wonderful..as i always say you are beyond perfection at depicting emotions...so i am unable to find more words for the way you have written it..I liked every single line,every single word,every single alphabet of this update..however some things i just loved which are
1)Ihina-geet's relation here.Geet is lucky to have a friend like her..do you have "ihina" in your life too???
2) This paragraph-
There was no reason at all. But then, she wondered as she raised her hand to touch her left side, beneath which, her heart lay, why does it pain so much if there was no reason? Why was this burning sensation in her chest? Why did she feel the earth to tear apart and swallow her whole, so that she could die peacefully instead of looking into those eyes. A sudden flash of his eyes, passed through her mind, and the small smile she held vanished as she felt the familiar hurt taking its surface.
wow!!!!đ
3) and this literally gave me goosebumps-
There was the shadow of someone, who was holding the camera, trying to capture the moment. The shadow almost touched her, almost but then the distance that lay between them was conspicuous.
little details like shadow of maan in the photograph and picture of rose placed between the books on that card, in your updates always make me speechless..how do you imagine these things???
At the end,i would request you to please update next part a little earlier than this one..I will be waiting eagerly..
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