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GOA,


Geet reached Goa, at once she enters te church all children rush to her , hugging her, kissing her. Geet was happy to see them,



Kid 1: Geet didi, we missed u so much

Geet kissed him : me too

Kid 2 : Didi again u will leave us

Geet : no way , I will be with u

All hugged her

Father : Geet beta cum first u take some rest , then u meet them

Geet : it is ok Father I want to spend some time with them,

Father smiles : ok my child

Geet saw te construction going on and was shocked

Geet : Father wat construction is going there

Father : it is school Geet

Geet was shocked and surprised : father school, but funds

Father : few days back some business man came , he took te responsibility Geet

Geet : wow tat is so nice Father, Guru ki dream

Father : hmm going to be true

Both stood watching te construction area

Father : Geet beta go to ur room, take some rest, we will talk later



Geet : ok father


She went to her room, her room which once she lived with Anni, it was te same how they left, she went to old memories , te way her life with Guru and Anni and smiles

.

Evening, Geet was sitting in te garden, lost in her thought


She went to her , past, how she came to te orphan , wen she is 5 year old, girl lost her parents, but father, Guru and Anni became her family , te way she lived her life with them but again fate brought her were from were she went. Again orphan, now no one is there for her to tease her, to play with her, to pour her heart to some one, tat some one will not be In her life. Tis only she got it from her childhood, no one . tears flowed from her eyes




Some small hand wipes her tears , Geet came back to real, and saw , a small boy wiping her eyes, Geet look at him , smiles and took him in her arms and made him to sit in her lap


Small boy : Geet didi why u crying

Geet : no no some dust went inside

Small boy : oh wait I will give punishment to tat dust,

Geet smiles and kissed him on his cheeks

Father came : Geet beta do u remember tis boy

Geet : how cum I forget father, Guru ki champ,

Father : hmm he , gave him name as MAAN, wen he came here as new born baby

Geet smiles : hmm father

Father : coz Guru love his brother Maan so much, same he will look after tis small boy like his life, he will protect him so much


Geet : hmm father

Father watch Geet for sometime, Geet stares at Small Maan, Father got a call and he went inside


Small boy drag Geet to play ground and he wants to play with her, Geet too made him to sit is te swing , then he drag her to another one, suddenly he slip and went to fall down, But Geet holds him


Geet : Maanji be careful , u will fall

Small Maan : Maanji didi wat u saying

Geet was shocked thinking at wat she just said ,




Here delhi,


Rahul ki mens tracing Anni , and her activities


Assi : sir we cant go near Anni

Rahul : wat u mean

Assi : sir tight security, she is getting out of her house at 8:45 in morning and and again to home at 4 clock, in between tis time she wont cum out of her col

Rahul : hmm then hire some mens inside te col

Assi : yes sir



KC,

Adi enter Maan ki cabin

Adi : sir, Rahul hired new mens , he is with some other plans

Maan : hmm give more security to km, mainly to Anni, some mens around Geet

Adi : but Geet is in goa,

Maan : hmm I talked with father, so there will be no problem

Adi : hmm, and u Maan



Maan looks at him

Adi : I want my friend's safety too, he left te cabin



Maan look at his retreating figure and smiles






Goa, a week passed , Geet was stiil lost In her thoughts,



Father was worried to see Geet like tis, he want to see his old Geet , who wont sit In a place for sec too, makes everyone 's day, but now sitting like statue,


Father went near Geet and sat beside her , tap her shoulder , Geet came back to her sense

Geet : hmm father

Father : wat u thinking Geet

Geet : nothing father, im just looking

Geet : father, now te whole sourrounding changed, wen we were there , tis was not there, she was going on babbering some thing to divert te topic

Father watch her , Geet pretend to be normal,



Father : Geet do u love Maan

Geet was froozed hearing , and shocked and looked at father



Geet : father , she eyes shed te tears like how he can read her

Father : Geet beta , I have been seeing u from 5 year old kid, who will run to me for each and every small thing, but now u have grown so u don't need ur father ki need any more naa

