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PART 05


Maan dint give any moment to talk to her and ran immediately avoiding her and Geet went to the college to attend the classes as she had got permission from dadimaa.But before Geet was going to college she got a phone from someone and after listening to the speaker she was so worried about the matter.



Geet had got the news that her aunt Pammi is not gonna pay her yearly fees to continue her studies and from the college she got the phone to pay the fees which was pending till now.Geet was worried so much about her studies as she dint had any money to pay and she was aware that if she asks Maan about this then he's not gonna give her any money and she knew that he misunderstands her.














She was totally confused and went to college.There Geet met her best friend's Rishi,Armaan,Mehak and Ridhima who gave ideas to her to work in part time job.Geet was so happy that she got the solution to the problem and finished her classes and went back to KM.Geet asked Nakul about the previous days newspapers and collected it and went to her room to search the jobs.Geet was busy with some work and dint notice Dadimaa entering her room.











Dadimaa stood seeing Geet observing her actions as she was circling something from the markers and she was dialing some people.Dadimaa saw her actions and asked slowly,"Bete...aap kya kar rahi hai????"Geet shuddered with the sudden voice and she looked up to see it was dadimaa and gave a nervous smile and asked innocently,"Jee...!!!!!!"Dadimaa asked sweetly,"Bete aap is newspapers pe markers se circle kyun kiya hai news ko?????"Geet stammered,"Woh...woh...woh...!!!"











Dadimaa felt something fishy as Geet was stammering and took all the newspapers for closer look and was shocked and asked,"Bete aap job dhond rahi hai...lekin aapko itni jaldi job dhoondneki kya zaroorat thi...aap abhi bhi pad rahi haina beta...!!!"Geet stammered,"Woh...woh...chachiji ne is saal mere annual fees nahin bhari hai...aur mana bhi kardiya...isiliye us fees ko bharne ke liye mein job dhoond rahi hoon...please aap mana mat keejiyega...!!!!"Dadimaa was totally shocked,"Lekin bete..aap is ghar ki bahu hai..aapke liye yeh paisa hum kya kaha tha kya kharch nahin karenge...rukiye hum aapke college ke principal se baat karenge..hum us college ki trustee hai...!!!!"














Geet was now totally scared and was hesitant and said,"Nahin dadimaa..woh mein apne pairon par khada hona chaahthi hoon...aur yeh dekhiye mujhe do company yon ne job ka offer bhi diya hai ek Shinde industries ka aur doosra Khurana industries ka..aur is Khurana industires mein salary bhi achchi hai 4,000/= rupye..isme aadhi meri fees bharne mein lag jaayegi aur aadhi mere liye bach jaayega...kyun dadi...!!!!"












Geet saw her eagerly and excitedly.Dadi was so hurted hearing her job matter but was so happy that she was called in her own company so dadi dint told about this news and gave approval to the part time job.Next morning Geet got ready and got excited and she went to Shinde industries first for interview.But in Shinde industries..the job was given to another girl and Geet went to Khuranas hoping that she will get the job.













Geet walked towards the Khurana office slowly holding her certificates for secretary job.A girl dashed to her and her certificates fell to the floor.Geet dint say anything while that girl said politely,"Sorryji..woh mein nahin dekhi...!!!"She helped Geet lifting her certificate and Geet saw the girl who was munching the chips.That girl gave a pleasant smile to Geet and said,"Aap kaun ho ji????"











Geet said politely,"Woh mein secretary ke interview ke liye aayi hoon ji...!!!!"That girl smiled at her and said giving her hand,"Helloji..mera naam Pinky hai...!!!"Geet shook her hand and smiled and said her name,"Geet...!!!"Pinky smiled too but on that time she got a phone in reception so she went to recieve it instructing Geet to wait near boss's office.Geet innocently went towards the office and sat on the near by sofa glancing around her curiously.











One candidate came from the boss's cabin feeling totally flustered and went from there cursing...Geet got nervous and she shivered in fear.Next was her turn and she walked inside the cabin holding her certificates carefully and said nervously,"Good morning sir...!!!!"The man had turned his chair due to anger and he turned towards her and both were shocked.Geet saw the man and was shocked as it was Maan..and Maan was shocked to see Geet there.












