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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update
lovd kitchen scene n office scene
maan lost hs control bt feeling guilty nw
waitng to c jealous maan
cnt sn
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ab maneet ko milava do yaar plzzz
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wow nyc part dii maan is loosing himself in the desire of having geet waiting foe next ...for reading maan getting jealous 😊
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wooowww RP...update was JHAKKAs...:):)
KItchen SCENe was woowww,,...the way maan was her face...n hw he controlled his wild desire hehe...but fir b ...sirf touch karke feel krta reh gya...bith r drawing in thie new feeling ..:):)..i was imaging Maan's S=mile whn see saw geet face which is filled with flour...;)
n aftr that OFFICE ROMANCE was tooo gud...oh Man their KISS was so=imply wooowww...side se BEHNE DE BEHNE DE song b chalta toh maza aa jata...:):)
waiitng for next..:)
update soon..:)
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amazing update...
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idiot maan when will he understand that this is love
hmm waiting for veer to come 😉
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RECAP

Maan who was shocked with events got angry on himself for being so weak in front of her and he turned opposite to her messing his hairs from his right hand.Geet was totally shocked as she closed her horrified mouth from her palm and saw downwards with guilt.Maan came back to his cabin totally frustrated.He entered his washroom and saw the mirror where his lips were smeared by the lipstick and his cheek was smeared with Geet's sindhoor.Maan messed his hairs even more messier and closed his eyes to calm him.

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PART 07





Next morning Geet got up and prepared for breakfast early and went early for her early morning class informing Dadimaa.Maan who got up late started searching Geet in whole house restlessly.Dadimaa saw his restlessness and said,"Beta'woh toh kab ka college ke liye nikal gayi'.!!!"Maan was disappointed when he heard that and cribbed,"Mujhe uthaaya bhi nahin'.!!!!"Dadimaa asked,"Lekin beta'.aap Q unhe dhoond rahe hai aur aap aaj jadli Q uthna chaahthe the???"Maan said,"Dadimaa'aaj Veer aa raha hai flight se'.aur usne kaha bhi tha ki usse pick up karne airport par aajaaye'.lekin'.!!!!Chal theek hai mein abhi chalta hoon'..!!!!!"Maan came back to his room and glanced his foot of bed where his dress,wallet,tie and some important files were set up ready and Maan smiled seeing the arrangement and he knew that it was his wify's work.Maan was abt to take the towel which was placed when he saw a note fell from his towel addressed from Geet to him.









Maan sir(The word made him weird and felt a tinge of disappointment),

Sir,am sorry that i cant hand over all these things from my hands'.and also am scared that what will be your reaction'so dont wanted make u late for the morning's meeting so i set up all this'if u feel bad then do let me know i wont bother u further..but this time'.do wear this if u like or not..it is ur wish..and i hope u like the color'am sorry for touching ur personal things but u have to go to the office in hurry today as u r having meeting at 10 AM'''hope ur meeting goes well.

Geet





Maan was so restless reading the note as she was addressing him as her boss'and feeling him as boss here too'.he loved the dedication in her work'always perfect'Maan got ready and went to pick up Veer in airport and both met and hugged each other.



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Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat-Maan's best and childhood friend'..



They talked abt pleasantries and Veer asked Maan abt their marriage,"Kya kehti hai tumhaari exchanged biwi????"Maan was shocked to know that piece of information from him while Veer smirked and said,"Maan..tu bhool raha hai ki mein ek army officer hoon'.!!!!"Maan smiled at him and nodded dismissively and said,"Chal'.!!!!"Veer kept his hand on Maan's shoulder and went with him while driver loaded his luggage inside the car carraige.The car was abt to go towards the KM when he got an important call from KC so Maan has to turn the car towards KC.Maan said,"Veer'will u wait for two hours..i have an important meeting yaar in the office'.!!!!"Veer said nodding,"No problem'.!!!!"Maan and Veer went to KC and Maan made Veer to sit in his cabin and ran to conference hall immediately.Maan got busy with the meeting while Geet who was working in her cabin saw Maan entering the conference hall.












After sometime she went to Maan's cabin without knocking to take some files then only she noticed Veer sitting reading some magazine and lifted to see the girl standing giving a questioning look to him.Veer saw her tip to toe and was impressed by her beauty and asked smiling,"Hey..gorgeous..may i know ur good name????"Geet felt odd as she stared him continuously that's becoz he was smiling that's becoz he called her gorgeous'.Geet thot,"Do i look beautiful to him that he's calling me gorgeous???"Veer wasnt a silent man and said stretching his hand,"Hi'am Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat'.and u????"Geet felt uncomfortable first time seeing his stretched hand and she hesitatingly gave her hand and said,"Geet Singhania'.!!!!"













