[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89]

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Amazingly written..!!

It din click that Maan had written the lines on the card for Geet..n put the card for her only...such a huge MU..

Glad its cleared now...n finally her motor mouth is open before Maan too...😆

Loved it..!!

N now that it has ended..feel really sad..!

Going to miss this very badly...

But the end was beautiful...!! Seriously enjoyed it..!!

Glad to hear that your doing well...take care..😳

Edited by -bansi- - 12 years ago

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Omg.. This is the most amazing peace of writing... A complete rollercoaster... I ws so scared poor Maan will b heartbroken even though geet luvs him due to lack of communication... I luv luv luv maan.. N geet , she ws super cute... Fabulous work... Do write more on Maaneet...

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Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

I fell behind with this story so decided to re-read it all again, it still made my heart churn with the raw emotions and love that was so beautifully portrayed all the way throughout.

I'm so relieved everyone got their happy ending after all the misunderstanding and confusion, yay for non sadism!

I would ask for an epilogue because I want to see how Maan & Geet are with each other now they know how the other feels, but the beauty of their story is the fact that it was hidden and unrequited throughout, and not quite completed at the end.

Gah I hope this makes sense. My brain is frazzled. But yes, I adore this story very much and will revisit to re-read many times.

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Take care of ur health

it was a beautiful end...night is symbolic here, here it didn't meant end of the day, it meant d starting...Geet first met Maan closely in d night only before that they used watch each other from far & two nights after that they discovered each other's feelings so their relationship began in night only

Hope u recover soon & we get another Maaneet story

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Beautifully written.. What a confession between Maneet.. Amazing.. Sad it has ended..
Loved it.

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

My heart was thumping in my ears till rehan said these lines...

"Then don't you recognize my hand writing? For God's sake, my hand writing is barely legible and this," he said pointing out at the poetic lines on the card "this is no way less than calligraphy damn it"

At the end,"Rehan" is my favorite character in this SS..These precious words of his had saved five heart breaks.."four hearts of the characters of this story+one mine.."..😳..and i loved his style of proposing,,"Be mine!!!..Two straight words and they said it all.."You can imagine now how much i have started liking "Rehan" because a "poem lover" like me has chosen simple two words over "beautiful poetry on the card" by maan..Simplicity has its own charms sometimes..The end of this story of yours has proven this fact very promisingly..You have given such a simple end to story..There were no big promises..There were no big words shared between them,,There was no kiss or hug...Still the ending was most beautiful i have ever read..Basically it was not an end as you yourself has written.."and her fairytale started from then..."..

Thank you so much for giving such full of emotions story to us...

will be waiting for another one...😊No need to say how beautifully you write...as you already know you are my awesomest writer cum reader...😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago