FF: Almost Lovers (5) - Page 71

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Posted: 12 years ago
How beautiful...you have combined the best and the worst times of their lives together.The past incident was heartwarming while the present one is heartbreaking...

On one hand I can understand Geet wanting to move away from everything and trying to start anew, while Maan is still in the remnants of his past with a broken hope that he could have something that he killed with his own hands.The longing for the other and the emptiness in each of them is so evident.

Love is constructive yet so destructive...

I loved this line:

"So you finally left"

Though I would love this story to move forward, I know there's still a lot of past left to it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
awesome one
confession letter is lovely
thanx for the pm
cont soon
anupamachem thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice and intense update. Hope the distance brings them together. Do update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 36
awesome part dear...
sigh twas all going so beautiful between them...
how did Get come to know about his doings?
feel like Maan would have told her...
poor Maan...
hes so broken...
OMG the letter...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one..
She has mixed feelings for him like love n hate...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..well written..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Past was pleseant...both submerged in each other...feels vey nice
But in present they both are separated...she was doing what maan did to her...emotionaly breaking him
Why the letter is one line...how much painful this to maan
Now how will he find her
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Posted: 12 years ago
THEY WERE SO MUCH IN LOVE
BUT MAAN DESTROYED IT EARLIER AND NOW SHE COMPLETED THE JOB

WILL THEY EVER LEARN TO FORGIVE AND JUST LOVE
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...heartbroken for them...beautiful ...loved it...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update ! geet was right, unless all accounts are clear, their relation cannot move forward ! a resentment will remain between them ! they had to take a break ! now, wondering what would maan do ? give her time or go after her ? and was that all there in the letter... two lines... or more to come ...

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