Veer asked,"Aap hi haina'.Maan ki badli hiyi patni?????"Geet was shocked and saw him suspiciously and asked immediately,"Aapko kaise pata chala????"Veer said smiling,"Relax gorgeous'mein Maan ka friend hoon'..an army officer'aaj se chutti par hoon to socha mein apne dost ke saath samay bitaa sakoon'.i hope u dont mind gorgeous..mein aapke pati ko thodi din apne saath rakhhonga'.!!!!"Geet smiled sweetly and asked innocently,"Aap'.army se hai'pata hai mujhe bhi army join karne ka ichcha thi'.kitna achcha hota haina'ki ek jawaan apne desh ko raksha karta hai aur uski ye farz nibhaate nibhaate'desh ke liye shahid hona ek alag baat hai'.aap sach mein army se hai???"Veer saw her innocence which enhanced her beauty and he smiled at her innocence.Veer wanted to hug her for one time and immediately hugged her instantly.Geet was shocked with his sudden hug but she felt a friendly warmth and she relaxed completely.












Veer was so happy seeing Geet's innocence and knew that she only can change Maan from arrogant to smiling person.Then Veer saw Maan coming and decided to make him jealous becoz he knew that in his corner of his heart Maan had some feeling which had become the Venomous Desire and coming in front of Geet in wrong way.When Maan was abt to enter then he heard Veer flirting with someone and saw the person intently.When he saw the person's face then his blood boiled and he eyed Veer with anger.Veer said some jokes for which Geet started to laugh.Her giggle made Maan peace and calm'..Maan saw her intently and admired her cute giggle'.but when he heard a male voice laughing in between then he came from the trance.












Maan once again was so jealous seeing them both laughing and giggling and stood with anger expression and said angrily,"Enough'.!!!"Geet was alarmed and saw Maan scared and said, meekly understanding his anger,"Sorry sir'.!!!!"And she went from there immediately but her shoulder brushed his shoulder softly for he felt that he has been over drugged and felt to pounce on her and eat her alive that he closed his eyes and his anger jealousy..everything vanished into thin air.Maan opened his eyes after a minute which made him ages and was so shocked for himself that he got carried away with slight brush of her soft body.Geet too felt strange for a second as if she's floating in the air and no one is there to catch her.Geet felt a slight restlessness but she composed herself and went from there but one person noticed their changed expressions and he was Rajveer and thought to bring them closer.












Veer said,"Yaar'.kyun na mein us ladki se shaadi karllon'i like her yaar..meri type ki hai aur mujhse mingle bhi huyi'kaun hai woh ladki inke maa baap se milna padega humaari shaadi pakki karne ke liye'..!!!!!"Veer saw Maan's expression from the corner of eye which were clearly showing the jealousy expression and smiled inside his mind while continued speaking but Maan answered rudely,"Nahin inki pati iske liye oppurtunity nahin dega'.!!!"Veer was shocked'am mean acted like shock and asked,"Pati'.kya iski shaadi ho gayi hai'.haay mer dil pehli baar kissi se pyaar kiya aur usne mera dil tod diya''koi baat nahin'Maan bataavo kya iski pati isse achche se dekhbaal karta hai kya????"Now Maan was taken aback as he dint know what to say..but he cant oie to his best friend too do he said the truth,"Nahin'..!!!!"Veer asked innocently,"Kyun?????"Maan answered,"Ab mujhe kya pata'!!!!"He acted like innocent but Veer said,"Lekin tujhe kaise pata ki woh shadi shudha hai aur woh khush nahin hai'.!!!!"Maan said without thinking,"Meine uski aankhon mein dekha''!!!!!!"Veer said simply first,"Uski aankhon mein dekha'..!!!!"And he widened his eyes and turned and asked,"Oye'.tu kab se ladkiyon ko itna taadne laga????"













