IN LOVE WITH STRANGER - UPDATED PT 10 PG 24

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

lovely update shona loved it so much so dheere dheere unki nazdeeki bhadti jaa rahi hai...hmm...👏

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

part 4
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u either post the link in the FF Daily Updates thread or pm us all ur stories once in while when u update or update the TITLE?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3151566/ff-daily-updates-thread-3-see-page-142

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maanluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

amazing update

but maan kya chupa raha hai

update soon

waiting eagerly

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow lovely update...now my maaneet will stay in geet's house for 15 days all alone, wow..geet and my maaneet ka date...lovely my maan is cooking for his geet..i love te update so much dear..

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supernasahu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Nyc update. 👏 👍🏼 👏

Maan kuch chupa rha hai.😕

Maaneet ghar mai akele hai...😆 😆

Maaneet ki date pr kya hota hai iska intzar hai...😃

Jaldi update dena...😊

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Janu maan kuch to chupa rha h.
Bol janu bol maan ne kya h chupaya.
Superb update

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Dona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

lovely update

thhanx for the pm...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Geet and Maan are getting comfortable with each other...

awesome update.,...

thanx for pm...

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

cute update 😊

i feel Maan is hididng something...

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

*IN LOVE WITH STRANGER-2*
PART-5

BOTH do breakfast nd aftr dat she went 2 library as she told 2 hm. She take 5 hours nd bring lot of books as she is a book worm. Maan was surprized seeing her love wid books.

MAAN:itni sari books sari holidays inhi ko pad k spend krni hai?

GEET:ye to sirf 15 books hai 1 week me hi khatam ho jayengi.

MAAN:wow i m impressed again.coz i dnt kno any girl of ur age havng so much love 4 books. Casually girl love 2 go 4 dates nd indulge in fashion only.

GEET:kitni ladkio ko jante ho Maan?

She enquired.

MAAN:kuchh ko to janta hi hu.

GEET:so kitni grl frnds hai?

MAAN:unfortunately 1 b nai.

GEET:dnt lied.dont tell me k tumhare jaise ladke ki 1 b g.frnd nai hai.

MAAN notted hs eyebrow nd cm closer 2 hr 2 whch hr body felt strange restlessness.Being an expert he can sences hs effect on hr. She gulped hr sliva wen he luk in hr eyes wid hs intense dark eyes nd askd suddnly.

MAAN:wat do u mean by mera jaisa?

GEET scared wid as much closness,bt she is strong enough so cnt shw hr feeling as easily.

GEET:i mean u r handsome nd enough gud luking.body shody b bna rakhi hai to ladkiya pakka marti hi hogi.

MAAN still made d closeness:madam ye ladkio ko impress krne k liye nai bnai.main health concious hu isliye.nd btw do u realy think i m a gud luking?

He asked wid such an intensity,dat made hr dumb. She felt hr breath struk in hr lungs nd voice caught in hr throt. Maan chuckled at hr condition nd felt gr8 how he strt affecting hr so much. Geet ws nt lyk othr girl who can fall 4 ny man. She is alredy 25 nd step towards 26 but still single hvng no 1 in hr life. Morover she was not allowed ny 1 2 cm as much closer 2 hm,bt dont kno how he strt affecting hr so much.

GEET cmposed hrslf instantly dont want 2 prove hrself weak in frnt of hm:hm thode bahut to ho hi.

MAAN step bak:thoda bahot hmm?

GEET:ha to or kya tm chahte ho main jhoth bolu?waise btaya nai kitni g.frnds hai?

MAAN:tume ye kyu janna hai?

GEET:lo maine to grnally puchha tha tume nai btana to mat batao.

She was about 2 move bt Maan made hr stop by holding hr hand.

MAAN:waise bta du meri koi g.frnd...(he luk in hr eyes)na thi na hai or shayd na hogi.coz mere jaisa boring insan ladkio ko psnd nai aata.

GEET:tm boring ho?

MAAN:yap.nyways aaj humari date hai so dont 4got dat.ok.

GEET:ya ya.

Bt nature playing anothr game.in evng rain start falling badly.
MAAN:wat happnd? Abi tk ready kyu nai hui?

GEET:coz bahar joro ki barish ho rai hai.

MAAN:so?

GEET:so mr.Maan i wnt 2 remind u dat Doc uncle warned u nt 2 drench ur swallod arm.so its nt safe if we go outside.

MAAN:ye to wada khilafi hai.

GEET:aww y u blaming me?maine thodi na krwai hai ye barish.

MAAN:wo sb main nai janta.Teji ne kaha tha tum mujhe ghumane leke jaogi or kal tumne b promise kiya tha.pr ab tm mukar rai hu.

GEET:hww 1 to main apka accha soch rai hu upar se ap mujhe hi una rahe ho.(She thot alot)rukiye aap apko date pe jana hai na.1min.

Maan saw hr cconfident eyes whch made hm fall 4 hr mor. She wnt nd brot smal round table. Den she places soft white satin cloth on it nd placed 2 chairs arond it. Den she placed canndles nd small vass on it. Maan sw he wid curosity.

GEET:now gave me only 30mins 2 complete dis.

MAAN:ok pr tb tk main kya karu?ok i know wat 2 do.can u show me ur book shelf?

GEET:ya sure cm wid me.(She tuk hm 2 hr rum nd shw hr book shelf)ya se jo b book chahiye le lo.

Maan luk at all:sherlok homes?

GEET:my fav.

MAAN:nw i gt k tm itni shakki kyu ho.us dinn meri itni enquiry kyu ki?

GEET:precautions r better den cure.(both laugh together)ab ap dekh lejiye tb tk main humari perfect date ki taiyari krti hu.

Geet wnt frm dere nd Maan search 4 hs intrest. Aftr half n hur she called hm. Maan cm down nd sw tables is now decorated nd she also cooked many thngs 4 both. He smiled nd came down tuk hr hand nd made hr sit on chair,den he sat in frnt of hr.

GEET:ab to maine apna promise pura kia na?

MAAN:i mst say u r vry commited.jo b tumara life partner banega,wo is duinya ka sbse lucky man hoga.

Both strt eating nd talking casually.

GEET:mujhe nai pta tha apko b buks ka shok hai.

MAAN:i told u main b boring hu.waise 1 benifit hua?

GEET:kya?

MAAN sho 1 pic 2 hr:wha buks search krte hue mujhe ye mila?(GEET's eyes popped out.coz it was hr childhood pic in whch she crying wid mouth wide open) i guess ye tumhari hi pic hai rite?

GEET stnd up nd tryng 2 snatch dat pic 4rm hm,bt Maan 2 standup nd raised hs hands 2whch it bcm difficlt 4 Geet 2 snatch dat pic.

GEET:Maan pls gv it bak2 me.

MAAN:Y?i thnk u luk vry gr8 here.realy vry funny.

GEET pouts nd moved 2 hm bt Maan strt runng nd Geet followd hm.Maan aage2 nd Geet pechhe2.lyk tom&jerry chase.

GEET:Maan ye glat bat hai.

MAAN:kyu?kyu?

GEET:tm aise nai manoge abi btati hu tme.

Both came in rum nd Maan stnds on bed nd she 2 chase hm.in deir struggle both falls.Geet was on hr bak nd Maan on hr...

PART 06-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3140434/in-love-with-stranger-updated-pt-10-pg-24?pn=15

Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago