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Geet look after Dadi , feed her te dinner and gave her te medicine, made her to sleep and came out, and saw nakul carrying coffee

Geet :Nakul kaka for whom u taking coffee at tis time

Nakul smile at her : for Maan babu

Geet : at tis time?

Nakul : yes beti , he will have coffee if he work late nights

Geet : hmm , ok then give me I will take , u go and sleep

Nakul : no beti , Maan babu wont like if some one disturb him wen he is in his study

Geet : it is ok kaka , I will take , u don't worry, u go and sleep,

Geet took te tray : good night kaka

Nakul : good night


At Maan ki room,

Maan was in his study working in his laptop, some one knock on his door

Maan : cum in,

Geet came in slowly , Maan was busy in his work so he didt see Geet,

Geet : Maanji ur coffee

Maan : ha Nakul give me,

He raised his hand to get it , but wen he didt get his cup for so long , he raise his head to see , but shocked to see Geet

Maan : Geet tum

Geet : Maanji aM I looking like Nakul kaka

Maan : wat?

Geet sat beside him : then wat I brought u coffee and u r calling me Nakul, showing her fake angry

Maan : hmm I didt notice Geet , I thought Nakul

Geet : hmm , gave te coffee ,

Maan was having his coffee

Maan : Geet did Dadi slept

Geet : hmm, Maanji tis ur study room

Maan was working in his laptop : hmmm

Geet : nice

Maan : hmm, Geet u didt sleep

Geet : no , I didt get sleep

Maan : hmm

Geet was bored sitting there wen Maan was engrossed in his work

Geet : Maanji , Maanji

Maan : hmm Geet

Geet : I want to talk to u, if u free

Maan kept his laptop beside and look at her

Geet : oh oh , im sorry Maanji

Maan : for wat

Geet : for not looking after others, I know Maanji, wat im doing is wrong but wat I will do, I cant forget Guru

Maan : Geet

Geet : pls Maanji I want to talk, she went near te window and stood

Maan : hmm






Geet : I don't know wat age im wen I came to FATHER ki orphanage , I only know I have three persons in my life, Father, Anni and my Guru , te way Guru look after me and Anni , if my parents were there they will also not do wat he did for me. I was so happy with him, she stops she started to cry


Maan near her : Geet

Geet : we were so happy, we were living in our small world , my whole life depends on my Guru and Anni , my dreams , my wishes all died wen Guru left me.If my Guru was not there im have been staying in orphanage like other girls.. he gave me life , he fulfilled all my wishes , now he left me, Once again I felt I became orphan, no one is there for me, no one.






Maan touch her shoulder : Geet we all are there for u

Geet , slowly rested her head on Maan ki shoulder


Geet : u know Maanji , he have so much dreams abt te kids in orphanage, he wont leave as for a sec too, he loves me so much, Maanji why my Guru left me , why he left me to face tis world alone, why







Maan hugs her and Geet to hugged him and started to cry, they stay like tat for some time, but sudden Geet came to sense and shock to see tat she is hugging Maan and Maan too hugging her , Geet suddenly pulled herself from him, Maan got shocked


Geet : im sorry Maanji im sorry

Maan : it is ok Geet , and don't cry,

Geet : hmmm

Maan : ok it became late u go and sleep

Geet : hmmm,

Geet went to her room : wat I did I hug Maanji , wat he will think abt me, oh babaji , he took Guru ki photo and hugs him and slept


Maan felt something nice wen she hugs him, but wen she just pulled herself, he felt some thing missing from him, he got confused


Maan(st) : I shouted at her , and gave pain to her wen she is already drowning in her own pain, but I have to bring her back, I have to give all things to Anni and Geet , wat all Guru will do I have do it..

He too went to sleep


Morning , all were sitting in te breakfast table,

Geet brought Dadi to te table,

Maan : Dadi u can have in ur room naa, why u stressing urself

Dadi : im not so old , now im fine

Maan : Dadi, he nodes his head

Anni : Geet cum we will have our breakfast

Geet : hmm,

Maan all te time staring at Geet and te way Geet and Anni chatting, his thought was broken wen his phone rings, he took te phone and started to leave te table without having his breakfast


Dadi : Maan wat happen have ur breakfast

Maan : no Dadi imp work I have to leave, he try to move, but he realize some one is holding his hand and he turn to see, it was Geet, Geet was holding his hand and eating her breakfast




Maan : Geet wat is tis, leave my Hand

Geet : no until u have ur breakfast

Maan got angry : Geet wat is tis

Geet saw his eyes, first little bit scared to see Maan, but gaining herself

Geet : don't show ur eyes like tis, first have then only I will leave , or else take me also were ever u go, ur wish

Maan : Geet leave me, I said

Geet : Maan see Dadi she too will not have her breakfast if u leave, and me and Anni too