Now Maan was caught off guard and he stammered,"Woh'.ye'woh'.ye'..!!!!!!"Veer said immediately enjoying his stammer,"Rehne de'tu humesha isme zero hai pata nahin tera kya hoga tumhaare biwi ka'tumhe samjhegi toh zindagi ki meherbaani hai nahin toh pata nahin us lakdi ka kya hoga'.!!!"Maan asked knotting his eye-brows,"Matlab'.!!!"Veer said immediately seeing his angry expression,"Tu nahin samjhega yaar'par is ladki par concentrate kar'.kaise hai inke gharwaale'.!!!"Maan asked,"Matlab'.!!!!"Veer said,"Yaar'mujhe isse shaadi karni hai aur waise bhi tu toh keh raha hai ki yeh khush nahin hai pehli waali shaadi se toh meine socha usse divorce dilwaakar mein shaadi karoon'.aur yaar..mujhe yakeen hai ki mein isse zindagi bhar khush rakhoonga'.!!!!"Maan got frustrated and said,"Woh ladki nahin maanegi iske liye'.!!!!"Veer said immediately,"Samay sabko badal deta hai Maan..ab woh is rishtey se khush nahin hai toh usse us rishte se azaadi lene ka poora haq hai aur kaanoon bhi iski madat karegi'.!!!!"Maan was now insecure,"Nahin'..woh aisa nahin hai woh aisa kabhi nahin karegi'.woh mujhe chodke nahin jaa sakti'.kabhi nahin'mein usse jaane nahin doonga'.!!!!!!!"













Veer smiled at his confession and asked,"Tumhe chodkar'yaar tum kisski baat kar rahe ho mein us ladki Geet ke baare mein kar raha hoon'!!!!"Now Maan was totally restless and said,"Nahin'woh mujhe chodkar nahin jaa sakti'.!!!!"Veer said,"Yaar..tu kiski baat kar raha hai'.!!!"Maan still said,"Woh mujhe chodkar nahin jaa sakti'..!!!!"Veer asked,"Lekin uska pati tu thodi hai ki tu aise baat kar raha hai'.!!!!"Maan anger towered and held Veer's collar and said,"Woh sirf meri hai..samjhe tum'woh mujhe kabhi chodke nahin jaayegi'.!!!!!!!"Veer was a bit alarmed seeing Maan's anger and said,"Theek hai'woh nahin jaaeygi'ab shaant ho jaa'ghar chalte hai'.!!!!"Maan said immediately,"Koi zaroorat nahin tu hotel mein teher ja'.!!!"Veer tried to argue,"Lekin'..!!!!"Maan said angrily,"Bolana'..!!!!!!!"Maan went from there while Veer said smiling to himself,"Yaar..tu usse behad pyaar karta hai fir bhi tu usse door hai kyun'.ab toh Geet ko ehsaas karwaana hai'.lekin kaise karoon'.ab toh ye Maan mujhe ghar ke ander bhi aane nahin dega'.!!!!!!"













Maan came back KM alone and saw both Geet and dadimaa sat ready in the sofa as if they are waiting for guest.Maan asked,"Kya huva aap dono aise kyun baithe ho???"While dadi searched for Veer and asked,"Maan'..Veer kahan hai'aap unhe yahan nahin leke aaye???"Maan said rudely,"Nahin dadimaa'usse ladkiyon ke peeche bhaagne mein kahan fursat milegi'!!!!"Dadimaa said,"Lekin beta..aapne toh kaha tha ki aapke saath chutti manaane aa rahe hai'.kya huva beta..aap naraaz hai unse kissi baat ko lekar'.!!!!"Maan was abt to speak when someone said from behind,"Arrey Dadimaa'.doston se mein zyaada der tak naraaz nahin rehta'!!!!"Dadimaa stood while Veer ran to her and hugged and touched her feet and said,"Kaise hai aap dadimaa'.!!!!"Dadi said,"Hum theek hai beta'.!!!"Veer saw towards Geet and asked,"Aap yahan'..aap Maan ki secretary haina???"Maan who was suspicious abt Veer's intentions now was surprised that he talked to her casually while Geet smiled and said,"Jee haan'.!!!"Then Dadi told,"Aur'.humaari bahu'Maan ki patni'.!!!!"Veer nodded and gave a warm smile to her while she returned back to him.Veer who was seeing Maan's expression decided that he'll make Maan confess that he loves Geet crazily.Veer held his ear and gestured sorry to Maan.Maan saw Veer's innocence and gave a nod meant jaane de.













