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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved ur ff it's awesome...
Read all parts... Amazing writing:...
Eagarly waiting
Contionue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
maanu b kya kiya
hmm i think he did nothing
aiwe hi mere maanu ko blame krte rhte hai😆😆😆
jo b hai m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
updating...
anyone wants???
but...but...but... will update it after coming from job tomo after noon... ok...
till then wait for me like good readers...hehehe...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...dats so cruel of u..thought u gonna update 2day, but kal bhi chalega chalo😃...u know what I am doing now...arre yaar...waiting, waiting and waiting...aur kya😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago


Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved the update dear
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahhaahaa mene socha upadate kar diya hai ...
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Posted: 12 years ago



Sorry for being late….. actually house is painting so got busy in cleaning , really very tired, I was held up in dusting of house from 2:30pm till 7 pm….. pls forgive me…… and I won't be able to give next part before Tuesday…… have exam in Sunday so have to prepare for that and have other works also…. Will try to type next part in Monday….. so will be able in Tuesday or in Wednesday….. pls forgive me for this also……

And thanks a lot for likes and comments……. Love ya……

Part-38

"see geet, he is not having milk" he complained to geet about Vedanta….. ved peeped behind geet and looked at maan , pouting lips and looked down…..

"maan, he is like this…. Always throw tantrums" geet replied him back… dadi had tears seeing the scene…. It was like a complete family….. she was praying to god that everything will fine soon between maan and geet…..

Geet held vedanta's hand and pulled him in front of her…..

"ved, what is going on? Why are you not having milk" she asked sternly….. oops maan shocked to see her stern expressions…. He never saw her so stern like him……

"milk nahi peena" he told again…. Poor baby… no one is listening him….. geet took him in her arms and asked why?

"you know mama very well that I don't like milk…." He complained again…

Maan sat on couch holding the glass of milk….. she also went behind maan and sat beside him taking ved in her lap….

"hmm" then she said something in his ear and his face brighten with happiness….

"now tell me, will you drink milk or not?" geet asked again… she took glass from maan…..

"yes mama" he happily took glass and drank the whole glass in one go….. everyone was shocked seeing the sight…..

"geet, what did you told him" maan asked shocked and everyone also asked what did she told him…..

"mai kyo batau…. It's a secret… hai na vedu??" she asked to him….. he nodded and kissed her cheek…. Yes it's a secret…….

"no Vedanta, it's cheating…. You have to tell us what your mama told you…. Now spit out fast…. Dada is waiting" maan tried to buttering him…… Vedanta cunningly smiled and shook his head in no…. maan starts ticking him while he was sitting in geet's lap…..

Vedanta starts laughing, because of his hand's movement, geet also starts laughing feeling tickled, maan stopped on his track and looked at the mesmerized sight…. She was looking like a child whose face became red due to so much laugh…..he lost himself in her childish laugh, so cute she was looking with red nose….. vedanta ran away , sit beside dadi…..

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After taking a bath geet placed maan's clothes and his needed things and went away in kitchen for helping nakul…. Though she knows limited things in cooking but she is learning well from nakul & other chefs… maan came in his room and found his clothes on it's place & felt happy , she choose a grey check shirt with a combination of black & white and black jeans for today… after all it's Sunday….

No working clothes today…. He loved her choice of clothes……

After some time when geet entered in her room for calling maan for brunch….. she found him struggling in wiping his hairs…. His hands were paining but still he was trying….. though his whole palm was not bandaged but still wounds were there, , and that too deep wounds…..

He doesn't notice her and engrossed in his won world……. Suddenly he flinch in pain, his wound hurt and blood oozed out from the palm…..geet ran towards him and held his hand in hers & starts blowing on it…. His hand brushed with door while coming out from washroom but he didn't notice that that blood was oozing out, seeing the blood again, she felt pang in her heart again, , , she couldn't see him in this state….. She felt her eyes moistened and she starts scolding him….

"maan, aap bhi na… why didn't you call me? See kitna khoon aa raha hai," she scold him…..

"geet, it's nothing…. Dekho jayada nahi hai…. Halka sa hi cut hai…" he tried to defend himself…

"you are calling it a small cut, how deep it is…. Let me clean the wound…" she overpowered on him…

"par geet…. It…." But he stopped in mid by her….

"don't talk…. Let me do my work…. I don't want any disturbance…. " she said pointing a finger towards him and starts cleaning the wound with cotton & Savlon… he again flinch in pain…. A tear fell down on his hand from her eye and he felt his heart stabbed by something……

"geet, why are you crying now….? Did I say something? Did I hurt you again?" he was feeling like because of him she is crying again….there is a insecurity inside him that is he can't make her happy… every time he is responsible for her tears,,,,,

"shhh…. I told you na don't talk…. Yes you hurt me again but not by words, by these wounds…. What's the need of removing your anger on yourself…. Everytime you punish yourself, tell me…" she asked from him controlling her tears…..

He held her face by her chin with his fingers, , "sshh geet, don't cry.. I am sorry for doing this….i know I am stupid that's why I did these acts every time and hurt you again with my acts…. Please sorry….. I promise…. I won't do anything like this in future…." He said all in one go looking in her deep almond brown eyes which were wet due to him….

