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Posted: 13 years ago
I wrote this for One step from Hell! But, I thought this thread readers might also enjoy the moment...


This moment. This thing. Was it just as accessible to him as it was for me?

And when it would have been understandable to shove him off, I didn't find my will to do so.

What must have been awkward was intimate. What I must have despised, gave a strange comfort in its easy acceptance. When he must have been distant after having gone for all those months, his one touch could not have permeated farther inside me than it had then.

I feared that it was agreeable to both of us, that we could leave each other for a decade and then come back to where we had left without having any measure of change in us matter to the other. For this part of me, and I liked to think for him too, was always that same one touch away from awakening.
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

On a daily basis, particularly these days we hear so much about extra marital affairs because some people don't get what they want out of their marriages... Geet's is a typical such case, and for all we know, her fondness for Maan may simply be because he is the first man paying her attention... I think I would like to see her introspect her own feelings for Maan and realize that he means more to her than the first man who is paying her some attention the way she may enjoy... We have constantly discussed about her feelings and whether they are right or wrong, but I as a reader want her to realize this difference explicitly... do u know what I am trying to say? If not blame it on the medicines I am on 😆

Hmm quite true ... I too agree on this aspect.
Her feelings for him are quite un-understood as well as quite not reasonable to her too. She doesn't know where does he figure out in her life...
I too second on her going through the self introspection, but as of now I don't think she's even in that state of mind to analyse his status in her life - whether he's just a person so bound to her at present just cause of the attention he's giving her or whether she is really bound to him by a strange thread of belonging which just could have been shared between two souls meant to be there for each other always...
Liked the thought... lets wait & watch what's in store more in this FF, as H will come up with things that will justify each of their fellings... least I can hope so ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

I wrote this for One step from Hell! But, I thought this thread readers might also enjoy the moment...



This moment. This thing. Was it just as accessible to him as it was for me?

And when it would have been understandable to shove him off, I didn't find my will to do so.

What must have been awkward was intimate. What I must have despised, gave a strange comfort in its easy acceptance. When he must have been distant after having gone for all those months, his one touch could not have permeated farther inside me than it had then.

I feared that it was agreeable to both of us, that we could leave each other for a decade and then come back to where we had left without having any measure of change in us matter to the other. For this part of me, and I liked to think for him too, was always that same one touch away from awakening.

Ha Ah!!!!! beautiful ... words & thoughts convey sometimes a lot of depth without even letting one know how life changing they can be due to unconscious acceptance...😊
One touch away from awakening......
Edited by Onir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
shorten...but y...i like Vegas trip...

add dadi too...it will make it more memorable...

mayb she can feel like some1 elder like her granny is there to guide her...

ahh...i hate my ramblings...😡😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nothing is coming to me yet...

I have found my song for the next update of OSFH, but I'm drawing a blank when it comes to Cap ou pas Cap! 😕 Until I find my song, I doubt I can tell you what is coming in the update...
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Nothing is coming to me yet...


I have found my song for the next update of OSFH, but I'm drawing a blank when it comes to Cap ou pas Cap! 😕 Until I find my song, I doubt I can tell you what is coming in the update...

Okay...
No worries. I guess you usually come up with briliant updates after you come out off your doubts...
I guess waiting will be better...& will make the part more good one...😃 So it's till you find your song...
Edited by Onir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Onir and Jyothi...
You trust me too much with this story...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

@ Onir and Jyothi...

You trust me too much with this story...

me too! I would leave the adjustments to you too, carte blanche.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 32

"Did I tell you MK? That you both have that unique way of offering those sidelined insights that is usually ignored at first, but most certainly becomes the only explanation after its presented..." Meera got that right 😉

He simply gave her a quiet laugh. "It only seemed like a contemplation in tune with the mood of the music piece."

Needless to say, he'd seen her dance at the studio.😲 When did he see her & why as a reader have you not told us in details?


A mutiny she was staging to break away from those rules she'd imposed upon herself - not her Daarji or her mother-in-law. When she had no rhyme or reason for her random gestures, she couldn't help but accept what others gave then. And his explanation was a fine one at that. Beautifully explained 👏

You can dance & let go of yourself without rhyme or reason.

The update was short I wanted you to carry on

Loved how u explained her dance moves

I got no pm for this update 😭
Edited by undercoverhappy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I found these gifs...and I can't tell you how closely they mirror my moods while I'm writing an update or after I post it on IF...😆










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