Firstly he was angry due to previous candidate who was gawking at his handsomeness instead of answering his Q's and now he saw Geet here which made him total anger.Maan said angrily,"Tum...tum yahan kya kar rahi ho..!!!!"Geet was scared becoz of his anger and stuttered,"Woh...woh..mein interview...!!!!"Maan said angrily,"Interview...interview...ke liye aaye ho...nahin nahin..is company mein ghusna chaahthi ho...taaki tum mere zindagi mein permanently raho...!!!"Geet said,"Nahin Maan...!!!"Maan glared at her hearing the word Maan from her lips for she gulped her saliva and said,"Mera matlab hai sir...woh mujhe kuch...!!!!"













Maan said angrily,"Tum...tum kya..yahin kehne aayi ho ki ab tum Geet Maan Singh Khurana ho aur is company mein kaam karne ka poora haq hai tumhe...!!!!!!"Geet nodded no vigorously while Maan said angrily,"Jao yahan se..mein tumhe koi job nahin dene waala..kya pata tumhaari behen ki tarah tum bhi dhoke baaz nikli to...aur waise bhi tumhaari behen ko kya yahan meri zindagi barbaad ho gayi uske wajaise jab se mein tere saath shaadi kee hai...!!!














Geet's eyes welled up hearing the harsh words from him and she ran from the office totally hurted.Maan saw her teary eyes and fell restless but dint know the reason of this restlessness.Geet came back to home and ran inside her room and opened her wardrobe and took her parents photo and started crying and said,"Papa..mumma..kyun aap mujhe chod diya is duniya mein mujhe bhi leke jaate apne saath...mujhse koi pyaar nahin karta maa..mein sabke liye ek boj hoon...ek boj...!!!!And started crying holding her parents photo.













Dadimaa saw Geet crying and dint know what happened in KC and phoned up to Pinky to know about it.When Pinky told that she was crying when leaving Maan's cabin then she thot something have happened and came to Geet's room to comfort her.When Geet got to know dadi's presence then she wiped her tears and told lies to her that she got job and escaped fm the old lady.Here Maan was feeling totally restless and when he got calm after sometime then he was cursing himself for scolding her so much.But he wanted to know that why she came outside to earn..and also thot is it a cheat by her or something else.Maan came back to with dadi since he dint had any courage to talk to Geet after the office confrontation.












But Geet wasnt in the home she had gone back to her maayka for pagphere and Maan got relief away from her for the first time.Man thot he got freedom to think about his life but he felt totally restless and when he talked to dadimaa then she cursed him when he confessed what happened in the office.Dadi shouted at Maan angrily,"Maan..aapki himmat kaise huyi Geet se is tarah ki baat karne ki..bete woh kitna ro rahi thi jaante hai aap...jab meine usse poocha toh unhone kuch bhi nahin kaha sirf ye kehdiya ki unhe job mil gayi...aap jaante hai Geet ko college se baahar phekna chaahthe hai fees na bharne ki wajaise aur shaayad Geet apni maayake isiliye gayi hogi naaki pagphere ke liye nahin...!!!!"After knowing the truth Maan cursed himself for scolding Geet..she only came there to work and pay her burdens in her life and eat her food with her earnings but he dint think about that and scolded her without any mistake.













At night Maan cant sleep due to the guilt and thot of asking apology for her but Geet dint ask him further about this any more.Next morning Maan got up and rehersed to ask sorry to her and dialled her home first but he cut the call before it rings and when he tried several times but cant put up the courage to ask her then he banged his hand to his head for being nervous.At last he decided to ask apology from her and was abt to dial her home number then he got Adi's number from the office reminding his lecture in college.Now he got the oppurtunity to ask apology to her and got ready himself and went to their college.Everyone attended the class becoz of MSK and most of them r girls who were getting even more pretty for the lecture.













