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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

sorry for the late comments sweets

i am reading the updates frm my cell but cant comment due to net problem in my pc...


superb update dear
wanna kill rahul...

yeh sare rahul ek jaise hote hai cheap 😡



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Posted: 12 years ago
😃 Updating 😃
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Part 12

"pinky bolna konsa wala suit pahnu " geet asked pinkey who was busy in munching. " red wala ya blue wala.. " geet took out two suits then put back .. nahi..ye green wala achha hai ...hai na pinky ?? '.


"h.h.. haaa geet this one is good ' somehow pinky managed to reply as she could not take her eyes off from her halwa...


"pinky.. thik se bata na..." geet sat on bed irritated..


"aree geet .tu kuch bhi pahan ..sab me pyaari lagegi "



geet smiled... thik hai.. then I ll wear this green one.. " saying she rushed to washroom



Within 30 min she was all ready to go. She was looking so beautiful ' little blushing with thought of him.



"geet .. are you blushing ? .. hayeee what would you do when he will be there.. haaa "


"shut up pinky.. chal byee.. aur haa bauji ko bata dena I ll be late " saying she left



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Rahul and maan with others were hell busy in meeting. Rahul eyes was moving again n again to maan cell and his mind toward geet. He looked his watch.. " till now geet will have reached there..


" Mr. Rahul ..i thought you came here for meeting ' " maan glared him


"ohh yes.. m sory mr. maan.. wo I was lost somewhere... can we finish this meeting quite before as I have to rush somewhere .. its urgent.. "


"No.." and maan resumed his work



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Geet reached on place rahul had given. She was searching around when found a building.. it was a big hotel. She went inside.. she was crossing parking area when two random girl's talks fell on her ears..


" aree you know .. maan is here ..in hoshiyaarpur


" who maan.. u mean that Maan singh khuraana ?? "


"haa yaar.. ek hi to maan hai .. hayee so handsome and rich " she winked


" haa yaar .. rich to hai and girl killer bhi ..." she laughed


"girl killer.. matlab ??


" aree tu bhi na kuch nahi samjhti .. who spends every night with new girl '" she winked

"really ?? wo kya asa hai ??


" you dont know him yaar.. I know him very well ' you know who is maan.. number one flirt and cheapest man who play with girls every night"


*Slap*


a sound echoed in whole area...


"How dare you ' How dare you to say that ... " geet fumed ' her face was been red in anger.


"ek shabad nahi ... samjhi tum... ek shabd aur bola... to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga .. " geet pointed her finger to them..



Both girls shocked with this sudden outburst of a strange girl.. both girl were looking geet wide eyes. Then one yelled .. " heyyy who are you to slap me haa.. and was to push geet when second girl stopped her...



" sun jaane de .." she whispered.. and they left glaring geet



geet was panting hard.. her heartbeat was high. She was shocked with her own behavior but how was possible in this earth she would listen against her maan.. "no..i just cant" she run to lift '


In lift she was trying to calm her down. " I never raised hand to anyone, but why today ?? but how dare that girl '" thinking her body got stiffed ' " I know my maan.. he can never play with any girl .. I know he never touched any girl .. he will never .. I know .. I trust you maan" she closed her eyes and prayed babaji for forgiveness what she did.. she was not guilt but she knew it was wrong to raise her hand... lift stop sound broke her thought and she went out..



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Geet was sitting in lounge area. She was very nervous. She was looking passing people like alien. Many times she thought to call maan or rahul but she remembered Rahul's word that they were busy in meeting and her call disturbed them. Rahul told her , he will call her when they will be free so she was waiting for his call.



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It went late evening. She was still sitting at same place. She looked her cell when it rang. It was of pinky. pinkey asked when she is coming back as mohindar is worrying. Geet told she still dint meet maan. He is in meeting and it will take some more time.. " tu bauji ko samjha lena pinky "


" ok thik hai mai bol dungi .. per tu jaldi wapas aa jana " saying pinky cut.


