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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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PART 03 WARNING 18+



When Maan opened d ghoongat then he got d shock of his life as it wasnt Sameera but Geet who was crying silently in front of him.Somewhere in his corner of his heart he was feeling rejoiced but major part was he was cheated and Maan was angry on Sameera's parents who cheated him and his family.Dadimaa was shocked and she brutally had a row with Singhania family and went fm there taking Geet with her as she some where accepted Geet as her daughter-in-law.But Maan never accepted Geet but he was always attracted towards her and he also disowned her and dint gave his name to her also.











Maan's POV-My state was like a betrayed and fooled man by Singhanias and i was angry...I went to my private gym and started exercising aggressively...My mind lingered on the scene where i was betrayed from Sameera...i thot she's my destiny but i dint know that my life is gonna change in one night.I was the husband of Geet now ..Sameera's sister..whom i had attraction which was so fatal..that i crossed my limit every time...this desires took over me so much..this venomous desire...i exercised aggressively still feeling the betrayal and when i was totally tired then i came back to me room where my bride was sitting with hooded veil hiding her face...











My blood rushed thru my body in my veins and my face turned red instantly and i held Geet fm her elbow and pulled her fm the bed and pushed her fm my room and slammed the door on her face.Then i leaned to my door calming myself closing my eyes when i heard the sobbing of her...i wanted to console her pulling her inside my tight embrace but my pain was towering and couldnt swallow the truth that he has been betrayed...what would this society thinks...but i was thinking abt d society for d 1st time...dint know what will be their reaction...but her sobbing started to grew louder and i couldnt tolerate it and opened it and shouted on her angrily,"Tumhaari problem kya hai...tum yahan se jaa nahin sakti kya...Q mere liye mushkile khadi kar rahi ho...!!!"











Geet was abt to say when she got a phone...her phone was on my bed inside my room...Geet ran inside and answered the phone...Geet got conscious when she saw d caller id and i saw her expressions which were changing and she adjusted her tone and said,"Hello...!!!!"It was her one of my friend Armaan who had phoned up to know his friend's state of mind after d fiasco which went on in d marriage...and i thot her as betrayer..i was seathing with anger and blinded with my anger that i thot that she has connection between her friend Armaan that i fumed with anger.











Geet answered,"Mein theek hoon Armaan...mein apne chaahne waalon se hi shaadi kiya hai...mein unse pyaar karti thi..aur aage karta rahoongi..tum chinta mat karo woh mujhe achche se dekh baal karenge...!!!!"I was baffled hearing her instant answer..firstly she had betrayed me and secondly she telling lies to her friend Armaan...I couldnt tolerate her presence and snatched her phone and threw it which landed on the bowl of water which contained candles and rose petals.











Geet saw him with shock and i said angrily,"Tum mujhse pyaar karti ho...!!!"Geet was trying to tell me something but i dint listen to her and pulled her to my hard frame and slammed my lips on her petal ones.When her petal ones touched my rough lips then i felt a current run down my spine but my anger towered and i crushed her lips inside my rough ones.Geet tried to push me but i was nibbling her lips harshly and sucked her honey sweet juice.Geet punched her small fist on my rock chest which made my skin burn becoz of the desires..venomous desire...Geet moaned between the kisses which made me insane and lifted her in my strong arms without leaving her lips.