Seeing the hustle and bustle Geet asked one of her classmate about this then she answered that the most handsome and most eligible bachelor of the country is coming to their college to take a private lecture about the interior decoration.Geet asked his name but her classmate blushed furiously and dint say his name.Geet was puzzled about this but she went to the principal's office and pleaded the principal to give her time to arrange the money.But on that time the saviour came as Armaan who always loved her so much.Armaan paid her fees and they both went for the private lecture to attend.But this was seen by someone and he was Maan Singh Khurana who stood there trying to control his anger.












Maan felt some kind of anger on that Armaan as he was the one who ruined their suhaagraat and came to class to take the lecture.The principal introduced Maan to the class and left him to take the class.Geet was totally shocked to see Maan there who was giving lecture to them.Geet tried to glance his wide eyes but Maan avoided giving a small smile to those girls who were drooling over him during the class.After sometime Geet accepted defeat and concentrated on his lecture which made him even more anger.Maan finished the lecture and went from there but he heard Armaan's and Geet's convo...








Geet:Armaan..thank u mein tumhaara ye ehsaan zindagi bhar nahin bhooloongi..mein jald hi kaam dhoondoongi aur tumhe tumhaara paisa waapis dedoongi...!!!!"




Armaan said,"Please Geet..tum aise kyun bol rahi ho..dekho mein tumhaara dost hoon..aur dosti mein..no sorry and no thank u...!!!!!Dekho...tumhaari course end tak mein pay karne ke liye tayyaar hoon...toh tu tension mat le...!!!!"






Geet:Nahin Armaan..mujhe apne pairon par khada hona seekhna hoga..jab mujhe part time job milegi tab mein tumhaare paise pay kardongi uske baad hum dono zindagi bhar dosti ka rishta nibhaate rahenge...!!!!"







Armaan patted her shoulder in comforting way while Maan got jealous seeing his hands on Geet's shoulder.Maan went back to home and Geet dint came and insisted dadimaa to be there in her maayaka but the truth is she never went to her maayaka for pagphere as Pammi wont leave her if she sees Geet in her house.Geet had gone to her best friend's house Meera Sawant who was her childhood friend.












Next morning Geet went in search of the job while Maan feeling total restless missing her presence.Maan went to Mittal's for a meeting when he saw Geet sitting in the office for a job interview.Maan saw this and went inside which was unaware of Geet and had the meeting with him and went from there.Here Geet was sitting waiting for the interview while the peon told them to go now as the candidate was selected for the job.










In disappointment Geet walked past the Maan's car who stood seeing her walking lifelessly.Maan tried to stop her but Geet was not in her present world and was walking holding her certificate when a truck came towards her horning loudly.Geet saw the truck and was shocked and rooted to the spot out of fear and truck came to hit her but not anymore as a strong pull made her jerk her and she landed on the rock hard chest.










Geet was totally shocked and saw a pair of big brown eyes spitting fire on her.It was none other than Maan who saw her total fear and concern on her eyes.










Maan shouted,"Geet paagal ho gayi ho...tumhaari dhyaan kaha rehti hai...agar mein nahin hota tumhaara kya hota jaanti bhi ho?????"Geet dint say anything and his harsh words came into her mind and her eyes welled up and tears poured down and stood far away from him and silently walked towards the road lifelessly.Maan pulled her once again and said,"Geet...gaadi mein baitho...!!!!"











Geet dint say anything but now Maan lost his patience and pulled her inside his embrace and glared at her.Geet tried to wiggle but her struggle was futile and Maan lifted her on his strong arms and made her sit inside the car and put the seat belt immediately.Geet dint say anything as he drove towards Singhania residence when she spoke softly but painfully,"Mein pagphere ke liye chachi ke yahan nahin gayi thi...!!!!"Maan stopped the car immediately and asked with shock,"To phir kaha gayi thi???"












