FF: Almost Lovers (5) - Page 72

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Posted: 12 years ago
still cant blv hw one can hate her lvd one so mch...hw one can destry her closest one so badly...hw one can take revenge her lv whn she claimed she lvd him...ok he did so mny things bt whatever one does aftr lvng someone is it possible to destry him...give his so mch pain...dont knw really...wht will b maans nxt move wthout geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love how you combine a sense of so many emotions by bringing the present and past in each update. Absolutely brilliant!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well may be she is right... I mean after what he did with her... but they love each other .. so it hurts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
as usual.. im late with reading and leaving a comment
well.. what can i say.. im awe stricken like everyday when i read your wonderful updates..
the way you blend in the past and present using a lot of emotions is just beautiful.. always leaving me speechless.. truly speaking.. the way you write is just amazing..
you forever leave me wanting more.. and i think to myself "wow!!"
great update.. eagerly waiting to read more 🤗

by the way.. the last line was so beautiful and serene.. you obviously do know how to build up suspense 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for next part
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Past perfect, present perfect... in the way this story is progressing. You are one incredible writer. Maan and Geet's respective emotional quotient so exquisitely laid out. Absolutely amazing, riveting. Can't have enough of this story. Anxiously waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 updt ...want ti know how will he find her
Thnxx fo pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...a really beautifully painfull ff..cant just describe in words how i felt while reading it...it was ...i dont know..it showed me a diff face of love...hope ubupdate soon ..pls buddy and pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
TEASER:


Their honeymoon went by like a blur, yet some moments lasting for eternity. She would remember every detail but another part of her wanted to hold back time and soak in these precious moments that somehow would define their married life.

But it seemed that the honeymoon wouldn't end so soon. Life with Maan continued on in the same beautiful way, without any doubts or issues.

"Hey" He leaned in and kissed her right on the corner of her lips, which had broken into a small smile, "A penny for your thoughts"

"Only a penny?" She smirked even as she smoothed his hair. "They are far more expensive than that."

"Well, I'll pay whatever they cost" He reached forward to rub his thumb delicately across her neck. Even after months of being married it seemed that he had the power to melt her with his mere touch. "After all what could be more precious"

"Another day" She laughed, "No secrets today. You have to head off to work, while I have to work on one of the new projects"

"Fine" he chuckled and pressed a last kiss on her.

Geet knew that she should have said the words, I love you, but for some reason the words were stuck in her throat. Something was holding her back, something within her that was asking for a bit more time.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy to see you back after long time.Please update soon :)

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