"ab mai kya karu babaji " geet thought. " rahul dint call me nor maan.. now should I ask to someone ? Hmm yahi thik rahega' she went to reception and ask about maan singh khurana but no one had any information .. she confused... " dekhiye maan had called me here " she tried to make them understand but no gain.. she decided to leave...


She was going to lift when someone called her from behind. She turned and saw a man was calling her ' ' are you miss geet handa ?'


she nodded.. " ji wo maan singh khurana has called you in conference room.. " he gave her way of room. Geet nodded and went to there '


" hello... Rahul sir.. ji .. kaam ho gaya hai .. I have sent her in room " that man called rahul and left...



***************



Maan finished meeting.. rahul excused and rushed to hotel. Maan was going to sit in car when his phone rang. He picked


"Geet kaha hai maan ' where is geet damn it !! " adi's yelled ' " ,maan bolo where is geet ???


maan was stunned as what adi asking " geet??" he whispered


" haan geet ' I dint know tum iss hadd tak gir jaaoge maan "


"ADI... shut up.. aur tum kya bole jaa rahe ho.. I dont know where is she... "


"maan you called her for interview... and she is not back yet damn it !! where is she ?? "


maan now started worrying.. ' adi listen to me .. I really dont know where is she ' haa maine usse interview time diya tha but after that I dint talk her ' I dint give her any address even to meet me .. you know adi I was in meeting since noon..


adi knew maan was in meeting.. he calm down trying to think with cool mind.. maan asked how did he know about geet missing.. he told pinky called him and told as mohindar was worrying and maan & rahul was not picking phone...



(After talking with geet pinky told everything to mohindar... mohindar was now worried as it was getting dark. He called to rahul but rahul intentionally dint pick. Then he called adi as mohindar knew adi works for maan. And then adi came to know all about)



" thik hai maan I try to find her .. but agar isme tumhara zara sa bhi plan hua na maan..then I will not leave you.. yaad rakhna " he cut


maan panicked.. he pushed his hair worrying where is she .. he was hating this feeling but could not stop.. her missing and she might be hurt " NO...mai asa nahi hone dunga... kabhi nahi " he looked his phone for calling detective when his eyes caught geet number in missed calls. He shocked to see geet had called him twice.. he instantly redialed her but phone was switched off... now he became more aghast... and his mind remembered Rahul word as adi told him... " Rahul had called geet ' "


Rahul ' I will not leave you Bast***" maan called rahul ' but his phone was also switched off... maan called his detective and ordered to follow rahul.. and after few minutes maan had all information where is he...


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Geet was going to enter in room when guard told her that bag & phone are not allowed inside room. Geet asked why then he told its Maan's order.. she kept her things in a locker and went inside..'' maan ?" she stepped and then heard a sound.. the door had been locked...




Precap : A guess for u all ' who will reach her first
Maan Or Adi Or Rahul

guess - guess


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee mein kya karu mein fir se first yippeee.sooo interesting update lovuuu...ye rahul toh bhut bada kamina nikla😡...uska etna bada himmat usne geet ko hotel pe bula liya😡...rahul ke bacche chodunge nehi humhari maan.😉 haila humhari yea geet ki maan...ooo am w8ing for that scene dhisum dhisum...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...maybe maan wll reach first i hope...waiting for next updateee meri sharmili
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tu sudhhar ja ek to rahul aatank machaye hue hai upar se Maan ad raha hai apni feelings ko accept karne se koi baat nahi kab tak bhagega...
Awsome Update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Moona56

awesome update...maybe maan wll reach first i hope...waiting for next updateee meri sharmili



😛 😛 😛



Kaisa hai mera sharmila pan 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Tu sudhhar ja ek to rahul aatank machaye hue hai upar se Maan ad raha hai apni feelings ko accept karne se koi baat nahi kab tak bhagega...
Awsome Update :)



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kisko sudharne boli Ranimaa... mujhe ya maan ko 😛


Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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wow lovely update dear.. geet is slapping tat girl, yes geet is so innocent and navie, but wen it cums to my maan she will show her sherni avatar.. now rahul is trapping geet, my maan will cum i know, and rahul be ready to face my sher...i love te update so much dear
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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