Geet : no father it is not like tat, tilt her head down

Father : Geet do u remember, me te one who realize ur love for Guru at first,

Geet nodes her head , and rest her head on his shoulder

Father caress her hair: u know Geet te same love I have seen I ur eyes again wen u look at Maan, wen he said u to leave

Geet closed her eyes and tears flowing from her eyes



Father : Geet beta why u stopping urself, pour ur pain to me, , why u hiding urself geet , say me wat is stopping u

Geet : my fate father

Father looks at her ,

Geet : im scare , father my fate took my all happiness , I cant bear it father, again I cant bear one more loss



Father : why u think like tis Geet

Geet : then wat I will think father , I lost my parents wen I need them , I lost Guru who was my dream , I cant lose Maanji, I lost everything father who ever I love, all will leave me at one stage wen I need them, so tis time I decided to leave everything before my fate takes it from me




Father : Geet ur parents left u, thinking u will be safe in Guru , he left u he knows u will be happy with Maan, his last wish u and Maan should be together, he know u will be safe In his arms, tats why he want u both to marry.


Geet : father

Father : yes Geet u deserve to live happily, why thinking abt ur past , now break ur wall and see u having a lovely life , with Maan, Geet do u think Guru will be happy wen he know tat u hurt Maan


Geet looks at him: but Father I cant move on

Father : ok Geet u say me one thing, do u love Maan

Geet : I don't know father, but I feel secure with him, but I fear him, I don't know abt him,

Father : Geet beta , u ask tat day who fulfilled Guru ki dream, tat school construction

Geet looks at him,

Father : Maan

Geet was shocked : Maanji




Father : ahan Maan , started tis work, he came here after Guru ki death , he ask me abt all Guru ki dreams and want to fulfill everything. He ask me name Guru ki name for tis school, he also ask me to not say tis to any one, but I want to say to u, to know how Maan is . and to tell Guru have hand over u to a safe hands.he is very good person Geet, outside he looks hard like stone but inside he is like our Guru so soft,


Geet looks at him

Father : Geet still u want to run away from him, now u have to decide wat u want, I cant see u like tis Geet


Geet : I cant think anything at now father , my life became a HELL, REAL HELL



Father : but u will soon see ur HEAVEN IN HELL

Geet looks at him, Father hugs her and soothe her, Geet started to cry

Father : don't worry Geet everything will be ok

Geet : hmm father

Geet (st) : will I deserve a life again, but wat abt Maanji , but I don't belong to his world, babaji show me a way



DELHI,

Anni ki college,

Sameera was so sad , Anni sense nowadays Sam was so restless and sad

Anni : sam im watching nowadays u lost some were wat happen



Sam : nothing Anni

Anni : sam look at me and say wat bothering u

Sam hugs her and started to cry, : I miss my mom, Anni

Anni hugs her and soothe her: it is ok Sam, ur mom is living with u, im there for u

Sam broke te hug : but I wont be there

Anni : wat

Sam smiles : im going to dubai with my father, day after 2mor and settling there

Anni : wat r u serious

Sam : yes Anni , im leaving

Anni : u r saying now

Sam : no Anni it happens in hurry, my dad inform yesterday only, so im so upset to know my dad ki plan

Anni : hey don't worry we will be in touch ok, now smile , I cant see my friend like tis

Sam smiles at her : Anni my last wish before leaving u

Anni : wat but don't say last wish, she turn her face folding her arms to her chest in her gussa

Sam smiles : ok baba sorry

Anni : hmm, ok wat

Sam : I want to spend today with u, we will go out

Anni thinks

Sam : pls Anni

Anni : bhai

Sam : call him

Anni : hmm ok

Anni calls Maan, Maan took it

Maan : wat Anni



Anni : bhai sorry to disturb u

Maan smiles : Anni ur my princess u can disturb me any time

Anni : bhai , tat wo

Maan : Anni don't hesitate wat u want

Anni : bhai , my friend sam leaving india , so she want me too spend my day with her today, can I go

