MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

Ooowww so he dint lost his V yet 😆 nahi to har jgha casanova Maan k flings k sath physical dekh dekh k wonder mereko dount hi rehta hai MSK pe LoLz but yeh bach gaya

oOops she loves him from far, she dont know him yet he is facinated to him through media and other ways?? Goddd i wonder hum girls ko kya ho jaata hi 😆

frst part was owsume love it
Maan being a casanova never went with his limits with girls still gives his own way of flirt, may b still searching for rt one, HIS Geet *winkies*

i love the concept morw now

waiting for further updates :D



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

awesome

lovely cs
loved the update
continue soon dear



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Originally posted by: 26_chaitra

wow!!!

Awsm concept😊
amazing update😊
thankz for the pm😊
continue soonn... eagerly waiting for the next update



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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Lovely update. Eagerly waiting for the next update



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Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Monika 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...now i know why you wanted the pics...they go really well with the update...super CS...part 1 was good intro of both Maan and Geet...casanova Maan and bubbly Geet who is in love with him...waiting to see how they meet...plz continue...TC 😊



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Originally posted by: geet.lover



tere khwabo me kon aata hai livuu😆



meri khwabo mein kon aate hai ye tu acchi tarase janti h lovu😉...aur mein kisko imagine karke ff padhti ye v janti h😉...hayeee meri gurti/maaneet



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jada batte matt kar fatafat update de lovuuu
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Hiii Thank You soo Much For All Comments & Likes...
I tried to reply to all specially but i had least time so could not ... please forgive me for that 😭😭



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Part 2

Next Morning

Maan was doing his morning exercise. No matter how long he awoke at night, it was his routine to wake up early morning and do his Tai- Chai. He was sweating badly . His every move might be so tough and sturdy, for any normal man. But for him it was nothing then moving a stick. His body was like iron but shining and well polished. He was busy when he got a call. His cell rang. He took it. It was from his one client. Maan talked him while walking toward his room, wiping his sweat by towel. he cut call and called nakul, his head servant.

"nakul, pack my bag. I have to leave in a hour" saying he went to washroom for getting ready. Nakul packed his bag and kept it in a big hall of mansion, downstairs.

"nakul .. Maan kahi jaa rahe hai kya" dadi asked casually. It was her routine to know things after it happened. She knew maan nature. No doubt, he was responsible but on his own rules. He never told dadi or anyone about his schedules but always been aware, whom should know and what and how.

Maan came down and greeted dadi. They sat on dinning table and had their breakfast. Dadi knew he would tell her so she dint proceed conversation about his going. They had food in silence and then maan told her he was going to HP for a week. And left. Dadi nodded and smiled sadly. She knew his grand son very well. She knew his life. How successful he was in business. And how he used to spend nights in clubs and pubs, finding something , which was missed in his heart. It was peace, it was happiness, a real happiness which he tried to find among crowd but he dint know .. no one could find peace in crowd but it stays with your loved one, whom you love most and who loves you beyond most. She wished her babaji to give her maan a chance to live, to give his all happiness of life.

Maan drived his car toward HP. He had not taken driver as he liked driving. It would take almost full day to reach there to the main site, where he had to build a hotel. He was enjoying his driving when his cell rang.

"hello"

"hello maan ..where are you " sameera asked who thought herself of his girlfriend but for maan ..she was only a girl. Nothing else.

"why " he said Stern

"i want to meet you maan..m missing you badly ..please come na... m alone at home as mom dad has gone out of city

so... what I do.. I cant come sam... m busy "and he cut throwing cell to passenger seat. He smirked thinking she would come here for sure... as he knew girls nature... it was his way to handle his popularity

At HP


Geet was in her kitchen preparing lunch and humming. It was her habit of humming all the time during working . She loved songs and poetry. She was busy when pinky came munching of course.

"oye geet .. what are you doing "

"m dancing pinky..look " geet said smiling

"geet ..mera mazak uraa rahi hai ..jaa I wont talk to you " she puffed her face

"oyllee my pinku baby .. gussa ho gayi .. achha chal mai thujhe halwa khilaati hu ..bol khayegi

"haa..haa geet kaha hai " pinky jumped happily

"market me " geet told laughing

"Geettt... you are very bad "

"aree nahi..sach me ..chal market chalte hai ...shopping bhi karenge aur teri halwa bhi khilaaungi ..thik hai " geet said

"thik hai " pinky said grinning ...and they both left to market telling mohindar.

They were in market when they met adi. Adi was doing some shopping there when pinky saw him and called. Pinky had crush over him. "heyyy adi " pinky shouted from far .. geet turned to her and saw adi s embarrassed face .. " oyee pinky ..itna jor se kyu bula rahi hai..look all are looking here only " geet whispered to her ear.. pinky bit her lips 'ohh sorry geet ..bhul gayi thi "

Adi went to them and greeted .. hi pinky ..hi geet

geet nodded as she was not very comfortable with any boy. Pinky was grinning looking him...

"adi..why are you here.. doing shopping ???

"haa..wo .. my friend is coming today so I needed something ' tum log yaha kaise ??

"aree hum to yahi hote hai humesha..hai na geet .. hume to bas mauka chahiye " pinky blabbered. Geet smiled only.

Okk geet.. pinky .. I have some work.. byee

"byee" pinky said with dreamy expression... geet looked her and rolled her eyes.. "pinky chal yaha se..." she had to literally drag her from there.. At evening geet had to go next town for some work. So she left.

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It was little dark when geet was returning to home. She was looking for any vehicle but could not find as it was small town where at night no vehicle could be found. She was walking fast cursing herself why she did late.. " stupid jalli kahi ki..kitna der kar di..ab mai kaise ghar jaaungi haa.. " she was cursing and looking around for any vehicle. Also she was fearing of dark and more of all .. she was afraid of any goon. What if some body come and try to misbehave with her .. " baabji ..ab mai kya karu.." she did fast her step.. in hurry she did not notice she was walking on middle of road. Sudden she jerked with a loud horn sound .. " oyeee larki... marne ka irada hai kya " someone shouted '.


Precap : "Please dont come close to me.. " Geet Begged Crying ...



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Hope You All Will Like This ----

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All silent readers kindly i request you.. please at least do like if you read this FF .. it will encourage me more to write fast ...



@ Ash1991 .. Abodh means Innocent , naive, Sinless dear 😊


Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago

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