If one is lacking sumthing , the other wil makeup for it... AND TOGETHER THEY WILL BE PERFFCT. @ just like maaneet... When one is loosing hope... Other will rebuilt it with LUV, TURST N FAITH... Luvd geets CONFIDENCE... THEIR UNDERSTANDING IS AMAZING...
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Purple is a beautiful color. Isn't it? When I was a child, I always used to use this color in every sketch I made. 😆 There is something beautiful about it. Something sparkling, something attractive :)
I loved how she symbolized the color with their relationship. Splendid! I never saw that coming. Yes, they are different from each other but just as the combination of the two different colors give rise to this beautiful color, when both of them come together, they compliment each other so perfectly. Her strong aura, his optimism, his hope, her love, when they come together, they sparkle just like that color :)
As always, this update also had a gem. Her not changing the color of rainbow, even though she had changed the color of each and every thing. Some things are beautiful the way they are. Aren't they?😊
These days I feel a short of words to describe what I feel about this story you know.😕
So her surgery is on day after tomorrow, so this journey is going to come to an end?

Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Another beautiful update! Dont know why... But seeing purple i expected RAINBOW. I like 'purple' a lot. She has change everything excpt rainbow... Cos there are few things in this world which cannot be experimented even in our wierdest imagination... Their natural beauty is incredible n cant offord to mess it.@@ What color symolise their relation?-- my thought was 'WHOLE RAINBOW'..., THEIR RELATION HAS EVERY COLOR... just like maan said. @ BUT wat she explaind it more specificly. ''PURPLE''... As she said -- RED n BLUE most distant colnors together PURPLE... symbol of union of the two stark opposites... JUST LIKE THEM. @ I belive... When to opposite or contrast... Come together it enhance their beauty... They compliment each other... If one is lacking sumthing , the other wil makeup for it... AND TOGETHER THEY WILL BE PERFFCT. @ Luvd geets CONFIDENCE... THEIR UNDERSTANDING IS AMAZING...


Your each comment always say some line\lines which touch my heart straight way..You give beautiful comments..👏

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