Veer and Maan's family sat to have dinner while Geet stood to serve them.Veer wanted to make Maan even more jealous so he held Geet hand and said,"Geet tum bhi baitho na hum sab apna apna kaam karte hai..aur yahan bhi wahi karte hai'.!!!"Maan who saw Veer's hands on Geet's hands felt jealous while Geet noticed his gaze on her hands and she slowly freed her hand from Veer's grip and said,"Jee haan'.!!!!"Geet was abt to sit beside dadi when Veer said,"Arrey Geet tum wahan kyun baith rahi ho dai ke pass'tum yahan baitho Maan ke paas mujhe dadi se dher saari baatein karni hai'.!!!!"Geet was abt to speak when Veer asked cutely giving his cheeky smile,"Wont u mind'.???"Geet smiled and nodded no innocently and sat beside Maan seeing on the ground.Geet served herself and started to it when Maan moved his hand to serve the parathas when Geet too moved her hands when the're both hands rubbed each other.Both felt a curent run down their spine and Geet immediately withdrew her hand and saw ground immediately not meeting his intense eyes which had turned into dark ones due to the rubbing of her hand.














Maaneet felt awkward while Veer and dadi was busy chatting each other but Veer was pretending and was eyeing Maaneet from the corner of his eye.Geet asked composing herself,"Aapko paraatha chaahiye'..!!!!"Maan nodded yes to her while Geet took the paratha and put it on his plate.Maan who saw Geet intently noticed a slight red hue on her chubby cheeks and it was formed due to their rubbing of hands while he felt calm seeing the red hue and he gave a naughty smile.Geet was fida seeing his naughty smile and she drooled over him.Then only Maan felt someone's legs poking on his feet and it was none other than Veer's'Maan doubted and saw it was going towards Geet's feet when Maan stabbed it strongly while Veer's eyes filled up with tears due to pain but he smiled forcefully and withdrew his leg.Maan glared at him while Veer pleaded pouting his lips.Every moment with Veer's advance towards Geet was making Maan jealous and suspicious that he sat to drink alcohol.Maan remembered today's whole events and went towards Geet's room after their dinner and everyone r sleeping sound in their room.












Maan kicked Geet's bedroom door holding an alcohol bottle and saw around him entering inside'.Maan was in extreme anger becoz of the jealousy'..while Geet wasnt there and he heard the shower sound from the washroom'..Geet opened her washroom door and came outside wrapping herself in white towel.Maan froze to death seeing the epitome of beauty which was walking in front of him not glancing towards him.












Maan saw Geet's milky white skin which was shining like the moon white color and her hazel eyes'which had the world's innocence made him melt'.Maan forwarded towards Geet with baby steps and stood in front of mirror.Geet saw Maan in the mirror and gasped and saw towards him with total shock and fear that she started moving back.











Maan started coming forward while Geet moved backward totally scared becoz today he was drunk and his eyes were red with anger'.is it anger or jealousy'.she couldnt recognise it.Geet gulped the saliva and asked having an enormous courage,"Aapko kya chaahiye'..aap aise kyun aa rahe hai mere paas????"Maan who saw her hazel almond eyes dint answer her and drowned himself in that innocence'..














Maan moved and opened her hairs which were tied to tight bun and smelled her shampoo which drove him crazy'..Geet inhaled his alochol mixed masculine scent which made her breath caught half way and she felt her body warm even though she had cold shower now only''.Maan lowered his face and read her every wrinkle which were forming due to fear on her face.









Then Maan eyed her supple lips which had the droplets of water still'he was so much jealous of those droplets which were kissing her supple lips without any restriction'..a possessiveness dawned inside him and he lowered to suck those water droplets'''

Precap-What do u think what happens??????😉




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Posted: 12 years ago
me first .
wow fab update dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.
loved jealous maan a lot.
can't wait to read next part.
continue soon dear.
Edited by lehr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantabulous maan J and insecure and veer decided to bring them together and dining table scene was too good aur maan phirse drunk aur app ne correct time break laga di
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow maanu missing geet hmm😆😆
veer kya naam diya exchanged biwi🤣🤣
veer's plan making maanu j succeeded 😆😆
maanu j y maanu y u r feeling j 😉😉
veer teasing maanu
oye veer samhal ke
pta chla ur seriously injured n admitted in hospital🤣🤣🤣
n veer khud apne foot pe kulhadi maar li
ab schi maanu wont allow u in house🤣🤣
bt veer kmaal ka banda hi yaar
plz veer u r only hope plz made them realized na how much they lv eachother
oops maanu again drunk n in geet's room
precap- waiting

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