Maan thinks : ok but u should do wat I say ok

Anni was so happy : ok bhai, wat ever

Maan : then fix ur Bluetooth and be in call with me

Anni : ok bhai, thanku love u bhai

Maan : love u too princess

Maan then called Anni ki BGS and instruct them to be with Anni


MALL,

Sam and Anni went to mall, they watch a movie then started to roam and enjoying themselves


Goa

Geet was restless from morning why she don't know, she was praying to her babaji , she didt have her dinner and went to sleep

Delhi,

SAM dropped Anni , near km Anni get down from te car

Sam hugs Anni : I will miss u

Anni : I too will miss u so much

Sam : say hi to Geet also



Anni : hmm

They bid goodbye and Anni went inside KM,

Anni saw Maan was sitting in te hall

Anni : bhai

Maan : how was u day

Anni sat beside him and hugs him : so lovely Bhai, but i will miss her somuch

Maan caress her hair : hmm

Anni : bhai I miss Geet so much, my exam finished can I go to goa

Maan : no Anni not now , I will say

Anni : but bhai

Maan : Anni trust me, I will take u once everything settles

Anni looks at him : everything settles

Maan : I mean I have signed a new project, my enemies can take revenge so

Anni : hmm ok bhai , im going to sleep gn

Maan kissed her on her forehead : gud ngt


GOA,


Geet was sleeping and , was wriggling in her sleep, suddenly jerk and screamed : MAANJI




She holds her chain and started to sweat , : nothing will happen nothing, babaji why u doing tis to me again and again, I hate



She cant sleep , she took Maan ki pic from her bag and started to caress it.



Geet : Maanji

lye down holding it to her heart







PRECAP : DANGER

Next part - 24,PG 115


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
meee
unres

wow nyc chap😊
geet s hesitant to accept maan..
sam s so nyc n sweet..i think she s lying abt her trip..
precap s scary
Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part.
Geet in goa
FAther trying to cheer her
Told maan fulfilling gurus wishes
N he made geet open up her fear to him
LOved sam..
Who is trying to save ani inspite of being villain s daughter she loves ani
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


so Geet went to Goa leaving all...she did right thing...she don't deserve anybody...she don't even think that like her Annie also lost her parents when she was small and then Guru was her only relation,her brother and when she got her other brother back then she have to loose Guru...but in all this she never get negative thoughts that what if this brother also she will loose...daadi can also think that she lost her son-DIL and now one grandson also so she can also think herself as curse...what about Maan...he is fighting whole life...saw his parents murdered in front of him...he tried to save his brother and sister and then lived his life as dead person...he also lost his parents and now when he got to know about his brother and sister then he lost his brother before even he get some happiness to be together with his brother...now he started to get some emotions because of Geet and she also left him...

if a person indulge self in any negativity then no body can save him... to move on in life we have to change our thinking process...

whom Rahul's men following...

why Sam is so sad...is she going to do suicide because her father's men will kidnap her instead of Annie...

what type of danger...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg danger in precap? What?? Btw nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update😊 awww geet in goa n father trying to cheer her up geet does nt want to lose maan as she lost evryone in her lyf 😭😭 geet feeling restless 😭 continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please sam ko kuch mat hone dena she is good
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
slowly geet will let go of her fear but if something happens to maan i think she will become stronger in her pov

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Posted: 12 years ago
dii love it you know I just love the way u explain title of this story seriously suit to the story in every manner.. and u starts to made ur poor reader cry with sad update just make them one again plz ... I was so scared when sam took annie out but thank god nothing happened or haa father making understand geet was so lovely supab dii
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Sam
Pls keep safe maan geet

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