Geet answered innocently,"Mein meri friend Meera ke ghar mein thi...aur aap mujhe vahin chod deejiye mein vahin rahoongi aur aapko koi takleef nahin hogi...mujhe job dene se aur naahi mere shakal dekhne se...aaj se mein aapko bother nahin karoongi...aapko meri wajaise paise ya kuch bhi kharch karne ki zaroorat nahin aur naahin aapko mein cheat karoongi...aap araam se apne zindagi guzaar sakte hai mein aapko koi bhi taqleef ya parehan nahin karoongi...!!!!"Maan was totally shocked hearing her words..but her words made him feel totally restless and said slowly,"Dekho Geet..tumhe mujhse bachke...ya chipke rehne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai aur mein tumhe mere office mein meri secretary ki job de raha hoon tum wahan kaam kar sakti ho...!!!!!!"











Geet was now extremely suspicious and asked painfully,"Aap woh johhta inzaam nahin lagaayenge na...us din ki tarah...mein sirf wahan kaam karne aayi thi in fact mujhe pata bhi nahin tha ki woh aapki company hai agar pata hota toh mein aapke saamne kabhi nahin aati...please aap mere baare mein us tarah mat sochiye...kyun aap itna dard de rahe hai..agar aapko meri shakal nahin dekhni hai toh kehdeejiye..pls aise baar baar taane mat maariye...pls...!!!!"Geet folded her hands and pleaded in front of him.Maan saw her folded hands and he immediately lowered her hands and said,"Ye sab kya kar rahe ho...dekho mein us din ke liye maafi maangta hoon...woh..mein kuch zyaada hi..am sorry...!!!!"Geet was abt to interrupt his apology when Maan nodded no to her and made her to shut her mouth.





Maan started his car and drove while Geet saw his face intently and studied his face curiously.



Precap-Sasha:Geet tum chup raho...!!!"

Geet:Sir,ye project jo hai woh middle class logon ki hai..ye woh log hai jo apne zindagi bhar ki kamaayi se ghar khareedna chaahthe hai...




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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear.
felt bad for geet.
precap is interesting.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! that was one awesome update!!

Hmmm this Pammi is such a …..

Gos Poor Geet!!

She wants to earn money on her won and pay the college fees…

And Maan again misunderstood her!!

Uff those hurtful words must have pierced Geet's heart!!

Poor girl!!

Glad that Dadima gave him a dose!!!

It was really necessary!!!

Armaan is a real sweet friend!!

Hope Maan gets J big time and realizes his feelings for Geet!!

Aww Loved the scene of car after Maan saved Geet from the accident!!

Glad that he gave her the job!!

The pre cap is really interesting!!

Am sure Maan will be impressed with Geet's ideas!!

awesome update dear!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

Wow!! that was one awesome update!!


Hmmm this Pammi is such a '..

Gos Poor Geet!!

She wants to earn money on her won and pay the college fees'

And Maan again misunderstood her!!

Uff those hurtful words must have pierced Geet's heart!!

Poor girl!!

Glad that Dadima gave him a dose!!!

It was really necessary!!!

Armaan is a real sweet friend!!

Hope Maan gets J big time and realizes his feelings for Geet!!

Aww Loved the scene of car after Maan saved Geet from the accident!!

Glad that he gave her the job!!

The pre cap is really interesting!!

Am sure Maan will be impressed with Geet's ideas!!

awesome update dear!!




Aww love u lots dear big hugs to u dear...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan




Aww love u lots dear big hugs to u dear...🤗


Love you too!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
finalyy update
yeee
mehnat rang layi😆😆😆
omg that chachi of her
gosh how could she
bt it said na wtever happen ,, happen 4 d best
geet now will work in her own company(ab she is mrs msk toh maanu ki har cheez uski hai na)
bt she is unknowm to that
maanu hawww insulted geet
morning mai he was feeling guilty n now shouting n again feeling guilty uff maanu😡😡
maanu angry or j seeiing armaan😕😆
😆bt chlo babaji thodi akal aayi maanu mai
h gave her his secretary post yeee..😆
n geet pleading maanu
awww how much she is hurt bt sab theek hoga when maaneet r togther
wow
me just lvd it..
superb n awesome


😆
Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous part dear aur pammi is such a cheap...
maan hurt geet agin alot simultaneously possessive and jealous towards her geet condition was worst ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very painful update loved maan and geet's confrontation
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part

finally some misunderstanding got clear and i hope Maan's ego will come between his heart and Geet
waiting for next part

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