Dadi who was going to sip her juice stop in te middle hearing wat Geet said

Dadi : ah I too don't want anything

Anni : yes me too I too don't want, im leaving to college,

Geet left his hand and stand to go : me too don't want

Maan got frustrated seeing all te womens who making him to bend




Maan : ok now everyone sit and have ,

Dadi : and u

Maan straighten himself : hmm me too

Girls started to giggle



Maan stares at them

Dadi : ok ok now don't stare at me, now I have two more in my team, so better be careful with us before glaring at us

Maan without saying anything started to have his breakfast

Maan : Geet and Anni u both go in one car

Anni : ok Bhai

Geet : No Maanji im leave today , I will be with Dadi ,

Anni : then I too want to stay with them

Maan : hmm

He left them


All three girls planning to spend they day

Dadi : so now wat we wil do

Geet : first u have to have ur medicines Dadi,

Dadi : Geet im ok

Geet : ah ur ok, tats why yesterday u fainted

Dadi : it little bit

Geet : no way , first ur medicines , then we will plan, wait Dadi I will bring it

Dadi : hmm ok

Geet left to Dadi room to get te medicines

Dadi : Anni I want to say u some things

Anni : wat Dadi

Dadi : wat u think abt Geet ki life

Anni : I cant understand wat u trying to say Dadi

Dadi : I want Geet and Maan together move on they life

Anni was shocked : its possible Dadi

Dadi : no but we have do it, Geet and Maan have to get they happiness back, only they both can give tat to each other , wat u think

Anni : yes Dadi I too want to see my old Geet back, but we have to do

Dadi : I have a plan, we will bring them close and give them some time together

Anni : how ,

Before Dadi says , Geet came with her medicines .Dadi winks anni to stop

Geet : Dadi now have it

Dadi took te medicines, then they started to watch movies


Evening , Maan returns and saw te whole mansion was so silent



Maan : Nakul were are every one

Nakul : Maan babu , they all are in upper living room

Maan : hmm,


Maan went to upstairs to living room and shocked to see all womens sitting in front of tv and watching some movies and enjoying





Anni : oh god see salman ki body

Geet : hmm, and his 6' packs

Dadi : and his muscles

Maan (st) : Dadi too, hmm, fuming to see them

Maan tap Anni ki shoulder, but she snap it and went te her dream land

Maan : wat happening here in his stern voice






Every one saw him who stood there folding his arms to his chest , but ignored and started to watch te movie, Maan got angry te way they avoiding him, so he took te remote and off te tv


Geet started to shout : who off and wen she saw Maan is having te remote

Geet : Maanji better u on te tv, climax scenes

Anni : ah Bhai pls on it naa,

Maan : no way it is time, Dadi should have her medicines

Geet : Maanji, it is only 7 clock so better give te remote or else

Maan : or else

Geet : u know Anni all mens will be angry on salman, coz they wont have his body naa, tats why, Maanji too feeling jealous naa

Maan : im not jealous



Dadi was enjoying they fight,

Geet : Maanji give te remote, im warning u

Maan : do wat ever u want but I wont give

Geet thinks for some time, but smirk and took te near by water jug and poured te water on him

Maan was shocked : Geettt


Every one started to laugh


Geet : I said naa, don't mess with Geet

Maan : wait I will see ,and started to chase

Dadi was happy to see them like tis


Geet was running and wen she slip and feel down, Maan try to catch her , but fall on her, both falls on te couch



















PRECAP-MAANEET IN RAIN


NEXT PART-16,63


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Geet sharing her pain with Maan n don't know when she hug Maan

Maan feeling nice in Geet hugs but shrug it of

Dadi n Aniee planning to bring Maaneet closer

Maaneet cute nok-jhok over TV remote n both Dadi n Aniee were enjoying seeing them

Geet fall on the sofa n Maan over her - ahem ahem

Continue soon dear
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
geet shared her pain with maan
dadi decided to bring maaneet closer
maaneet nok jok was too cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
🥳

aweee 22 cute di
geet told her feeling 2 maan😛😛
maaneet hug nd maan feeling something towards geet😉
bf table maan dont mess with girls
wanna see dadi nd annie paln 2 bring maaneet closer😃
awee remote just awesome🥳🥳🥳
maaneet in rain hayeee😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part nalini
geet trying to be normal for others..
her sharing her memories to maan about guru n anie..
loved it ..
both shared a hug..
geet started to tease maan..
n now everything is falling on its place..
geet throwing water on maan
n saying about salmaans 6 picks..
one day she will also see her husbands 6 packs then will forget salman..
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet was sharing her pain with maan
nd when geet hugged maan
maan felt complete
love maaneet nok jhok
waiting for dadi's plan to bring maaneet together
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Posted: 12 years ago
awes um part dear😊

geet sharng hr pain wth maan n their hug👏

geet orderng maan😆

love their nok jhok⭐️

geet pour water on maan😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful yaar..lovely update..geet is trying to come out from the grief..maan is trying to inviolve in family..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update👏 👏👏
Glad that geet shared her pain to maan⭐️
Loved the way maan consoled geet😳
Liked their nok-jhok😉
Precap amazing
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next

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