VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 01

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

part 2
nice part...
but am attaboy confused...
Maan married Geet who was forced by Sameera for her selfish acts...
and Maan didnt accept Geet...
but is attracted towards her...
but what was the first part about?
AFTER 21 years?
if the first scene is about Maan's life then the second should be like BEFORE 21 years right?
and Geet killed herself?
is this the past?
cont soon dear...

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

maans past is painful...

amazing update...

loved it alot...

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dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

awesome update

loved it

intresting precap

continue soon dear

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najmaDG

@najmaDG

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Amazing OS !!Maan's past is so painful ...superb writing..
Maan is attracted to Geet but does'nt want to give his name😕Waiting for maaneet moments 😳

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Very nice story.

Part 1 ws way too hot.

Maan as kid had seen so much.
Pammi n geet bearing same surname... Any connection?

So maan hates geet.

One query: its stated 21yrs later.
Wat ws maan's age in past track?

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

good part. Oh maan had a painful part. when he saw his father treating his mother harshly how can he treat Geet like this.

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

hushhh so finally he is her husband only 👏

hushh u dont know how much i love u for this!! ❤️ u gave a real relieve today 😆

how much his mum might have gone through by the cruelities of her husband...he sold her 😡 the bloody ba**** such ppl are 😡 goddd i dont know how the hell to word who do such sins

where is his mum?? n where is his father??

godd dadi was there

aoww he was attracted towards her since beginning

but couldnt voice as he knew his limits

but still the destiny is hight to play role in match makings...

hushhh that sameera ki t main 😡 😡

but geet ne kyu nahi kuch bola uss banderi ko...

sheeshhh uss kamini ki wajhaa se Maan dint even gave his name to Geet

that's why she is Geet singhania not Geet M S Khurana

aoww would love how will he give that place to her 😉

waiting for the next update

n loveee u lots...u gave the best relieve to this poor soul of mine 😆