MG SS: A Path To Reach You..!! Part 13: Pg 141 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful. maan babu tho gaye kaam se... PM plz
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Originally posted by: ..Adeena..

Wahii.. 🤗 Really nice part.. love it.. Khoya khoya sa maan.. 😆 <33
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updating nw, jus replying 2 d last few comments😊
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Originally posted by: -Misha-

Lovely update Wahi👏 beautifully written⭐️


awww Maan is already in love...sab jagah Geet dikhti hai😳 m eager to know Geet's reaction & her past😳

update soon,love ya❤️


thanks Mish 🤗
Geet's past will b revealed soon, promise
next update coming up, in a few mins

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read at one go and loved it . can u plz pm me , added u as buddy .


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Posted: 12 years ago

I want to dedicate this update to a few very close friends. And those special people are none other than the members of the F4L Group.

Tani Partner (..tanya..)

The Working Woman Mish (-Misha-)

The docs Poo (mandymore) & Shammy (Xx-Shama-xX)

My Busy Bumbo Jyo (Jyo_Ksg)

The Undergraduate Kesha (mjht_ArVi4ever)

And...

A special thanks 2 Rush (Gcs-girl) for spotting a mistake n letting me know, thanks darling..!!


Part 3:

It has been a month since then Raj and Priya's wedding, after that meeting at school from a distance Maan used to make excuses to drop Ahana school, to meet this Angel.

Some days he got lucky and some days luck was not in his favour as either, as an elderly women and/or another woman would come to drop that sweet little girl whom he had seen his Angel with.

Yes, his Angel. Maan Singh Khurana had accepted the fact that this girl is different from other girls and that she has some sort of place in his heart.

In the last month Maan has been imagining his Angel everywhere, in his bedroom, in the shower, at Khurana Constructions, in his study room at home, in his personal gym at home, in his cabin. Basically in every place where Maan spends a lot of his time.

Then another thought also clouded his mind, was she single, was she married, was she a mother, what relation she shares with that little girl.

Maan was a felt a tinge of uneasiness thinking that she may belong to someone else.

Nothing was impossible for Mr Maan Singh Khurana, one day at school Maan noticed that his Angel and the younger woman (Payal) had come to drop off the little girl.

After dropping Simi off at her class room, Payal and Geet bumped into Mrs Bhatia.

Mrs Bhatia: wow, Payal you both together here.

Payal: haan, we both have to go shopping so thought we'll drop Simi off first and then go.

Mrs Bhatia: oh okay

They had a short conversation about Gayatri's health and how she was doing, and then talked about things.

Whilst this conversation was going on, Maan stood at a slight distance away from them pretending to be engrossed with his phone when in fact he was trying very hard to listen to what exactly the ladies were saying.

Maan (self talk): ladies talk so much, get to the point quickly please

As if Geet had heard him saying this and the next thing you knew was Geet saying to Payal:

Geet: Bhabhi chale, we're getting late

Payal: haan, okay Mrs Bhatia.

Maan heart was doing bhangra.. she was not married as he did not see any marital signs on her and neither has a child.. he started to make his way out of the school.

Maan: this means that little girl is her niece, she called that woman Bhabhi, and as far as I heard her Bhabhi is called Payal. Oh god if only Angel's name was mentioned. I really want to know her name, but till I don't know it, I will call her Angel.

Yeah so basically in this last month, he had come to the following consequences, his Angel was not married, and was just hoping that she has no-one special in her life.

He knew that he has some special feeling towards her, but what name does he give to this feeling.

Maan (talking to self): Maan the more you think you will damage more brain cells, there's only one person that can help you now.. Raj.

Precap: What you read in the prologue, but may be left on a cliff hanger.

Please like and comment. 😊


Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg m the 1st one to comment huraahhh yippeee😆
wahi di its awesome
oye hoye chori chupke se dekhna ... wow so geet is maan's angel
hahaha maan doesnt know how much ladies talk 😆
n really lovely part

thnks 4 dedicating this part to us F4Lifeians 🤗
love u di🤗
Edited by mjht_ArVi4ever - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjht_ArVi4ever

wahi di its awesome

oye hoye chori chupke se dekhna ... wow so geet is maan's angel
hahaha maan doesnt know how much ladies talk 😆
n really lovely part

thnks 4 dedicating this part to us F4Lifeians 🤗
love u di🤗


thanks kesha 🤗
love u too ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww so lovely & awesome update wahii 🤗
i love they way Maan was listening to their conversation 😳😆
awesome !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..Superb Update Wahee!!
Loved it Alot...
Aww My Maan become Love Sick Puppy..LOL
Eagerly Waiting For More
Continue Super Soon
Thank U For PM
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