"promise" she asked forwarding her hand in front of him….

"promise" he placed his hand in hers and said with a smile…..

"now let me wipe you hairs" she snatched the towel from him and starts wiping his head, he being like a obedient child said nothing and enjoyed her care for him….. it was a great feeling for both of them….


A new beginning of their relation….. they have to go a long way for understanding each other, their life style, their likes & dislikes, taste, interest, their love towards each other, care, they have to know slowly-2 that what type of feeling they are carrying for each other, what they expects from each other……


it's like a new way for them and they have to cross it by together, holding each other hands….. by giving support to each other, without support of their partner, they can't cross this way, and it was a start of their exam…. It was like a exam of them and they have to pass out otherwise their relation will call failure…

They can clearly listen each other heartbeats, they are so close to each other but still so far away by their heart, by their soul….. maan closed his eyes feeling her aroma in air, her fragrance she carried wherever she went, , it was kind a different feeling for him, he never felt like this….


A new kind of sensation in body, that is the different he felt between her & sameera….. geet is so pure & serene…..she carried cuteness, sweetness, mercy, love, care, and so many things he doesn't know now but he knows slowly-2 he will get to know everything about her…..

"maan….. " she called him but he was not giving any response to her because he was lost in his thoughts thinking about her…… "maan" she called again….. this time she tapped his shoulder and he jerked away feeling her touch on his bare shoulder…..


"huh! What happen geet?" he asked coming out of his thoughts….

"where were you lost? I was calling you" she asked to him looking at his face…..

"wo nothing…. I was thinking something…. Why were you calling me?" he asked looking up at her face….

"wo, your hairs are dried….come fast downstairs, everyone is waiting for you for brunch" she told him while placing the towel on it's place…. He nodded and took the shirt for wearing…. But again having difficulty in buttoning the buttons but again said nothing to geet…. He thought this is a little thing, at least he can do this without bothering her, already she have done so many things for him….. but for his shock he felt suddenly her fingers on his shirt… she is buttoning his shirt…. She knew that he will feel pain….. after doing this….

"thanks geet" she smiled and nodded and went away smiling at her thoughts….. she felt butterflies in her stomach when she was standing so close to him…. like her something in her stomach going up & down and her skin is tickling…. Somehow she controlled her because she doesn't want to make it obvious in front of him……

Everyone was having brunch , laughing, teasing, it was like a great moment for dadi….. it was 3 odd months, this house haunted her, no happiness, only pain & sorrow in every corner of this mansion…. But today, it was like all the old happiness came back at their gate….. she wants to treasure it more & more….she felt contended….. she has tears in her eyes but wiped them silently not to disturbing anyone because everyone is very happy today….. Vedanta was teased by annie& ash while rey & maan were talking something about business , remained geet & dadi… they are happy like this with each other feeling happy seeing everyone happy…. Just then they heard a voice…

"hello everyone" arjun said..

Geet happily left her food in mid and ran towards him…. "hey arjun, hows you?" and hugged him….. annie's face also glowed with happiness seeing arjun, ,

"ye sawaal mujhe tujhe karna chahiye… kaisi hai tu? Ab teri tabiyat theek hai na?" he asked cupping her face…..

"I am perfectly fine…. Look at me" she turned left & right showing herself to him….

"tu apne khyaal kyo nahi rakhti?" he asked in worry

"mera khyaal rakhne ke liye tum ho na" and gave a cheeky smile and he melt at her smile….

"arjun uncle…" Vedanta also called him….

"hey champ…" and took him in his arms… placed a kiss on his cheek while demand a kiss for himself also… ved happily kissed him back…

Arjun went towards dadi and took blessing from him…. just then he looked towards maan…..

"hello Mr. khurana" by forwarding his hand to him…..

"hello Mr. Rathore, How are you?" while shaking hands…

"I am fine mr. khurana, what about you?" arjun asked to him back…

"same here…. "maan replied still putting stern expressions on his face….. "call me maan" maan told him, he doesn't want to be professional with geet's friends….. he wants to know her and being formal, he can't do anything, he has to be friendly with her & her friends too…..

"ohkay….. maan, then you have to call me with my name.." arjun smiled at maan…..

"sure arjun, why not…. Come and join us…" maan invite him….. everyone felt overjoyed seeing little bit change in maan's behavior…… and dadi felt over-joyed….first maan realized his mistake & begged sorry also, second maan & geet stepped in their relationship, third now he is trying to be friendly a little bit everyone not like old maan who was always in serious mode…..

"sure", arjun replied…. Geet dragged him holding his arm and serve him, she whispered with happy expressiona in his ear that she made this food…… arjun shocked and whispered back that then I am not going to eat this….. geet pouted cutely just then maan spoke…..

"You & geet seems good friends?" maan asked


Precap

I don't know…..




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Posted: 12 years ago
update maneet closeness increasing and love vedantt scene and arjun geet scene and i think maan is jealous



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Posted: 12 years ago
the start is t00 g00d f0r m0ving f0rward in their realati0n n0w just h0pe tat n0thing g0es wr0ng

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