Geet tried to free herself but i was so strong that she couldnt..I slammed my bedroom door fm my leg and carried her without leaving her petal like lips to my bed...I placed her and hovered on her and loosening her dress dori...Geet moaned and tried to push me which made my anger tower and bit her lips harshly for she gasped and my tongue entered inside her mouth...she was so sweet..and her mouth was full of honey sweetness...she had turned 19 this year which was making her beauty swelling as maturity was happening inside her body.I ripped her dress in swift moment my hands roamed on her soft milky skin...Geet felt this new sensation and she responded me..but i was getting wilder to her seeing her tenderness...my wild side was getting aroused and was coming in front of Geet...i left her swollen lips and feasted her neck which was soft and slender and i groaned badly when i felt her fingers on my muscles...i was getting aroused by her simple touch...Maan turned her and made him to face her back.Maan's fingers moved on her skin and it burned her and her chest started heaving back and forth.She felt a current run down her spine feeling his soft slender fingers which were dominating her to touch her skin.Maan nibbled her lips and sucked its honey sweet juice in urgency while Geet parted her lips melting in his touch which was creating a havoc inside her.Maan's tongue entered inside her mouth and plundered her treasure.She was so sweet that he wanted to eat her alive now only.A heat was produced inside both Maaneet's veins and Geet gripped Maan tightly as he was giving weight on her.Maan hovered on her rubbing his body which made her gasp as a current run down her spine.A fire was ignited inside the both of them and Maan's eyes pierced seeing her barrier.He ripped off her shirt immediately and saw her naked body with desireful eyes.Maan came on her and took her lips into the soul searing kiss while his hands was busy taking off her inside barriers.Geet's hands lingered on his back which made him a current run down his spine feeling her innocent touch.he took off his vest exposing his greek god body.Geet gulped down seeing his taut muscles and perfect shape of waist which was sweating becoz of the pleasure which Geet was creating becoz of her simple touch.Maan the got rid of his pant and inners and joined her naked and saw her with desireful eyes asking permission to proceed.Geet still tried to push him off which made his anger to tower.Maan got angry and took her lips angrily pinning her to his hard frame.He kissed her lips angrily and showed his pain and frustration on her lips.He bit her lips with frustration and pain that it's got bleeding and a lone tear escaped from those almond eyes becoz of the pain.Geet tired to resist his proximity but still she was melting away in his touch that she hugged him feeling extremely shy..a red tinge crept on her cheeks which Maan dint notice and he bit her bosom harshly.Maan kissed her lips passionately and broke apart to grab some air then he went and kissed her neck and sucked it.He bit her neck and licked it to soothe the pain and a moan escaped from those petal like lips.His hands went to her curves and started caressing it and squeezing it softly.Geet moaned feeling the sensation which was melting her inside his fire and he was craving for her love once again.Geet's hands went back and rubbed it sensually then pleasure towered inside him and he kissed her neck and bit it.Geet dug her nails moaning his name and Maan took her one curve and bit it.He then played with her another curve and kissed it biting it marking his possession.But still he was towered by his desires and anger which made her totally vulnerable to his passion.Her moan made him insane that he took off the duppatta immediately and kissed her milky soft slender neck and entangled his fingers on hers.Geet felt his wild passion which made her melt and she moaned his name which made him insane.Maan feasted her soft neck till his fill and left it making it raw red for which she winced in pain and pleasure.Maan once again came on her curves and held it with his rough palm and started stroking it totally giving pleasure to her.Geet moaned badly and he took her one mount inside his mouth and sucked it hungrily.Geet moaned as her nails dugged inside his flesh making him groan in pain and pleasure.Maan sucked her one mount till it was sour with his biting marks and bit her n****e making her moan badly.He was enjoying her moan with feasting her mount and left it when it was red with sour.Geet was breathing heavily and blushed when he was feasting her another mount.His hands were possessively stroking her mount and his erect m*****d was tickling her abdomen fm d barrier.Maan pulled her panty in swift moment and lifted her one thigh and entered inside her immediately.Geet gasped feeling the pain while he rubbed his palm on her soft curves.Geet's pleasure towered over pain and she moaned his name immediately and she encircled her legs around his waist.Maan made her sleep on the bed and entered once again feeling her warmth.Geet moaned and she bit her lips feeling the sensation while he rocked backwards and forwards making her pleasure tower.Her lips were swollen and he took it once again to bit it suck it and taste its honey sweet juice.Geet dug her nails feeling his inside her and a lone tear escaped from her almond eyes.Maan groaned entering inside her with deep powerful thrust and Geet moaned badly.But his anger had towered on her and he once agin entered inside with deep powerful thrust that Get screamed with pain.Geet pleaded for not taking anymore but he was blinded with anger and he forcefully thrust inside her once again and she sobbed harder feeling his throbbing m*****d.Maan dint realise her pain and he thursted inside her once again and collapsed on her pounding on her one last time with his wild passion.After some time she felt his snore who was sleeping on breathing on her neck softly and had a very content peaceful expression on his face.












Geet sobbed feeling d pain on her feminine parts and she sobbed silently and tried to push Maan fm her but he held her naked waist holding it possessively and she sobbed feeling his crushing finger as it was marked by his fingers.Geet saw upwards complaining to her babaji for giving this painful night as a gift of her marraige...she had forceful marraige and forceful suhaagraat where Maan was half-drunk and was tired with exercise and was angered and he nearly raped her but difference is that Geet too responded to his wild passion but still she dont wanted this.Geet tried to get up but his hard body unknowingly pressed her soft petite body that she cant get up so she closed her eyes to catch some sleep but was thinking tomorrow's Maan's reaction and she felt restless.But Maan was soothing her restlessness in his way and kissed her neck softly and stroked her hairs slowly to go to sleep.Geet dint had any choice and she closed her eyes tightly and went off to a deep slumber which was peaceful and her hands slipped around his waist in her sleep and he groaned badly and in his sleep still he gave another deep thrust and went off to a deep slumber. hugging Geet's waist possessively.





Note-Guys everyone asking to turn this to an ff so do u want me to turn this as ff please do reply and give me ur opinion...

Now guys i want 150 likes & 20 pages of comments for this in IF and FB likes as 90..or else i wont be giving this and stop it right away..if u wont like it and comment it...



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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first
this is hottt and passionate part dear ...
maan in his rage loved geet will be happy if it turned to ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
it force but responce awsem



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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
what a update

will be waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part

I feel little bit offened the way he claimed her but i know she respond him and that made relax...

And we want to convert this OS into FF

Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
plz end this asap...
coz i will leave if after one month...
and i want to read this fully before leaving
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Posted: 12 years ago
if everybody wanting it as ff...den its ok...but i want it as a ss...short n sweet with everything in it...its my opinion...

why maan done dis to geet...she is innocent...she had not betrayed him na...she was also betrayed by her sooo called family...m heartbroken becoz of maan...who tortured geet...

awesome n beautiful n hot update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly maanu behaved with her so rudely
bt he was nt wrong
ya he likes geet bt he was feeling betrayed
bt after hearing her confession
i mean indirectly 😉😉😉
bt she lied haina or its true 😕
wtever they dine omg
it was ☺️
bt geet uff maanu
morning
OYE YAAR
PLZ PLZ PRETTY PRETTY WALI PLZ NA
TURN IT INTO SS OR FF PLZZZ

Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part dear

dont stop writing this FF

its nice story want to read more

thanks for pm

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